ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 68

I think you just killed me with that! Pretty lethal huh! Kaash... har crush aisa hi hota... Wonderful, Semanti!!!!!!!

Loved it...

Thank you for penning down such a pulcritude!!

wow..I had been thinking of this kiss scene today and tada! you wrote beautifully about it...great..lovely update..I fell in love with the tale! it was different setting and there was something very cute about it...really enjoyed reading it...

awww it was so so so beautiful and lovely...❤️❤️
loved every single bit of it...❤️
and yaah i could relate to it to many extend except the fact that he was no Arnav Singh Raizafa...ofcourse...

for me it's one of the most wonderful tales i've ever read...😊

you guys are amazing...😃

will be waiting for the next... update soon...😊😊

Wow this was more than amazing!
I saw a PM for this in the morning and I was extatic cos it meant I would have something awesome to read on my way home from uni.

That was amazing I could literally picture it perfectly.
Reminded me of my not so productive ice skating lesson huh if only mine had ended like this did...

That was amazing loved it
Thanks for the PM
God bless
Jenna

I am hyperventilating right now... So please forgive me if I make no sense...
When Expel told the title I thought it was photo-shoot scene..😳
An awesome tribute to the first almost kiss... And you completed it and that too with such magic and the not so shy Khushi... Woohhhooo!!! I totally loved it...
Sportsman Arnav Singh Raizada - Ok I confess that I develop certain liking for guys who are involved in sports and this man who doesn't pay attention to any handkerchiefs thrown his way is super attractive, what I won't give to have him as my man!!! *sigh*
And here this man is complimented by the always happy and hard working Khushi who just has time for him even on the busiest days of her college.

PS: I am surprised how come I have not come across your work before. I will catch with your other works soon. Pinky promise :)

PPS: And the next story "A tale of rains and raindrops" Is it related to this scene Expel? 😛😉


Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago

amazing...awesome...zabardast updte...
Continue soon..waiting for next tale...

Beautiful, amazing, awesome, super and sorry I dont know any other word right now! It was simply beautiful! I loved all your work but I think this your best for me anyway! Khushi feeling about Arnav was simple and sweet like a any girl will have when they are in love for first time but I did feel sorry for her that Arnav did see her at all but got know that he did see her, all the time but he had his reason to stay away ffom her!
And that kiss and what Khushi did in the end was 😳. Keep up the good work and cant wait to read your second one!
I could see Arnav and khushi in front my eyes on that ice.

superb.. simply amazing yaar its so beautifully written that I can imagine every scene