ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 61

 

well done girl..and the length was a treat to read...😃😃

 Nothing short of brilliant...! I loved your payal  replacement...as delicate as the payals were in the original...rewriting it with skates...heavy,sturdy and sleek...very sexy..! In between the heat and lavender and musky vapors rising up...the smooth hard ice providing the cool factor...How awsome...!

And the fact that they kissed and Kushi did not shy away for nay reason but gave as much as she took..and totally rocked the kisss makes this even more awsome...! Am I rambling...well my brain is scrambled I think with kiss...going to get some ice to cool off.

I wonder if you have seen an ice hockey movie...called Breakaway I think...with Canadian Indians who have a passion for the game. They form a team with Sikh boys...a nice movie..so I could totally visualize everything...!

wonderful scene...hats off to you..Semanti...!

Tere aur Semanti ke liye mujhe wapas aana hi Padaa;)

Unres;)

This story had Semanti written all over it.. I love your unique sense of humor girl, and honestly, urs and Expels updates are a sight for sore eyes... I'm off IF nowadays, but, but I'm compelled to come back just for this and of course, my lovely Juhi... ;) U'll two are, a force to be reckoned with... 

Yeh Khushi to maha tez nikli.. Arnav ko chance hi nahi diya, khud hi sab kuch kargayee!!!! But, I loved her outright flirtatious ways... 

Loved it, Semanti, but then, what's new??? I love everything u dish out for us to read;)

This is one of the best stories I've ever come across. This light-hearted story + our dear sportsman--Arnav AND WOrkaholic--Khushi's chemistry rocks.

HAha. I'm so happy coz it had been so long since I'd come across this type of fabulous stry. Loved it and gonna read it once again all over.

And I have always loved ur references..

And now have to wait till Thursday or Friday..

  

This is best collab ever.. 2 of my fav writers together whose writin is beautiful and the is always an excitement when I am readin it..

Love u both

I was blushing  from the moment Arnav helped Khushi from falling...

Brilliantly written!