A Change of Heart: An AsYa SS: Ch6 Pg6: ON HIATUS - Page 5

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Loved the last update. I like the way you've shown Asad falling in love, struggling to accept it and yet being Asad! Stayed true to his character! Shall wait for the next part!

Awesome. Loved it. Pm me when you update please.

cant believe Ididnt comment on this earlier 😲 you see im now clearing out my inbox lol thanks for your Pm😊 and i absolutely LOVEDDD ittt👏  loved all partss esp 5 ever since ive been watching qubool hai always wanted a scene where she returns his mask and he does so with her earring and yaarr this fulfilled that a nice bigg hug for you!🤗 hahah continue soon and plz PM when you update😊 Edited by vaishnavi31 - 11 years ago

I read all the chapters in one sitting. Very nice writing style!

sooo nice dear

nice one!! good to c Asad openning up to Zoya

Loved it 😊 Please continue soon 

This is a nice story. I'l love to read it. Do pm me whenever you update.

Really liked the parts so far...the pace of the ss is good with right balance of emotions n dialogues. Would like to see how his interaction with his family is changing as mentioned by u in first update.. also i like zoya n aayan friendship so would you be willing to show tht n write something abt how seeing them has inspired asad to be a bit more carefree..(not jealous.. But somewhat have a trio moment)

Hope tht makes sense...
Good ss for far (u surely can write) 😊

Hey really enjoyed reading your story...looking forward to next update