ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
In so many ways I wish the Kushi had actually put her foot down and fought with Arnav...and stupid Arnav instead of torturing everyone around him and himself had just laid out the truth in plain words so much heartache could have been avoided.

I like your different take on the outcome of the scene..yes there are questions arising especially the last part...but will wait for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is why I ove reading you..!! the cliff hangers.. they are amazing! Great start..!! that Terrace Scene has to be one of the best on tv - hamarey dimaag pe bhi chap gaya hai. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
woahh!! shyam is khushi's brother?! lol waiting for the next...loving it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
a really good update. so is shyam khushi's brother and what line of work is arnav into.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Read ur other works too. Interesting chapter. Shyam is khushi's brother. What happened between them on terrace. Arnav is a cop. Little con fused though about Arnav's character.

Eager to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
loved it...
thanx 4 d pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for the pm and loved your signature clifhanger. 
Your writing is clean good and interesting. Count me in your fan list

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for the pm and loved your signature clifhanger. 
Your writing is clean good and interesting. Count me in your fan list
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Posted: 11 years ago

Supreb update!!

What a cliffhanger?? Shyam is Khushi's brother?? I was shocked to hear that!! Then what the hell happenened on the terrace? Why was Khushi asking Shyam to leave Anjali?
Too many qns & scenarios running in my mind & this not going to let me be in peace :)
Eagerly waiting for the next update!
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Frida - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think I just had a nerdgasm.
Arnav is James Bond and he has is heir to the Raizada fortune. I just died.
Shyam is Khushi's BROTHER? BROTHER? And he's some sort of criminal obviously!

I've never been this excited about a story before! Can't wait to read more! :D