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Taarey ff:towards love-part9-ff completed (Page 34)

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Hey guys,
I know everyone was eagerly waiting for the update...
if u guys hve lost intrest in dis story plse dont hesitate 2 tell me...

I have written this part in a hurry coz this s d first thing thing iam doing aftr i got home 2day..
Enjoy reading...

Taarey ff:Towards Love-part 5

Taani:apko kaisa laga epxerience,bahut mazaa aagayi hogi na...
Rey:maza?ha yeh toh main roz karthi hoona...
Taani:yeh humein roz karna chahiye na..
Rey hits his hand on his head..
Taani laughs..
Rey stares at her laughing..
The wind caressing her hair...

Rey n n taani trips on a somethings n rey falls on her...
They were lost in each otehrs' eyes..
Rey moves her hairlocks from her face...
N pins its behind her ears...
Taani begins to tell something..
Rey keeps his finger on her lips-ssshhh
Taani looks at rey..
Rey moves closer to her face..
Taani closes her eyes..
Rey moves to her ears n whispers-koi hai humare alwaaa yahan..
Taani gets into senses n pushes rey of her..
They share an awkward glances at each other...


They walk... 
But later they finds out that they were being followed
by some guys who looked pretty much like goons..
Rey walks with her n holds her hands..
Taani looks at him..
Rey without even giving her any chance to speak-chup chaap chalo aur peeche mat dekhna...

Taani-par kyun..?
Rey keeps her finger on her lips..
Taarey eyelock..

Rey comes to senses...
n pulls her more..
Taani-dheere mera haath..
Rey-chalo..

Rey n taani starts to walk faster bt 
d goons increased their speed of their walkig..

But as rey n taani approached further they
 were surrounded by a group of elderly villagers with sticks..
Rey-ab yeh kya nayi moosibat hai..
Taani-ha
mujhe bhulayi kya.
Rey-tum nahi yeh jo samne hai..
Taani smiles...

One of the villagers comes forwards n asks-tum donon itne raat ko humara gaav main kya kar rahe ho?
Taani hids behind rey's shoulders  
n peeps through one of her eyes..
Some elderly women also comes n catches taani's
hand which made rey furious over what is happening..
taani looks at rey in shock..

One of the women asks taani-ek ladke saath aur woh bhi itne raat main kya kar rahi ho tum?
aur tumhare gharwallon ko pata bhi hai yeh sab,chalo humare saath 
hum tumhare gharwallon se baat karkar tumhe bhej denge..
Rey-ruko..
Everyone turns at him..
Rey-yeh meri patni hai..
Taani's eyes widened at rey...

Elderly woman leaves her hand..
Taani runs back to rey..
Taani still in confusion-patni
Rey winks at her.
Taani-ha ha patni..
Elderly woman-tumhare gale main mangal sutr kahan hai..
Taani in dramtic style-kya karoon dadi yeh bhi na,
bahut modern hai aur agar main mangal sutr pehnoon
toh bhi bhi inko pasandh nahi aathi..
Rey-ha
Women-oh accha...
Taani-pata hai aapko inke saath mera registr marriage hua hai..
Rey in mind-kab
Rey hits his hand on his head.,...
Everyone looks at each other n starts murmuring-
Taani in confused look looks at rey..
Rey-yeh kya kiya tumne
Tani-kya
Rey-tumhara kuch nahi ho sakatha..
Tani-ab kade kade main apki patni ban gayi,toh i think mere saath bahut kuch ho sakth hai..
Rey-oh hello..usmain bhi tumhari hi fyada hai..
Taani-apke beewi banne se accha toh to mere shaadi kisi jaanwar se ki hothi...
Rey-mera toh aaapke saath shadi kaarna hi  jeevan ka udesh tha na..

Villagers stares at them..
N dey laughs n tells yeh log sach main pati n patni hai...
One of the villagers comes forwards n tells- 
hum log tum dono ka poori reethi aur riwaaz ke saath shaadi kar waana chahthe hai...
Rey-what 
Taani-whaat to lagegegi na...
Rey-kya
Taani-iski kya zarrorat hai...
Vilager-bas hum log abhi bhi purane zamaane ke khayalat se hai,
to humein woh khakazaat waale shaddiyon main abi tak vishwaas nahi kar paya...
Rey-lekin humein thodi jaldi hai..
villagers-do din se iss jungle main tum log ghoom rahe hai aur keh rahi ho jaldi main hai..
Taani-woh hum raasta ghoom ho gayi hi..
Rey-ha
Villagers-hum bhi bahut pyaar karne wallon ko dekha hai.
Rey n taani looks at each other n shouts-pyaar aur hum..

Villager-to ek doosre shaadi kyun ki..
Rey n taani looks at each other helplessely...

Villagers-tum donon ek dossre ko shaadi tak dekh nahi sakthi..
Rey-dekhna bhi kaun chahtha hai..
Taani-kya kahan...
Rey-kuch nahi meri maa...
N dey were dragged into differnt houses...


Preacp-rey n taani comes closer vd each other with each rasam...
But something big awaits them?
will they come closer only to move away from each other..?

So guys,
hope u guys missed me...
i missed u all alot..
Thanks for all the wishes n comments..
So guys, i knw this one is a small update but sorry if this was boring,
i promise to give something bigger in next update in Lachu style..
So comment everyone..
i know i hve lots of pms 2 read..gve me sme time guys...dnt feel bad k...
Take care...


part6

Edited by Lachu_taarey - 07 May 2013 at 5:42am

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
nice chapter!!! it was sweet and cute!!!

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged
wow nice prt awsm 
now taarey marriage nice 
interesting thanks for PM n do 
it again kkk 

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:54am | IP Logged
Nice part really liked it
Thx 4 e pm Smile

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
OHH GREAT ONE DEAR...
FINALLY U UPDATED IT...
THANKS FOR THIS CUTE UPDATE...
TAAREY R IMPOSSIBLE YAAR
AB SHAADI BHI...
SEEMS INTRESTING
PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON AND DO PM
THNX 4 D PM TOO

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Awsum di it was lovely its was not at all boring precap is interesting n scary too plz update soon

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Nice ..update soon Smile

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Wow Lachu after ages got the update from you ... Thank you dear... Now come to the update... Very funny update the way Taani and Rey was fighting like husband and wife ans their dialogues were damn funny yaar... Teh dono kuchh Bhi bolte hain ik dooje ko... You written it beautifully dear... Now cant wait for next chapter Plz update it soon Kionki precap sounds pretty interesting ... Taarey are coming close and what is this something big is going to happen ... Plz-2 update it soon sweety :)

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