ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 73

awesome

Terrace tale , that dialogue wt he heard was a major twist to d story (in the show)
Fst part raising many questns left me n shock at last. .shyam her bro ? ?
Omg u turned out the scene n2 totaly diffrnt. . Yaar tats amazing. . Wow superb. .
The way u potrayed anju here makes me feel gud. . Cos n d show i hated d cvs fo hw d sole focus was on her n hw dumb she was thougt v got bk our anju l8r. .
Gr8 job . .
A thread b/w anju n aman may b. .
Nd arshi's love. .wow. .
Aww wt shal v name ts love *winks*Edited by divyaarnavsr - 11 years ago

Im reading a piece of your work for the first time.

That was beautiful...I study at Cornell, yet I have never attended an ice-hockey game...now I really want to go to one. :)

Wow... u write beautiful... by d way i m a silent reader and couldnt stop appreciating ur  skills... so have to comment... jst amazing... 

*sigh* What I wouldn't give to be in Khushi's place right now!!! *sigh* Why can't I be as lucky as Khushi?? I LOVED THIS version of the almost kiss...And thank god this wasn't an ALMOST kiss...there was a kiss here!! Thank god for that!! YOu are a great writer!!! I'm so excited for this new series! :) Thank you for the PM :) 

loved it ...super sweet and very romantic

just fantastic one...

Khushi n her super +ve attitude. . I realy loved the way u described her, n i love to build such attitude n me. .
N m so fallen fo arnav. .awww too adorable. .
Bt d details on icehockey was nothing i knew * imagng arnie gvg me THAT amused luk* *blush*
I so loved ths COMPLETED KISS. . n ur efforts on ts particular epic scene s marvellous
N m agreein wit ur thougt of d scene 4m d shw. .

Amazing story and such a long update. Super.