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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) (Page 112)

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
loved it
 
shock for many

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Yes Khushi its called Loveria... the treatment you were giving was call shock treatment!! Fablous words are understatement for your fab work!!

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Loved the update!!!AmazingClap

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Superb..

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Lovely update

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Absolutely beautifully written Smile

Thanks for the PM Smile

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Okay... Ummm.. I know I'm late but couldn't help it! Had a meeting in the morning! Ouch

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The updatewa was AMAZING Smita!! It was sooo DREAMY! Day Dreaming The dance gave me goosebumps! Embarrassed Clap

Highlight: 

Khushi let her left hand curl over his shoulder. She ran her fingers over the strong lines of his shoulders and down his back. Arnav shuddered in pleasure, unable to believe the power her innocent and simple touch had on him. Over the coat! His waistcoat... and his shirt! How would her touch feel if he were not draped in these ridiculous, unnecessary garments? He wished he could throw them off...

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya woh hazaaron rang ke...

"Arnavji...", she whispered. It felt so nice to touch him. And now she had the right to touch him as she willed. After all, he had been touching her here and there for months! And had she complained? No! So now he could shut his mouth and bear this! Khushi breathed deep in pleasure as she ran her fingers down his back, caressing his strained muscles lovingly.

Reh jaaun jaise main haar ke, aur chume woh mujhe pyaar se...

Arnav shuddered. He felt all hot and his limbs were none too steady...

Khushi looked at him with concern. Why was Arnavji shivering? Was he sick?

"Are you alright, Arnavji? Are you feeling feverish? Should we go home?", she asked in a whisper.

Arnav looked into her concerned and direct eyes. She had no idea of the destruction the simplest of her touches could wreck on his famed self-control.

Pehla nasha pehla khumaar, naya pyaar hai naya intezaar...
Kar lu main kya apana haal, aye dil-e-bekaraar,
Mere dil-e-bekaraar...

Arnav gave up all pretense of dancing, and pulled her gently into his arms. He bent his head and kissed her on her cheek that took on a rosy hue due to the gentle brush of his stubbly cheek against hers and her bashfulness. He breathed in her jasmine scent to his heart's content, and relished in the galloping of her heart against his.

They were totally unaware of many AR employees watching them with open mouths and shocked eyes.

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The para above ^^^.. It was ADORABLE! Khushi creating havoc in ASR! Oye hoyye! Embarrassed

Simply outstanding Smita..Clap


@Arnav: ASR ka self-control to bohot pehle hi chala gaya tha! LOL Kyun Mr. Aashiq? LOL Wink


@Khushi: Arey thoda sambhalke madam.. Pata chala Arnav ji ne aapko sabke saamne... You know... uhhh...  de diya to?????? Abhi to sirf cheek kiss tha.. Lip kiss kar diya to??? Embarrassed


@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... Hug

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@Rashmi: Thanks for the PM! Wink Love you! Hug

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Continue soon! Desperately waiting for Next Chapter!

Loads of love, Heart

Mrina Smile

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Yay sooo sweeet loved it go ASR

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