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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 34)

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:29am | IP Logged
hahah i loved the last remarks

and aww Khushi proper goaded at him which was sweet!

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
cute updateEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
sweet...

loved the transformation...

pls dont write so well...i get weak at knees...

i want one hell of this romeo in my life also...

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Arnav falls in love with all of khushi antics. And now that she has ordered he will never let her go
Continue soon

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged
 Journey from Lucknow to Delhi... beautiful song...

Yeh mausam ka jaadu hai mitwa...
na ab dil pe kaabu hai mitwa...


Edited by hetaldave - 12 April 2013 at 11:42am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
cute updateee

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
tujko dariya dili ki kasam saaqiya...
mustkil daur par daur chalta rahe... ..
ronke mai'kada yunhi badhti rahein...
ek girta rahein ek sambhalata rahein...


"You are like alcohol"...best line of this update.Tongue


Edited by hetaldave - 12 April 2013 at 11:32am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
a totally rollicking update, clearly bringing our how much khushi yearned for and missed her arnavji! the way she rang a peal over his head was just epic LOL! the very first picture said so much! did you notice where khushi's eyes were resting? no wonder arnav was so eager to oblige his ladylove Wink! loved this mellowed down version of arnav singh raizada, allowing khushi to berate him to her heart's content and actually adding fuel to the fire with his quips! "What kind of a man are you? I don't have any experience in such matters, but you should know! You are older than me! You have had girl friends! You should know how much it would hurt!" She caught him by the lapels of his coat and tried to shake him... khushi seems to have taken a leaf out of the asr rulebook: offence is the best form of defence, or better still, yell at the other if you feel your control slipping! the only difference here is that, in her anger, hurt and subsequent relief of being with arnav, khushi's real feelings are gushing out in a torrent... poor girl has no clue that he's as clueless as she is to the effects of first love... it's only with khushi that he has ever suffered the pangs of separation! arnav's admission that the separation was hell on him and his gesture of gently kissing her eyelids to sip at her tears was deeply moving as was his promise to never ever let her go away from him... "You are like alcohol." "One sip of you and I am addicted to you." I am sure millions of ladies the world around would agree with her! and khushi is a drug arnav can't forego, either! arnav is real good at planning ahead but keeping the cards close to his chest, whereas khushi just flies by the seat of her pants! he was so right about their family members being ever-willing to smooth his path to khushi! arnav's transformation from 'Akhdoo Singh Raizada' to 'Aashik Singh Raizada' is, in the words of my students, just awesome! that's it's arnav who comes up with this monicker is the cherry on top of the proverbial cake!

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