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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 127)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
I was so happy to see two updates. The first one took my breath away. It was way too amazing. The second one made me damn angry. Grrr I can kill Lisa right now Angry Poor Arnav has to prove himself once again. I feel so sorry for Khushi who is going through so much pain and yet can't share it with anyone. I hope Arnav understands what is bothering her and clear things up and DO TEACH LISA A LESSON Angry

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
khushi need to understand asr's life style and she should understand he love only her 

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chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
so appropriate the song for them
its their first and last love too
awww man she shall be the death of his self control
oh dear she shall torture him unknowingly what she is doing to him
and then she asks if he is okay or not
are ya kidding me khushi
hello girl you are trying his patience there right
chalo koi nahin
and i think this should send a message to that lisa girl that arnie has eyes for her only
and why not she gave him another reason to be free of the burden of his past
no one else can do what she did for him]
and that witch has done her damage
oh man this aint good
poor thing now she wont be able to get any of her words out of her mind
and just when he got her to trust and love him that witch had to ruin it all
thank god she didnt understand what that witch said to her
she said way too many horrible things to her right
damn those other witches who got this witch to get to khushi
oh arnie you dont know how much damage that girl has done to khushi
and looks he wont know either
stupid jealous vicious woman just becasue he was with you once dont mean he would look at you again
you can never give him what he needs
okay so you and the other girls might be more experienced in one thing khushi aint any knowledge of but he would be with her only forever
and there is no doubt in my mind of the same
hope arnie knows of this before things get worse for arhi



Edited by chavvi16 - 18 April 2013 at 1:43pm

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GunM Senior Member
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
the last two updates were beautifully written

this Evil Lisa...i wish someone would strangle her
everything was going sooo smooth...but i know Arnav will gain her Trust
and thanx for the pmSmile

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Amazing updates! Loved them! Poor khushi.. Hope she doesn't overthink this too much and let it effect their relationship. Looking forward to the next update!

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Tanumon Goldie
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
 amazing update.poor khushi,that lisa ruined everything.



Edited by Tanumon - 18 April 2013 at 2:01pm

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bansaldiya55 Senior Member
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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
omg omg ...

oh no smitar

noww what will happen?

shit this lisa :\

waitng for the  next updte

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm

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