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ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
A new reader of your works Juhi...😊

I must admit one thing; I usually comment simultaneously as I read but tell you what, while reading this tale I couldn't bring myself to start commenting. I was like no something's not right; I might type my views only to have them corrected again.

And I was right...a revelation that dawned upon me only after seeing the shoulder strap; even though the first seeds of doubt had been sown when you mentioned the alternate career.

Also the final disclosure of Shyam being Khushi's brother and her hatred for him... I've already instructed my mind to be ready for many more twists and turns😆

Continue soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
What????? Shyam is Khushi's brother!!!!!man so many questions playing in my mind...and waiting for the next update to have all the answer...like so many Ipk n Arshi fans me too hate that terrace scene...and here u r giving us a strong and determind Khushi,liking her...and Khushi's thought about Anjali too differently written... Edited by shijinareneesh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
shyam is khushi's brother...
once again mind blowing concept...
looking forward to it..
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really really nice update with excellent and intense consummation!!☺️
 
So Shyam is Khushi's brother!!😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
love u Juhi for ur this style of writing ! 
Shyam is Khushi's brother ! huh ? Jha & Gupta 🤪 kay lets wait for the nxt for every answer ...
thnx 4 the pm ! waiting  for the nxt !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Holy Shit!!😲SMJ is the brother of KKG😃

I did face a whole lot of kostins while reading the update but I choose to wait for the concluding part!!😳


This concept is pretty refreshing and I enjoyed the first story and am so looking forward to the rest😊

Update soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
great first part
and im so glad their is a concluding chapter to clear my confusions😊
cant wait for it
but the first part is amazing, completely different storyline, and yes the terrace scene is a one i hated and the last line has shown that it is not going in the right direction
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unresed on page 25 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3530100&PID=80539042&#80539042

Ps. Agla part kab aayega? Already started the countdown in my skd ofcourse!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice idea of collaboration...
And yes, the terrace scene dialog haunted us for many days...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Am a little confused at this stage...
Seeing your writing ability I have no doubt that the next update will clarify everything...
Will be beautiful no doubt about it...