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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 119)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mashira

smita, just as u promised you are taking up all the loose ends in the original IPK and tying them up so beautifully. they never did address khushi's concerns about the vast differences in hers and ASR's lifestyle and culture! great going!

putting up a petition for another series of OS about ASR discovering shyam's truth without the kidnap drama (maybe thru NK's camera which at that time we were all hoping would capture the terrace scene) and khushi discovering why ASR married her, without the pressure of saving Arnav from kidnap/shyam/will and proving herself innocent.. .why should she eh? and the dynamics this situation would have created!

keep writing! Hug



Brilliant idea, darl!Clap

Will keep it in mind.

There are too many loose ends in the serial. For eg, nobody ever found out that Shyam tried to kill babuji!

Smita



Edited by smitar - 18 April 2013 at 8:06am

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:08am | IP Logged
loved it...that bitch Lisa...churail kahike...Khushi uske baal nochliya????feeling sad for Khushi...With ASR's GF history,she is bound to feel insecure...But Khushi being Khushi still manage to smile for her family...Hope Arnav soon realize her turmoil and remove them...

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Rashmi dear as usual beautiful interpretation..loved it.

The best I liked in this interpretation is.."Being happy doesn't mean that everything is perfect.It means that you have decided to look beyond the imperfections."Tongue

Thanks for the pm dear.

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Aweso e part

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smitar

Originally posted by mashira

smita, just as u promised you are taking up all the loose ends in the original IPK and tying them up so beautifully. they never did address khushi's concerns about the vast differences in hers and ASR's lifestyle and culture! great going!

putting up a petition for another series of OS about ASR discovering shyam's truth without the kidnap drama (maybe thru NK's camera which at that time we were all hoping would capture the terrace scene) and khushi discovering why ASR married her, without the pressure of saving Arnav from kidnap/shyam/will and proving herself innocent.. .why should she eh? and the dynamics this situation would have created!

keep writing! Hug



Brilliant idea, darl!Clap

Will keep it in mind.

There are too many loose ends in the serial. For eg, nobody ever found out that Shyam tried to kill babuji!

Smita



thanks dear!!!  Big smile exactly!!!! that really upset me that babuji's story remained untold. so did Arnav's past too in a sense.. a boy who has struggled all through his teen years and much of adulthood about his father's adultery will forget everything in a day? i found that to be a stretch. would have been great if they had explored arnav's love for khushi which makes him marry her but seeing her brings his past back to him... sigh. anyways, you are the saviour i tell ya Embarrassed

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Damn!! that Liza.. I hate her...
I hope Arnav comes to know what Liza said to Khushi..
And I also hope, She have to go through  to hell for hurting Khushi

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
awesome update! Oh no that stupid Lisa! I knew she would say something to upset Khushi. I hope Arnav finds out and fixes things soon. Can't wait to read the next update!

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Loved it hope arnav finds out about Lisa soon so h can fix things with khushi

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