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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 76)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Finally I get to be FIRST! Dancing Day Dreaming Party

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The updatewa was AMAZING Smita!! Loved the 2 blushing... And the Family bonding! Big smile

Highlight: 

"Jiji, you look beautiful!", Khushi complimented Payal, who was dressed in a pink and light green fancy saree, and looked beyond gorgeous.

"Anjaliji, you are so beautiful!", Khushi exclaimed. Anjali was in a golden tissue sari, and looked like a celebrity.

All smiled as Di hugged Khushi.

"Acha?", she teased Khushi. "Then why is Chotey looking at you as though he wants to carry you away to some uninhabited island?"

All laughed at Arnav & Khushi, who flushed slightly at the comment.

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The dialogues above ^^^.. It was really cute! Hahaha.. Imagine ASR's flushed face.. ADORABLE! Embarrassed

Is Pam aur Lisa ki to main... Angry haan haan beta... Ja ASR ke pass.. He will show you your aukat! LOL Kahin ka nahi chhodega tum dono ko if you talk low of Khushi... Wink

Simply outstanding Smita..Clap

@Arnav: Waiting for the KARARA TAMACHA! LOL Wink

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... Hug

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi: Gotchya before the PM! Wink Love you! Hug

Continue soon!

Loads of love, Heart

Mrina Smile


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 16 April 2013 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Finally I get to be FIRST! Dancing Day Dreaming Party

~~~~~

The updatewa was AMAZING Smita!! Loved the 2 blushing... And the Family bonding! Big smile

Highlight: 

"Jiji, you look beautiful!", Khushi complimented Payal, who was dressed in a pink and light green fancy saree, and looked beyond gorgeous.

"Anjaliji, you are so beautiful!", Khushi exclaimed. Anjali was in a golden tissue sari, and looked like a celebrity.

All smiled as Di hugged Khushi.

"Acha?", she teased Khushi. "Then why is Chotey looking at you as though he wants to carry you away to some uninhabited island?"

All laughed at Arnav & Khushi, who flushed slightly at the comment.

~~~~~~~~

The dialogues above ^^^.. It was really cute! Hahaha.. Imagine ASR's flushed face.. ADORABLE! Embarrassed

Is Pam aur Lisa ki to main... Angry haan haan beta... Ja ASR ke pass.. He will show you your aukat! LOL Kahin ka nahi chhodega tum dono ko if you talk low of Khushi... Wink

Simply outstanding Smita..Clap

@Arnav: Waiting for the KARARA TAMACHALOL Wink

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... Hug

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi: Gotchya before the PM! Wink Love you! Hug

Continue soon!

Loads of love, Heart

Mrina Smile


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 16 April 2013 at 12:43pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Smita ke stories stalk karne ke 10 reasons:

Reason #1 Smita's Stories are so realistic! Wink

Reason #2 They are addictive. If read once, you can read then a 100 times again and not get bored!

Reason #3 Smita ki right hand Rashmi ke interpretations are drool worthy!

Reason #4 the most important one Smitajii post updates daily and on demand...Thumbs Up

Reason #5 Khushi in her stories is always sweet and innocent and as close to Khushi we saw on the show...

Reason #6 ASR always changes from Akdoo Singh Raizada to Aashiq Singh Raizada

Reason #7 Negativity hardly lasts in her stories! Embarrassed

Reason #8 The stories always bring a smile and a feel good factor to our lives

Reason #9 Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, we get to read a constant growth in the story! They are never dragging! Big smile

Reason #10 The stories always have a Happy Ending! Day Dreaming

Credits: Mrinalini, Sayali and Sujata Big smile


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 16 April 2013 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
nice...

but i hate some vamps entering the story...

pls keep pure and simple love story...

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
RES
STALKING HELPS. LOL

AWWWSOME UPDATE... That Lisa is going to get hunted... LOL


Will be bck subha with special effects... Wink

Thanks for the update Smita and Rashmi... Big smile

Goood Night..

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 16 April 2013 at 12:44pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
why did that feel so short?

I can never get enough of your chapters!!!

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Smitaaa Hugget well soon dear...

loved this part... Khushiii and Arnav almost making it official going to the party as couple...Day Dreaming

Khushi ji confess kabbb karegii...Stern Smile

Smitajii can you add a little more interaction between Buajii and Aranvbabuaa???  i sooo sooo miss thr interaction... specially the way Arnav babua tries to maoo buajii during khushi ka birthday trackCry

Song Dedication : 

Chaaha tohh bahoott naa chayee tuzhee...
Chahat pai magar koie jorr nahi...
Dill hi tohh haine tum par aaa hii gayaa...
Dill ka koie kasoor nahii...



Edited by sayali_d23 - 16 April 2013 at 12:49pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Nice update!!
You have included almost all important events from our IPK land & molded them into your story very appropriately. Nothing looks out of place or forced.
Their story has progressed so beautifully..
Is khushi going to take 6 months to say yes for the wedding?
Can't wait for the next chapter!!


Edited by Frida - 16 April 2013 at 12:47pm

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