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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 89)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Lisa is in for a surprise.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
read all chapters on this thread together..
 
and loved how Arnav couldn't be away from Khushi..
 
their time in Lucknow was written so beautifully.. you have magic in you Smita.. you write beautiful stories.
 
You have a perfect balance of Traditionality and modernity.. positivity & negativity.. It creates wonderfully balanced emotional as well as deeply beautiful story. Hats off to you.
 
It was so good how Arnav wasn't reluctant to come to Lucknow.. Khushi indeed helped him to come out of those horrified memories.. and made his past much easier to remember.
 
Their kissed shared are so tender & gives the whole new amazing meaning to desire they feel for each other.
 
so, KKG is Arnav's khajoor.. and Lady Lisa is all furious for the barso purana coat.. Confused I see her getting some real peace of ASR's mind.. bring it on. She needs some.. WinkLOLLOL
 
Thanks Smita for writing so amazingly beautiful stories.. and thanks Rulama for PMs.Big smile
 
 


Edited by SuperstarSanaya - 16 April 2013 at 12:56pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
splended update smita
rashmi, Hug

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
LOVED IT
 
ASR IS GONE EXPLODE

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Love it!
Can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
yay finally i get to see a possessive khushi soon i think 
very ASR too and lisa going to be blasted for sure wow 
am doing a mental jigBig smile
smita i loved it all of it 
it was fantastic to see them together in AR's NEW year partyWink
thanks dear rashmi for pms

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
interesting..!!!
w8ng for next!!

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Uh-oh! Here comes the trouble!!!! And that too, on a New Year's eve!!!! 

I loved how Arnav was so concerned about Khushi! And Buaji, she is a sight to see! :)

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