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Blush of first love!! KR twoshot!updated last part (Page 5)

Deetha. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arnavkushi70

Awesome OS. Monkey Emoticons


new reader~!!! YAY!!Dancing

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
wow
beautiful
di app to merey guru g ho
apki wjha sey to maney b likhna tart kiya
but u never read my work
leave it
but os its amzing
i have no words
aTTiTude_dIvA IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 3:50am | IP Logged
it was a treat yaar...
 
really!!
 
very different story...very satisfying...
 
loved it all...and the way u carried it!
 
hoping to read one more part of this...if possible plzzz!!
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 5:56am | IP Logged
awesome story.. loved it.. it was brilliant.. beautifully written part.. loved d way kria 1st reacted wen he said he s d prince of d kingdom n then her shocked reaction wen she saw d royal band.. awesome.. loved d samosa part he getting drowned in her blabbering... loved d scene after kria's mom yelled at her.. really hate kria's mom.. i didnt think romance ll happen this soon but loved d way he showed his love for her n d way kria reacted to it... end was superb she ve d trust that he ll come back tomo too.. awesome os.. in love wit it..
shelly_Arsha Goldie
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Posted: 13 April 2013 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
omg omg! this was toh like superr se bohott ooperrr!!
I loved it! from the start to the end!
rey falling down, kriya lending a hand, rey fallen for her beauty at first sight Big smile
and then kriya showing him around.. haye the samosa wala part was too cute,
kriya buying the samosas with her only 2 sikhas left
kriyas mom not giving her food..aww but then rey climbing the tree for her hayeee Day Dreaming too cutee
Loved how u showed kriya's emotions towards her not getting parents love and also reys how he felt sorry for her..
the "boys climbing trees and girls can't" part was really good!
and loved how u kept reyaansh's name ansh for short and not rey...
ansh hoya na asli yuvraaj vala naam Wink
hayee how can i forget their romantic scene at the endDay Dreaming
it was great, amazing, awsome! sabkuch!!
Rey was looking for the opportunity since so long.. finally he got it!!
Amazing OS!! loved this one! totally different.. Clap
Abhi pms bhejay nai kya? mujhe nai milla.. keep up the great work!! Smile


Edited by shelly_Arsha - 13 April 2013 at 7:22pm
Deetha. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 14 April 2013 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
thanks a lot people for all your sweet comments!! and yeah being the lazy bum I am maine PM s nahi bheje... will be sending them today!!!Tongue

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
lovely os...amazing...
Jst Luvd it..





Edited by --RAINA-- - 15 April 2013 at 1:52am
Princess_Devil IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
AWESOME OS...
its totaaly different story...loved it...
n ur an AMAZING writer...
thnx fr d pm...

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