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Taarey ff:towards love-part9-ff completed (Page 14)

riachandnani Senior Member
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Awesome update! Smile plz pm me if possible

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
nice update pls continue soon &  pls pm me

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wow...it was awesome...i was laughing lyk hell imagining the situation...hehehe...truly awesome...plz pm me

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awesome concept ya continueSmile

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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Oh ji, u asking kya acha laga? To ji suno , entire update ko hum super se upar ka rank dunga.
Yar lachu, my face had a wide smile from 1st line to last. Taani!! Incredible man!! Kya ladki hai yar!!LOL Puri pagal!!poor rey couldnt stop laughingLOL.. When she said the 1st hello ji itself i knew this girl is gonna b a fire crackerLOL and it so happened!!an awesome start lachu, lovd it

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
excellent plot dear... Taani paagal hai(cute). n bechara rey...  i loved it dear.. n thanks for ur note. continue soon..

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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
awespme story... good to c khadoos n moosibat bak in a new version! :P
Plz pm me!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Hey guys,
Thanks for all the comments 
Enjoy reading this update..

Taarey FF:Towards Love-part2(season2)

Rey and Taani looks at each other..
Rey without telling a word to taani get down on the train leaving taani to struggle with her baggage.
Taani:kadoos kayinka
Meanwhile rey who got down at d station.
It was night n d place written on d board was not so clear..
There were only a staion guard n a few guards at d station...

Rey luks up at sky-phew finall uss moosibat se peecha choot gayi..
Taani:oye ji ruko
Rey closes his eyes n tightens his fists n luks up at d sky0bahut dushmani haina aapko mujhse..
Taani:oye ji(running n came stands near him vd d baggages)
Rey ignores her n walks..
Taani keeping her bags down runs behind him n stands infront of him.
Taani-ji aapko pata hai yeh kaunsi jagah hai
Rey removes his specs-nahi(n walks)

Taani turns back to see her bagaage..
But suddnely rey hears a scream n turns back n see taani screaming n he runs to her..
Rey-will u jus stop whatevr u r doing coz its really making d dogs bark n its night..
Taani-kya ji
Rey-omfg,chillana bandh karo,kutto ko bhi pagal kar dogi tum..
Taani-mera bags
Rey-wat bags
Taani-mera sammna nahi dikh rahi hai
Rey-raat main andhera hota hai
Taani-maine kab kaha roshini hoti hai
Rey-isliye teek se dikhaaayi nahi deta 
Taani-pata hai mujhe ji,par mera samman jo yahan pe tha woh nahi hai..
Rey-to ismain kya kar sakthi hoon n (turns n walks)

Taani-eerrr kitna attitude hai..
N walks behind him..
Rey turns n taani behind him..
Rey-mera peecha kyun kar rahi ho tum?
Taani-aap mera aage chal rahi toh ismain meri kya galthi hai..
Rey luks up-mujhe shaanthi dena ka iraada nahi hai na aapko
Taani-kisse baat kar rahe ho ?
aapko mere tarah  akele main baat karne ka aadat hai ji?
Rey hits his hand on his head.
Rey-pagal nahi hoon main.
Taani-toh main aapko pagal lagthi hoon
Rey-apna apna pov ko main kaise badal doon (walks leaving taani confused)
Taani-ajjeb aadmi hai..

Rey had walked very far..
Taani-oye ji,mujhe bhi saath main le chalo ji..
Rey-tum koi chotti bachi thodi na ho..
Taani-aklei ladki hoon,koi mujhe udake le chalo toh..
Rey-tumhe koi udake nahi chalne wala agar le bhi liya 1 km baad phek doonga jo koi bhi insaan hai toh..
Taani-kyun ji..
Re-*sigh* tum unhe paaka chuki hogi tab tak..
Taani-kadoos
Rey-what
ab chalo bhi yahan se..

Rey n taani gets in d middle of a forest..
Taani-aapko nahi lagtha humara raasta thodi bhatak gayi hai..
Rey-tum yahan pehle bhi aa chuki hai kya
Taani-nahi toh
Rey-phir tumhe kaise lagega ki raasta bhatak gayi hai..
Taani-common sense hai ji
Rey-woh hai tumhare paas
Taani-accha ji,bahut karaaab joke tha,aapko pata hai
Rey-tumhe jungle bhi bahut pasand hai kya
Taani-haaanji aapko kaise pata chala ji..
Rey smiles.. n starts picking up d sticks..
Taani-kya kar hai ho ji..
Rey ignroes her question n piles up d stick n lights up d bonfire n sits down...
Taani was quite impressed..
Rey-invitation chahiye..
Taani-kiskeliye
Rey-bait jao..
Taani-teek hai ji..
aapko bhook lagi hai kya?
Rey-main isaan hoon,toh bhook bhi lagtha hai mujhe...
Taani-mujhe bhi
Rey was igniting d fire mroe vd d dry leaves..
Taani-aapko pata hai...
Rey-dere she goes again..
Taani aapko pata hai aaj na meri shaadi ho rahi hoti agar main ghar pe thi toh..
Rey looks at her n in mind(pagaal ,but dr was smethng vch was disturbing him)
Rey-dulha bach gaya 
Taani-kya
Rey-nthng
Taani-maina apni
Rey-prince charming ko wait kar rahi hogai,bata chuki ho tum mujhe..
Taani  smiles-aap bholo ji aapko kaunsi typ ladki chahiye
Rey-mujhe koi nahi chahiye...
Taani-kyun ji
Rey-main akela hi teek hoon
Taani-bhudaape main kaun dekhaage aapko,
Rey-main na oldage home main jaake rehloonga..
Taani-nahi ji agar
Rey-please 

Taani-k ji..

BUt dey hear a noise..
Taani-aapne suna ji
Rey-kaan work tha hai mera..
Taanichalo ji,agr sher ho gaya toh..
Rey-uska diner ho gaya samjhlo,(n gets up)
Taani-ruko ji...mujhe bhi saat le chalo
Rey-mere paas koi option bhi toh nahi..
Rey shows his hand to make taani get up...
Taani gives her hand..
Rey pulls her up...
Taani came crushing o his chest..

"First taarey eyelock"
But suddnely fey hear d same weird noise again..
Rey catches her hands n runs..
Taani:oye ji olympics main jaane ka iraada hai kya..
Rey:nahi apna jaan aur saath tumhara bhi bachana ka iraada hai...kya karoon nah chathe hui bhi karn apadna raha hai..

Taani n rey reaches the highway..
Taani:ab haath chod tho
Rey:mere koi shauak nahi tha tumhara haath pakdne ka..
Taani:main aisa kab kaha ji..
ab aage
Rey:aage kya raastha hai..
Taani:dikh rahi hai mujhe ji
maine bhola aage hum kahan rehenge..
Rey:tuhe yahan koi 5star hotel dikh rahi hai,nahi na,..toh chalo koi hotel milne tak...
Taani:mera pair dukh rhai hai..
Rey:to yahan baite raho,main jaa rahi hoon..
Taani:ruko ji..

Taani n rey walked for while..
Taani:aap humesha aisi hi ha ya koi wajah hai..
Rey-tumse matlab..
Taani:maine aise hi poochliya ji..
Rey-main tumhe hiltler lagthi hoon
Taani-nahi ji bas thoada kadoos...
Rey-kya
Taani:dekho naak pe hai gussa aapka..
Rey spots a hotel...
Rey-deko
Taani-kya
Rey-taarey
Taani-woh to upar haina
(rey hits his hand on his head again)

Rey and taani walks into d hotel..
It was kind of tacky place with a middle aged recpitionsit in wollen shirt n cap along vd a boy reading a book..
Rey-hu kahin aur chalenge
Taani-kyun aapne kahin aur hotel kholkar rakha hai aage..
Rey-taani meri baat suno
Taani  goes into d hotel.
Rey-taani


Taani-namste ji
Receptionist-hello madam ji..
Taani:hume na ek kamra chahiye.
Rey was bangig his head on d wall..
Taani-oh ji suno toh..
Rey-huh
Taani-aap wahan dewwar ke saath kya kar raha hai ji?
Rey-nahi aisi haal chaal pooch raha hoon?
Taani-oh teek hai ji
Receptionist had weird expresion-oh ji kitne gante ke hisaab se chahiye..
Taani-hume naa subah tak hi chahiye..
Receptionst-subah hone main abhi kuch hi gante hai..
Taani-accha(luking at d clock)
ji suno toh kitne gante ke hisaab se chahiye
Rey-tum decide karlo(keeping his hands on his chin cvering his mouth frm not burst into laugh)
Taani-k ji hum na 4 chaar gante ke hisaab se chaihye..tab tak humara kaam ho jayega..
Rey pays for d room..
n smiles at receptionist..

Rey-tum chalo main aathi hoon

Rey enquires abt d next bus frm here 2 delhi..

Rey comes into d room-
Rey-delhi jaane waala bus kal subah 6 baje hai..
to humein 5:30 tak nikalna chahiye..
Rey sits on d bed..
Taani gets up.
Taani-paas mat aana mera
Rey-mujhe tumhe koi intrest  nahi hai..
Taani-kyun nahi,aap kya woh hai
Rey:nahi main bilkul teek hoon k..
Taani-to
Rey-tumhare problem kya hai

Precap-
Rey n taani misses d bus..
They goes to a village..


Hmmm...taani n rey r meant to be with each other,from d beginning which they are totally unaware of...
So lets c how this journey brings them together forever...

My piece of sharing time-
we dont know what people we are destined to meet,
but ppl hu r in our life r meant to b there for a reason,
Never ignore a person hu hve been dr for u for
sme1 hu jus came in ur lyf nw..
Coz whn dat person leaves u vl left all alone..
So keep smiling n keep luving d ppl hu care for u no matter what..


So guys,
Now my usual dialogue-COMMENT PLEASE, nahi toh NO NEXT UPDATE...
SILENT READERS COMMENT PLEASE...

Part3



Edited by Lachu_taarey - 18 April 2013 at 5:52am

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