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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 6:19am | IP Logged
First of all sorry for the late comment.
ROFL
Poor Rey aise lagta hai ki usne apni puri life mai bollywood movie nahi dekhi   LOL
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 7:04am | IP Logged
res!! dint get m lachuDisapprove...i dint know u updated .. gonna read now..

unres!!
ROFL ROFL.. my stomach is paining ... uffooo how do u write humor so so brilliantly yar.. with every line i cover my mouth so that my amma doesnt see me giggling looking at the laptop
but with this line Elders-aaj roka hai
Rey-aachi baat hai aapne rokh di.. i just couldnt hold yar ROFL ROFL... was holding till then , i broke laughing loudROFL ROFL..n then this oneTaani-teeka
Rey-woh kahne ki cheesze haina
Taani-hey bhaagwaan,teeka matlab teeka ,tikka nahi hai
Rey-whatever ohhh God !! ROFL ROFL. rey !!!! impossible!! n angooti .. khud pehlo na dialogue .. i kept my hand on my head !! this boy is really impossible ROFL ROFL.
 n hey.. y did u ask kuch romance ho gaye .. off course .. of course!!Star Star
 lachu .. i so enjoyed this update .. love u for this


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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 7:06am | IP Logged
 Yay padh liye mein teeno update dancing LOLLOL meri khusi ka thikana nahi taarey ki shaadi ho ri hai wow wowLOLLOLLOL mazaedaar updates di seriously yaar di superbb updates loved the item dance and taarey nok-jhok yaar and romance ahem ahem and abb plzz plzz update karo naaa plzzz making puppy faceEmbarrassed

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 5:40am | IP Logged
amazing update di Thumbs Up  jst luvd it a lot Heart update d nxt part asap eagerly waiting 4 it Big smile 

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Amazing update, Loved itHeart

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Hey guys,
See d note at the end of the chapter..
Thanks for all the comments..

Taarey FF:towards love:part 7


Morning:
Taani:oh  ji udo jee
Rey opened one of his eyes-subah subah tumhare chehra dekhliya ,oh god..
Taani:kya ji?
Rey joining his hands:kuch nahi hai ji
Taani:ab udo ji..
Rey:ab kaunse rasam hai aaj?
Taani:mehendi aur sangeet hai ji
Rey:main toh bhaag raha hoon
Taani:aapka dimaag to teekane main haina
Rey:jab se tumse mili hoon tab se tikane toh kya
dimaag abhi bhi hai yeh doubt ho rahi hai mujhe?
Taani:mera to vaction pe gaya haina 
Rey:kaun?
Taani:dimaag
Rey:woh vacation tumhare life long long haina 
Rey took his towel to go to d washroom
Taani:(imitating rey's voice)lifelong vaction pe gaya haina,kadoos kayinka

Village elders:oh bachon tum donon jaldi tyaar hokar aaj jao
Taani:haan ji abhi aa rahi hoon
Taani shouts out to rey who is ind  washroom:oh ji jaldi se bahar aavo,
sab log bahar bhula rahe hai
Rey comes out in towel covered in soap:tum aapne gale ko thoda rest de doge please..
Taani sees rey in d towel:woh ji(n clses her eyes)
Rey:kya hua?
Taani closed her eyes:woh aap
Reyha main hi hoon
Taani:aap towel main
Rey realised it n runs into d washroom n hits his head on d wall...


Taani n rey comes out...
Taani:kitna cha lag raha haina
Rey:kisko?
Taani:ofofo ji,zara dekho kitna chamak dhamak hai?
Rey:u r impossible
N walks out..

Rey was surrounded by a group of gals:
Rey:hato 
Gals:kyu jijai apne hone biwi keliye humare saath nachaoge nahi.
Rey:nahi ab hat jao
Taani comes infront:inhe kya poochna ,yeh toh bahut sharmila hai(catching his chin)
Rey moves away her hand..n walks out..

Taani:darpok hai woh 
Gals:aapko koi aur nahi mili
Taani:teek hai par kya haina ,mujhe unkeliye thodi humdardi mehsoos hogayi thi..
Gals:humdardi kyun
Taani:yeh kadoos aadmi ko mera alwaa kaun jhel saktha hai,isliye
Rey heard this..

Rey:Accha ji..
Taani:haan ji
Rey:toh gaana bajao yaar...

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Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke 

O teri ankh da ishaara mujhe fraud lage
Tu toh Majnu aawaara by God lage

O kasme waade khake apni pocket money bacha ke
Aaya tere liye paise waise jod jaad ke..

Ghar waalon ko bhi bye-shye bol baal ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya Dilli wali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

O what a look, what a grace
Tenu hi karan main chase
What a naksh what a nain
Dil tera ho gaya fan
What a smile, what a style...
Kabhi soft, kabhi rude kinna tera attitude

Teri galli mein bhi aana start kar diya
Ik tere naam apna heart kar diya
Karne laga aankh matakka
Ab toh aashiq ban gaya pakka

Aaj abhi maine tera boycott kar diya
Teri saari harqatein main toh note karu
Tujhe thaane mein le jaake main report karu oye

Tu na kar aise fight
Tera mood main karu light
Tujhe scene mein dikha ke golmaal ke

Naam tera hi likhaya maine wedding card pe
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Chal jhutta.. mere liye signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwali girlfriend chhod chhad ke

Ghar waalon ko bhi bye-shye bol baal ke
Aaya dilliwaali girlfriend chhod chhad ke
Tere liye hi toh signal tod taad ke
Aaya dilliwaali girlfriend chhod chhad ke



Taani puts mehendi on her hand n one d elders tries put a boondh on rey's hand
Rey:yeh kya kar rahe ho?
Taani:rasam hai
Rey:mehendi ladkiyon keliye hai,jaise tum to nahi lagthi phir bhi ,tum daal do,main nahi
Taani:chalo chod do chachi ,inhe acche chezzen so allergy hai
Rey:acche chezzon se toh nahi,par tumse toh defntly hai..
Taani:oh ji
Rey:haan ji
n shows his hand towards chachi who was applying
mehendi to taani:lo chahchi ek boondh daaal do..

Taani smiles..


Night:
Taani was looking at d moon while sitting under d sky..
Rey:mujhe nahi lagtha tha ki tum itne bhi pagal banoge ki taarey ginanna shuru kar doge..
Taani:ha ha ,bahut kharab joke tha ji
Rey:itne raaat ko bahar kyun bait rahe ho,tand lag jaayenge..
Taani:kal shaadi ha
Rey:ha pata hai
maine ekh shaadi se baaga nahi ab dossre pe aakar toot pada..
Taani:oh hello,main itna bhi buri nahi okay..
Rey:maine kab kaha 

Taarey eyelock...

Wind started blowing harder...
Rey moves her hairlocks from her face n pined it behind her ears..
Taani closes her eyes..
Rey cupes her face..
Taani opens her eyes n gets up n walks ,
Rey catches her hand from back..
Rey pulls her back but her leg gets hit by stone n looses her balance n she falls on rey...

Taarey eyelock..

Rey moves forward..
Their nose touch each other...
Rey's lips almost touched her lips,taani n reycloses their eys..

Chaachi:oh taani bitiya kahan ho tum
Taani n rey gets into their senses..
Taani runs..

Rey:yeh karne jaa raha tha main

In d hut..
Taani:yeh kya hone jaa rahi thi

Morning:
Taani:aaj mere shaadi..

Rey:oh damn,kaise baagon yahan se..


Haldi rasam..

Taani dressed in white saree was made sit down oppsite to rey who was wearing a white kurta pyjama..
Elders held a saree covering them from seeing each other..
Elders sarrted applying haldi on rey..
Rey:mujhe nahi chahiye.
Taani hit her head with her hands..
 But elders covered his face in haldi  taani  started laughing aloud..
Rey got angry but he controlled..
Elders left after applying haldi on taani...
Rey looks at taani angrly:tumhe haasi aa rahi thi na.
Taani smliling :nahi ji
Rey  stres at her angryly
Taani gets up..
Rey also gets up
Rey keeps a step forwards,
Taani keeps a step backwards.
Finally taani hits a wall..
Rey keeps his hands across taani from stopping her from moving..

Rey takes some haldi from his face with his finger n keepsit on taani's nose..
Rey moves closer to her ears,taani closes her eyes..
Rey:lal hogayi thi tumhari naak..
Taani opens her eys n pushes him n tries to run but
 rey holds her hand n pulls her back with taani landing her back on reys chest..
Rey puts haldi on her back..
Taani closes her eyes..
They both look into their eys sideways..
But after some they comes into senses n rey loosens his hand,
n taani runs away...

Precap:
Will d wedding happen?
Taani n rey decided to get seperated by going in differnt directions..
oooh i smell trouble?



part8


Edited by Lachu_taarey - 28 May 2013 at 5:23am

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Res/Unres..
Nice update di..
Loved it!
Both are really carzy...LOL
Loved it a lot!!!
Awesome and great work!
Ohh.. All the best! Promotions and all..I can understand! Smile


Edited by Ish_taarey - 16 May 2013 at 6:27am

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