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Smitar's OS 2: FindingKhushi#5Part19(4)Pg132(19/4) - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago
Love Arnav for his self control even though Khushi kept pulling him.. loved the update.. excellent update.. Arnav is changed man he cares for Khushi and her feelings and he is ready to come to Lucknow for Khushi.. πŸ˜ƒ

thanks for pm πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago


Amazing update as always...

Thanks for the PM 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Update really lovely...I have to read it twice or may be thrice...❀️

Sahi kaha hai.."sabra ka phal mittha hota hai.."πŸ˜ƒ

"itti si hasee,itti si "Khushi",
itta sa tukda chaand ka,...
khwaabon ke tinko se ,,
chal banaaye aashiyan..
dabe dabe paaon se..
aaye hole hole zindgi..
hoto pe kundi chdhaa ke hum,
 taale lagaa ke...chal,
goomsum taraane chupke chupke gaayein,
aadhi aadhi baant le aaja dil ki yeh zameen..
thoda sa tera sa hoga thoda mera bhi hoga..
apna yeh aashiyaan..!

this song is for today's update.

Dear,sweet heart Rashmi...thanks and I am waiting for your interpretation.πŸ˜›

Edited by hetaldave - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was such a cute update. ...loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by manikka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The updates were sweet and awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
That is some willpower
I hope they get married very soon
They are so cute together
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally not that late! *Sigh of Releif* πŸ˜Š

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The updatewa was AMAZING Smita!! Really Adorable!! πŸ‘ πŸ€— The growing bond and the fondness.. The passion, possessiveness.. It's so naturally shown! The kiss and then the catching of self control.

Arnav could feel himself trembling as he tried to grasp at the threads of his fleeing self-control and his rapidly vanishing determination to keep her safe from his overwhelming need for her till she was safely married to him. His family... her family... the trust they had placed in him... He couldn't break it. And Khushi... She didn't have an ounce of self preservation in her. He had to look after her interests.

This para ^^^^ was very beautifully explained. It shows the pure love and the respect! πŸ‘ *STANDING OVATION SMITA* πŸ‘ β­οΈ
And Khushi trying to persuade him was also very cute! πŸ˜³

Highlight: 

As they left, Khushi turned to take one last look at the beloved old building that had sheltered her for the past 10 years. Her eyes filled with tears.

"Let's come back for a visit... after our wedding.", said Arnav softly, taking hold of her hand as he drove through the comparatively less crowded lane leading to the Main Road.

Khushi nodded, trying not to let the tears fall.

"Then you can take me to your school...", he suggested.

Khushi smiled widely through her tears. "My biology teacher will ask you how you put up with me!"

"I will tell her that I can't do without you.", he smiled, pressing her fingers. Khushi blushed.

"She will faint, pukka!", she mumbled.

Arnav smiled. "And we can go to the thandai shop, the kirana store, the channawala, and visit all your friends..." It was a relief to think about Lucknow without seeing Sheesh Mahal in his mind's eye, without feeling a cruel hand close around his heart, without feeling that his head would burst with a replay of terrible scenes from the past...

Khushi looked at his relaxed visage, and hesitated.

Arnav looked at her, an eyebrow raised in question.

"Arnavji... you didn't mind coming to Lucknow for me?" Her voice was low. So low that Arnav had to cock his ears to hear her question.

"Mind?", he asked.

"With your past..", she paused.

Arnav smiled. "No."

Khushi sighed in relief.

Arnav slammed on the brakes, and lifted her hand to his lips for a loving kiss. "You have freed me, Khushi. The past no longer hurts. We can come to Lucknow as many times as you want to, every year. And maybe one day, Nani, Di, Akash,Mami, Mamaji, Payal, you, me, we can all visit Sheesh Mahal together."

Khushi looked at him, amazed at the change in him.

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The dialogues above ^^^.. Finally Arnav has gotten over his past. Khushi has indeed freed him from ASR to Arnav! Loved the way he mellowed her mood talking about a visit after marriage! It is indeed really special for Khushi and obviously... who else would understand other than our dear Mr. Aashiq Singh Raizada! πŸ˜ƒ

Desperately waiting to know what is gonna happen after they reach Delhi! 

Simply outstanding Smita..πŸ‘

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.N.E.S.S.! β€οΈ

@Khushi: So miss KKG... Ab 6 mahine rukna nahi! Jaldi se haan kardo! πŸ˜³

@Arnav: Finally things have fallen into place.. Isn't it Mr. Aashiq? πŸ˜‰

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... πŸ€— Loved the bonding!

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi: Thanks for the PM! Love you! πŸ€—

Continue soon!

Loads of love, β€οΈ

Mrina πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aweee!!!!

This was such a beautiful update! I loved seeing how Arnav stopped himself for Khushi and the families, although Khushi was willing to go much further than that!
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update dear
liked it.