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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 81)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Day Dreaming

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
beautiful ... update...keep it up

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
nice interpretation rashmi
 
now waiting for todays dose, smita

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Mrina's Mind: Next update???? Chalo stalk karte hain!!!

*Sees No Update*

Mrina: Hawww... Update nahi aaya... Cry

Mrina's Mind: Koi baat nahi.. Rashmi busy hogi! Smile

Mrina: To blog par to aana chahiye na! *pouts* 

Mrina's Mind: Arey baba.. Smita bhi busy hogi! Main writer to wohi hai.. Agar Smita nahi update degi to Rashmi yahan kaise update karegi!

Mrina: Hmm... Par mujhe update chahiye! *pouts again*

Mrina's Mind: Patience baba! Kal tak mil jaayega... Usual wala DHAMAKEDAAR update! Day Dreaming To thoda intezaar to banta hai.. After all.. yaad hai na.. Khushi kya kehti hai... "Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai" Embarrassed

Mrina: Okay! Agar aisa hai to I will have to wait till ka subha... Then Smita will give wonderphul updatewa! *grins* Big smile

Mrina's Mind: Good girl! Clap

Smita: Haaye re nandkishore.. Ee Mrina ko ka hoigava? Shocked

Rashmi: Smita.. Ye to roz ka hai! Bechari update ke liye taras jaati hai!

Smita: Mrina.. Relax.. I'll give you nice updatewa! Just a little patiencewa! Wink

Rashmi: Yeah... Kyunki ke Smita ke Oneshots are like 30 Shots.. Patience... LOL

Mrina: Yeah! Coz the more you read... the more addictive they are! Love you Smita for writing such wonderful stories for us! Keep them coming! Hug

*Now no more pakaoing the both of you* LOL ROFL

Waiting for next part! Day Dreaming

Love you both! Heart

Mrina

Mrina,

There is a need to change this line of the dialogue dear!

Rashmi: Yeah... Kyunki ke Smita ke Oneshots are like 30 Shots.. Patience... LOL

Now it should be like this:

Rashmi: Yeah... Kyunki ke Smita ke Oneshots are like 30 Shots... Aur har ek Shot undergoes NUCLEAR FISSION... Patience...LOL


Rashmi


Edited by rulama - 15 April 2013 at 9:16pm

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Just caught up on the chapters!! It's good to see them comfortable around each other especially khushi!!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rulama

Originally posted by -Mrinalini-

Mrina's Mind: Next update???? Chalo stalk karte hain!!!

*Sees No Update*

Mrina: Hawww... Update nahi aaya... Cry

Mrina's Mind: Koi baat nahi.. Rashmi busy hogi! Smile

Mrina: To blog par to aana chahiye na! *pouts* 

Mrina's Mind: Arey baba.. Smita bhi busy hogi! Main writer to wohi hai.. Agar Smita nahi update degi to Rashmi yahan kaise update karegi!

Mrina: Hmm... Par mujhe update chahiye! *pouts again*

Mrina's Mind: Patience baba! Kal tak mil jaayega... Usual wala DHAMAKEDAAR update! Day Dreaming To thoda intezaar to banta hai.. After all.. yaad hai na.. Khushi kya kehti hai... "Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai" Embarrassed

Mrina: Okay! Agar aisa hai to I will have to wait till ka subha... Then Smita will give wonderphul updatewa! *grins* Big smile

Mrina's Mind: Good girl! Clap

Smita: Haaye re nandkishore.. Ee Mrina ko ka hoigava? Shocked

Rashmi: Smita.. Ye to roz ka hai! Bechari update ke liye taras jaati hai!

Smita: Mrina.. Relax.. I'll give you nice updatewa! Just a little patiencewa! Wink

Rashmi: Yeah... Kyunki ke Smita ke Oneshots are like 30 Shots.. Patience... LOL

Mrina: Yeah! Coz the more you read... the more addictive they are! Love you Smita for writing such wonderful stories for us! Keep them coming! Hug

*Now no more pakaoing the both of you* LOL ROFL

Waiting for next part! Day Dreaming

Love you both! Heart

Mrina

Mrina,

There is a need to change this line of the dialogue dear!

Rashmi: Yeah... Kyunki ke Smita ke Oneshots are like 30 Shots.. Patience... LOL

Now it should be like this:

Rashmi: Yeah... Kyunki ke Smita ke Oneshots are like 30 Shots... Aur har ek Shot undergoes NUCLEAR FISSION... Patience...LOL


Rashmi

Hahahaha...

True true! 18, 18 (1), 18 (2), 18 (3), 18 (4), 18 (5) and soo on... Till 18 (9) and then we get a 19! LOL

But i love that... Coz because of the Nuclear Fission we get to read MORE... *GREEDY* Evil Smile

Waiting Smita..

Mrina

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
awesome update , good to see the change in Arnav, now waiting eagerly for the next update

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