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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 58)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Nice n lovely update

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
The ending was hot!
She is quite naive.LOL
Who can resist shirtless ASR? Who was Khushi trying to fool?


Edited by Afya - 13 April 2013 at 10:19pm

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
fab update di.
one week of seperation and than alone in the house not bad.

a song dedicated to this update------
"hum tum ,ek kamre main band ho
aur chabhi khho jaye
in naino ke(arnav's eyes)ki bhoolbhulaiya main khushi khho jaye"

and waiting for ur interpretation rashmi di.

update soon waiting.love u.

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
What a beautiful update , thanks for the PM

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Ahaaa Maast :D

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Hey dear, thanks for the pm.

Wow it was totally hot and passionate update.Heart

Arnav turning all naughty for KhushiWink I m loving this flirtatious side of Arnav. Khushi's chattering at its best and she becoming speechless on seeing Arnav shirtless.Wink

Please continue soon. Eagerly waiting

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Poor khushi..
Smita dii bechari ko saans lene do..:-D

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 11:35pm | IP Logged

Loved it!

A shirtless Arnav is always to die for! Not alone Khushi but any girl would. **Sigh** Off to Dreamland!

The Update was really good! Good job once again Smita!

And Rashmi, you seem to do an amazing job in rewriting it once again. It is fun to read ur version too, though this part did not have it!

Update soon! U already do BtW.

Bye

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