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Taarey ff:towards love-part9-ff completed (Page 20)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:07pm | IP Logged

 very sorry 4 commenting late... u re awesome ClapClapClapClapClap

first part was superb hilariousROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL mera to pet dukh gaya...jab we met ki yaad di ladi..
taani to national expresss hai... chalti hai to rukne ka naam hi nahi letiLOLSmileLOL love her.Wink
bichara rey ko nani nahi bagvan ki hi yaad dila di...LOL
 
second part was so funny n romantic too..LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLEmbarrassed... awesome
pls update soon.
 
 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
pls pls pls pls pls Cry
 update update update update pls pls pls Cry
Fast fast fastBig smile
i want to read it soon soon soon Wink

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 8:25am | IP Logged
lachu i can do only thisROFL.. taani is like a radioLOLLOL..uff .. i was laughing like hell all through out.. how do u manage to write it so funny yet so sweet yet so beautiful .. awww.. i so loved the update.. taarey were so cute n taani.. firecrackerWinkLOL

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Lolzz rofl
Googly boogly story
M luving it!!
Next part plzz jaldi haan!!
Cant wait
Its really AWESOME

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Awesome part, loll, taani talks soo much hehehe

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Hey guys,
Thanks for all d comments,
Enjoy reading this Update..

Taarey ff:Towards Love-part3

Taani:oh ji mujhe neendh aa rahi hai
Rey:ab kya main tumhe gana sunavoon
Taani:nahi ji agar aap apne kadvi moof se sunayenge
mere neendh ka toh band baj jayegi na
Rey:whatever
Taani:ab jaooji
Rey:kahan
Taani:to aap kahan soyenge
Rey:bed pe
Taani:to main kahan 
Rey:neeche
Taani:kyun ji
Rey:tumne hi to kaha na tumhe sona hai
Taani:aapke saath nahi
Rey:to  main neeche sovoon
Taani:woh aapki marzi hai,
ab buck buck karna bandh karro aur mujhe sone do
Rey:Look hu s talking bat keeping quiet,tumhe quiet ka q b pata hai
Taani:gud ni8 n turns off d light
Rey turns on d light..

Rey sits on d bed..
Taani sits opoosite 2 him n der s only 1 pillow n dey luk at each other..
n suddenly tries 2 lay down but in d process hitis each other's head...
Taarey eyelock..

Suddnly power goes off..
Taani catches reys's shirt..
Rey sees her face thru d light cming from d windows..
Eyes closed n lips murmuring smething n her hands clutched on to his shirt..
he could hear her breathing now..
Rey moves her hair from her face:hey u k
Taani nods dat she s not..
Taani:mujhe andhere se dar lagthi hai
But hearing this rey bursts out laughing..

Taani opens her eyes:kyun ji
Rey tries hardly nt to laugh..
Taani was seeing him laughing for d first time n she saw it clearly behind his laugh dr was smething bothering him
Rey sees taani staring at him:kya hua
Taani:aap hass kyun rahe ho
Rey:nahi tumhe dar bhi lagthi hai yeh soch kar hassi aa gaya..
Taani:hahahaha
Rey:ab sojao..

Both slept peacefully until disturbed by d early morning sunlight..
Taani's leg were mostly on rey  n her hands moved n hit on rey's face..
N he woke vd a shout-ahhh
Taani wakes up by opening oly on eye to see y he was shouting-kya hua
Rey-tum batminton khel rahe ho kya...
Taani opens both of her eyes-iss waqt kyu ji
Rey-toh mara kyun aur yeh apna pair hatavoo
Taani:kaha se
Rey-mere sir se
mere upar jo tumhara pair tumne rakha hai woh udavo

Taani-oh sorry ji
Both gets up..
Rey luks at d watch..
Rey-damit v r late..
Taani-kya ji
Rey-9 baj rahe hai,humara bus mis hogaya..
Taani-yeh sab aapki galthi hai
Rey-accha woh kaise
Taani-apne toh kaha tha na apke yeh gol matol jaisa watch main alarm rakh dega..to?
Rey-maine toh rakha tha par tumhara karate ke wajas se rata bar main so nahi paayi
Taani-aww...main karate warte nahi lethi haan...
Rey-accha to woh kunfy tha kya
Taani--kunfu
But den d  door was knocked..
Rey-kaun
Taani-kaun hoga
Rey-tumhe lene keliye aaye honge
Taani-kaun
Rey-china se
Taani-kyun mera toh koi rishthaedaar nahi hai wahan
Rey-tumhe kunfu sikhane keliye
Taani-mujhe nahi seekhna
Rey hits his head on d wall..
Rey opens d door.It was d receptionist..
Rey-tumhe hume udana chahiye tha na
Receptionsit-mujhe laga aap donon ko 
Rey understod wat he was cming to tell dem-k v r leavin nw.

Rey closes d door..
Taani washes her face n cms out n gets ready..
Rey-ab chalne ke iraada hai kya 
Taani-nahi to bhagne ka
Rey-wahi to kar rahi hona 2 din se tum
Taani-thank u ji(pouting her lips)

Rey  n tanni starts walking..
Taani-oh ji
Rey-ab kya hai
Taani-maine toh apne baare main bataya apne abi tak kuch nahi bataya..
Rey-maine kahana mera naam aur main dancer hoon..isse alawa plse tum chal sakthi ho.
Taani-nai main to itni der se bhangra kar rhai hoona
Rey-tum jo bhi kar rahi ho,bahut jaldi karo,i think hum phir se jungle main guss gaye
Taani-hey bhagwaan
Rey sits down-jab se tumhe mila hoon tab se kuch na kuch gadbad hote rehthe hai,moosibat
Taani-oye ji,mera bhi kuch sone pe suhaga nahi ho gayi hai aapse milne ke baat,kadoos kayinka
Rey-kya bhola
Taani-kadoos kadoos
Rey gets up..
Rey keeps a step closer..
Wind started flowiing quickly..
Taani hits d tree..
Rey keeps his hands locking her from both d sides..
Rey keeps one of his hads on her hair/
Taani clsoes her eyes
Rey takes out a haystick frm her hair..
n shows it to her..

N walks..

Taani also start following.
Rey in mind(finally chup hoagayi)

Taani-oye ji suno
Rey hits his hand on his forehead..n turns
Rey-ab kya hua 
Taani-hum aise kab tak chalthe rahenge
Rey-tab tak tumhara peecha nahi chootha tab tak
Taani-woh to delhi main hogaya
Rey-to ab tumhare man main mujhe chodne ki koi irrada nahi hai haina
Taani smiles-haan ji
Rey hits his head on his tree
Taani-ab sir fodna bandh karo aur chalo
raat ho raha hai
Rey-(imitating her)raat ho raha hai

They reaches  village..
They meet a group pf villagers who vr siting under a tree
Taani:namste (n bents down 2 touch d feet of one of d elders)
N stares at rey who was luking here n there n shows sign to bent down..
Rey-what
Taani-paav chuvo
Rey-watever n bent down...
One of the villagers asked what dey vr doing so late at d night in
d  forest n rey told dat dey vr going 2 delhi..
Some old women came n asked taani n rey to come feshn up n hve sme food..
Taani came back dresed in gagra choli while rey was still in his shirts n jeans..
Rey was dumbfounded when he saw taani..
She was circling to see d frills of her gagra..
Rey was watching her..

Rey:wow 
Taani:kaise lag rahi ho ji
Rey:diwali ki pataka jaise lag rahi ho,
kitna chamk rahi ho tum.wah

Taani:kadoos

They both had food..

Taani was thirsty n takes a bottle n drinks..

Rey was about to drink it but it smelled very bad n he understud it was alchol but by den taani had cmpleted drinking..
Rey luks up-ab isse hosh main to sambhal na mujse se nahi ho raha hai ab isske jo bhi hosh bacha hai woh bhi gaya to mera toh band baj jayega..
kyun kar rahe ho aap mere saath aisa


Precap-
Taani starts dancing vd d vilagers
N rey picks her up n goes 2 d near by cottage..

Hmmm...i smell romance..do u ?


So guys,
I hope u all liked this part..
Next update chhiye tomujhe 6- pages of comments bhi chahiye..
Otherwise no update..
Silent readers comment plse..

part4


Edited by Lachu_taarey - 20 April 2013 at 3:15am

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 6:03am | IP Logged
omg
awsm
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awsm updat

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 6:06am | IP Logged
again a hilarious update bt bit romantic too...Wink finally they r nw official khadoos nd moosibat... Smile luvd the update yar... nd mujhe to precap se romance ki bohot achi smell a rahi hai nd man me ladoo v foot raha hai so plzzz yar do update soon

Edited by samihatabassum - 18 April 2013 at 6:17am

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