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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 19)

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Un-Reserving

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I know I'm awefully late with the comments! Was down with fever!

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The updatewa was AWESOME as usual Smita!!! Clap Hug

SEPARATION MAKES THE HEARTS GROW FONDER! Heart

This is reminding me of your SS : Living Without You.. One of my Favourites!

Highlight: 

Arnav looked around, desperate for inspiration. His chest hurt as though someone had placed a boulder there. Drawing breath was an efoort, a very painful effort.
"Arnavji, are you listening to me?", Khushi asked, thinking that he had abandoned the phone, her chatter having driven him away.
"Khushi, what about us?", he finally asked.
"What about us?", Khushi frowned, perplexed.
"Are you… we… Khushi…. You will be in Lucknow and I will be in Delhi…", he struggled to express his anguish at her departure, having little experience in voicing his feelings.
Khushi smiled slightly, confused. "Arnavji, it is just for 2 weeks. Fourteen days. Then I will be back here in the godown."
Arnav's fingers tightened on the phone, almost crushing it.

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The dialogues above ^^^.. Really Beautifully expressed Smita.. The unconditional love and emotions. the possessiveness!~ Everything was sooo beautifully shown in these lines. Clap Day Dreaming

Aahaan.. 1 week no call... and KKG missing her Arnav ji! 

And the last scene.. Obviously if the stool wobbles and she slips.. SHE HAS TO LAND IN ARNAV'S ARMS! Wink

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.N.E.S.S.! Heart

@Arnav - Finally Mr. ASR has come to Lucknow! Wink

@Smita - Love you sooo much for the update... Hug

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi - Thanks for the PM! Love you! Hug

Continue soon!

Loads of love, Heart

Mrina Smile


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 April 2013 at 5:25am

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Awesome update ,awww poor khushi missing him so much , I really can't wait to read next update although I know she is gonna fall to into his arms
But dying to know their reactions upon seeing each other after so many days. Pls update soon

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
door rehthe tho pyaar aur bi badtha hai
amazing update

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Loved it. Beautiful and warm update.

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
i think Arnav has come to Lucknow and so he will save her from falling
and it also explains why his phone could be switched off

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
I loved the Payal & Arnav moment. They both gave each other respect & started there new relationship of brother & sister.

Loved the way you described Arnav's emotions on finding out the Khushi was going to Lucknow for 2 weeks!! Poor guy was a mess.

Please continue soon! Hope Arnav is there to catch her. Wink

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
arnav is there!!!!!!! Right

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.loved it.

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