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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 50)

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Super DHAK DHAK update!!!!

Loved the bond between Khushi and Arnav...Arnav who has never done any household work is content to help Khushi...

Their small world full of love and togetherness.. 

Absolutely an amazing update and quite long too...now waiting for another long update(I know I sound greedy but i cannot help it ...your work is addictive in a very positive way)  

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Beautiful and amazing update, awww loved the way khushi described all the different places around Lucknow, leading up to her house. Arnav and khushi are just so adorable and already act like a cute married couple, the way they cooked the food and ate the food together, it was so sweet. As usual Arnav has to do his teasing and poor khushi could not concentrate or even speak properly with a shirtless Arnav, fabulous. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
arnav being naughty n khushi couldnt concentrate
thanks for the pm rashmi

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
lol...shirt ko goli maroo ...awesome update...continue soon...

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
Loved it...amazing excellent

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
shirt ko goli maro.. hmm.. i never thot Arnav would say this... nice update..

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:18pm | IP Logged

nice one smita di...

shirt ko goli maro...ShockedShocked...aur pyar me arrest ho jao"...LOL

loved it...SmileSmile...thts the real khushi...LOLLOLLOL...by the time arnav will ready to leave lucknow he will already remember all the mithai-shops, channa walas, the other teacher other than biology teacher, the garbage dump, devi maiyya temple etc...ROFLROFLROFL
and he really needs at least six to eight eyes to concentrate on both driving in lucknow roads with khushi on his side telling him all the name shops plus their shopkeepers... ROFLROFL

thnks for the PM rashmi di...

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:24pm | IP Logged

Loved the update...Smile

Khushi telling Arnav about her childhood memories...naming all the shops and shopkeepers...showing her school and about her biology teacher...It was kinda sweet and funny LOL

Best line of the OS..."shirt ko goli maro"...I can't beleive our Arnie said that Shocked ROFL Blushing

Thanks for the PM Smile

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