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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 41)

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
I know I'm awfully late with the comments! I'm still not keeping well so not on full-on stalking mode!

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The updatewa was AMAZING Smita!!! Clap Hug

Totally in love... They are ADDICTED to each other.. To each other's presence and also to each other's love! Heart A very natural phenomenon! Embarrassed

Highlight: 

Her eyes filled with tears.

"Don't cry. Don't cry, Khushi." He kissed her eye lids and wiped her tears off with his fingers.

Khushi hugged him, burying her face against his neck.

"Don't let me go away from you again.", she ordered in a low tone.

Arnav smiled, rubbing her back, soothing her. "No. Never."

"And if I say I want to go?", she muttered into his neck.

"I will handcuff you to me.", he said, kissing her silky hair, smiling into the dark cloud.

"You are like alcohol.", Khushi declared, tightening her trembling fingers around his lapel.

Arnav raised one eyebrow.

"One sip of you and I am addicted to you.", Khushi frowned at the strange phenomenon, missing the darkening of Arnav's eyes.

The first she knew of his intention was the seductive sweep of his hard, warm lips against her soft, plump ones.

"Return home with me?", Arnav asked.

Khushi nodded happily but then her face fell. "But... Vimala Chachi..."

"I talked to her on the phone. She is OK with it.", Arnav smiled.

Khushi's mouth fell open. "Awww... When did you...?"

"Buaji gave me her number.", he smirked.

"You...you... natkhat...devious... Akhdoo Singh Raizada!", she exclaimed.

"Aashik Singh Raizada...", he murmured into her ear.

Khushi blushed.

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The dialogues above ^^^.. Really really cute!!!! Embarrassed

Ofcourse ASR will handcuff Khushi if she plans to go anywhere away from him! LOL Tere bina jiya jaaye na! Embarrassed

She would gladly go back with you Arnav.. Why wouldn't she? And even if she wouldn't... Would you let her stay back? Why on earth would you come to Lucknow anyways Mr. Raizada? Tongue Embarrassed LOL

Simply outstanding Smita..Clap

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.N.E.S.S.! Heart

@Khushi: So someone if finally addicted... Not that you weren't earlier! Wink Do you wanna still call him Akdoo??? *Hawww* Shocked LOL

@Arnav: Ahaan... Mr. Aashiq indeed! Haven't thougght Mr. ASR would become like this one day! Tongue LOL *WAY TO GO!* Clap

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... Hug

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi: Thanks for the PM! Love you! Hug

Continue soon!

Loads of love, Heart

Mrina Smile

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rulama

Originally posted by segad

i always thought OS meant "one Shot"  Yeh kaisa OS hai ki char char thread ho gaye?

seems like some Harry potter spell ka asar LOL

Of course, it is ONE SHOT! Smile
Every section of every part is a ONE SHOT hai na?Wink
Smita doesn't write extensions!Tongue
Its our definition of ONE SHOT!Big smile
We are HOGWARTS products dear!LOL

Rashmi.

My One Shotwaa has 20-30 bullets in it! Wink

Smita

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smitar

Originally posted by rulama

Originally posted by segad

i always thought OS meant "one Shot"  Yeh kaisa OS hai ki char char thread ho gaye?

seems like some Harry potter spell ka asar LOL

Of course, it is ONE SHOT! Smile
Every section of every part is a ONE SHOT hai na?Wink
Smita doesn't write extensions!Tongue
Its our definition of ONE SHOT!Big smile
We are HOGWARTS products dear!LOL

Rashmi.

My One Shotwaa has 20-30 bullets in it! Wink

Smita


Indeed... And i'm glad they do! Embarrassed 

Mrina

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Are you updating anytime soon Smita... I have been awfully late for the past 2 updates! Cry All because of my health! Ouch

Please let me know if you updating?

Love

Mrina

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates...
luved khushi's anger... 
awww arnav is indeed ashiq singh raizada...
continue soon

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smitar

Originally posted by rulama

Originally posted by segad

i always thought OS meant "one Shot"  Yeh kaisa OS hai ki char char thread ho gaye?

seems like some Harry potter spell ka asar LOL

Of course, it is ONE SHOT! Smile
Every section of every part is a ONE SHOT hai na?Wink
Smita doesn't write extensions!Tongue
Its our definition of ONE SHOT!Big smile
We are HOGWARTS products dear!LOL

Rashmi.

My One Shotwaa has 20-30 bullets in it! Wink

Smita


 
Smita,

Already you have shot 34 bullets!

Fission of bullets too is it?

Rashmi.


Edited by rulama - 12 April 2013 at 11:18pm

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
fab interpretation di.
just loved it .
i have read somewhere that "brain is a very outstanding organ. it works for 24 hrs, 365 days,right from your birth until we fall in love".
same is the case with arnav here.
he has stopped thinking from his brain and allowed his heart to rule.
and he very well knows that if he will allow his heart to rule than only he will be able to wow someone like khushi who always allows her heart to make decisions.

bahoot hogaya pyaar ka gyan.
who m i when two such great personalities(rashmi di and smita di) are teaching us the every prospect of love.

thank you very much to u both.
waiting for todays gyan.
update soon.love u .

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
wooowww soo romantic...

loved it ...

thanks for pm...

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