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Blush of first love!! KR twoshot!updated last part (Page 23)

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Posted: 05 August 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
u shud have become sizzler long back dee... -_-

kinna slow spam karti hai

Meesocute Goldie
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Posted: 06 August 2013 at 12:56am | IP Logged
This is best ending i can think to dis os...
U are best deetha di...
This was just fantastic...
pallavi.14 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 06 August 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
maine yeh OS pehle kyun nahi pada... if would have not seen the link on fb mereko kabhi nahi pata chalta iske baare mein...Unhappy

since now i finally read it... my mind is in awe...
how can you come up every time with such beautiful concepts this was really beautiful and literary piece of art i can term as...


and your words and way describing actually made me trail down the lanes of royal romance... ahh i so love you deetha for writing such a serene concept...

be it kriya's innocene all the while in both the parts or rey's his highness attitude i just fell more and more for it...

and the last part was amazing..wow... she ran away because she made him hers everything i liked that fact...i thought at first rey forgot her or something since its been 6 months bt nope he came all way in search for her...

and that kiss on rock was beautiful...

he in a way got her accustomed with all the royal mannerism, and his family didnt objected kriya being a normal gal... that was graceful...


First night ka kya kahun ba main...in a word just perfect and mesmerizing  ending to this work...


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Posted: 06 August 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
this is the best ending...Smile

u beautified each and every thing with ur superb description...
must say dear u r an awsome writter..Big smile
it is like each and everything is playing infront of my eyes..

loved it to the core...Hug

Smilekeep writing..:)Smile


Edited by sumimita - 06 August 2013 at 10:27am
pinkypanrocks Senior Member
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Posted: 06 August 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
kahani mei twist bohut achi hai...and of courrse superb ending...
shradha_23 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 August 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Loved it
Amazing
yogini64 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 08 August 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged

Omg!!!! ... I did'nt expected ki iska ek part aur hoga...Shocked

But cinderella ko apne prince ke paas to jana hi tha na atlast...Wink

Lol... bechari shaadi se bach ke bhaag rhi h... aur rey ab aaya hai...Embarrassed

Ohh... 6 months lag gaye maharaj ko patane me... chalo.. ready to hua...LOL

Ek aur kissie... banti hai re... itne time baad bhi to mile hain...Blushing

2 saal???... deethu... tu na bahot zaalim hai... Angry

Tujhe tadpaana achha lagta hai na??? ... masters ki degree karing kya 2 yrs me???ROFL

Finally... wedding... atlast prince n princess.. together...Big smile

I totally loved it... so sweet n cute...Hug

Oh god... I hope tera net jaldi thik ho...Ouch

Coz tere pm dekhe toh sadiyan beet gyi hain...Tongue

Aur meko pata bhi nhi chalta ki kya kya update ho gya... tu gallery bhi nhi update karti apni...Cry

Dead_Nightmare IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 September 2013 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Finally update mil gaya
Haiahahahahahaha
Kitna wait kiya maine iss update ke liye ha
But finally mil gaya update
Its so amazing update
I loved it
Thanx so much for the update

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