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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 69)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
That is some willpower
I hope they get married very soon
They are so cute together

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Finally not that late! *Sigh of Releif* Smile

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The updatewa was AMAZING Smita!! Really Adorable!! Clap Hug The growing bond and the fondness.. The passion, possessiveness.. It's so naturally shown! The kiss and then the catching of self control.

Arnav could feel himself trembling as he tried to grasp at the threads of his fleeing self-control and his rapidly vanishing determination to keep her safe from his overwhelming need for her till she was safely married to him. His family... her family... the trust they had placed in him... He couldn't break it. And Khushi... She didn't have an ounce of self preservation in her. He had to look after her interests.

This para ^^^^ was very beautifully explained. It shows the pure love and the respect! Clap *STANDING OVATION SMITA* Clap Star
And Khushi trying to persuade him was also very cute! Embarrassed

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As they left, Khushi turned to take one last look at the beloved old building that had sheltered her for the past 10 years. Her eyes filled with tears.

"Let's come back for a visit... after our wedding.", said Arnav softly, taking hold of her hand as he drove through the comparatively less crowded lane leading to the Main Road.

Khushi nodded, trying not to let the tears fall.

"Then you can take me to your school...", he suggested.

Khushi smiled widely through her tears. "My biology teacher will ask you how you put up with me!"

"I will tell her that I can't do without you.", he smiled, pressing her fingers. Khushi blushed.

"She will faint, pukka!", she mumbled.

Arnav smiled. "And we can go to the thandai shop, the kirana store, the channawala, and visit all your friends..." It was a relief to think about Lucknow without seeing Sheesh Mahal in his mind's eye, without feeling a cruel hand close around his heart, without feeling that his head would burst with a replay of terrible scenes from the past...

Khushi looked at his relaxed visage, and hesitated.

Arnav looked at her, an eyebrow raised in question.

"Arnavji... you didn't mind coming to Lucknow for me?" Her voice was low. So low that Arnav had to cock his ears to hear her question.

"Mind?", he asked.

"With your past..", she paused.

Arnav smiled. "No."

Khushi sighed in relief.

Arnav slammed on the brakes, and lifted her hand to his lips for a loving kiss. "You have freed me, Khushi. The past no longer hurts. We can come to Lucknow as many times as you want to, every year. And maybe one day, Nani, Di, Akash,Mami, Mamaji, Payal, you, me, we can all visit Sheesh Mahal together."

Khushi looked at him, amazed at the change in him.

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The dialogues above ^^^.. Finally Arnav has gotten over his past. Khushi has indeed freed him from ASR to Arnav! Loved the way he mellowed her mood talking about a visit after marriage! It is indeed really special for Khushi and obviously... who else would understand other than our dear Mr. Aashiq Singh Raizada! Big smile

Desperately waiting to know what is gonna happen after they reach Delhi! Day Dreaming

Simply outstanding Smita..Clap

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.N.E.S.S.! Heart

@Khushi: So miss KKG... Ab 6 mahine rukna nahi! Jaldi se haan kardo! Embarrassed

@Arnav: Finally things have fallen into place.. Isn't it Mr. Aashiq? Wink

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... Hug Loved the bonding!

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi: Thanks for the PM! Love you! Hug

Continue soon!

Loads of love, Heart

Mrina Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Aweee!!!!

This was such a beautiful update! I loved seeing how Arnav stopped himself for Khushi and the families, although Khushi was willing to go much further than that!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
great update dear
liked it.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
oh Arnav.. the God of Self Control...LOL

loved the update...

thanks for pm...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
awesome

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