Blush of first love!! KR twoshot!updated last part - Page 5

Just a mindblowing one..i truely love it,realy touched my heart..most fav. One this is truely magical one..starting mei jab hum aaya toh thoda ajeeb lga bt jaise jaise story badti gyi i was lost in it... Got emotional wen kriya ko uski mom ne vo sabh kha n uske bhai ne dhaka diya 😭 as if i'm watching a movie...for the first tym i love the kiss scene like u potrayed it vrna mei toh kiss vala part jldi jldi khiska deti hu...beautifuly written..mei toh is os ko aab chodne nhi vali..bilkul isko pdte rahungi n bas parso school jake sbko padh ke sunaungi, i love u for this beautiful os 😭 plz wrong way mat lena bahut log aungli utha chuke hai 😭 plz iska ek aur part likh do plz plz plz plz plz 😭 i hope u don't mind requesting u for it bt itz u'r choice now

Sory i don't have an acount on fanfiction.net neither i know how to use or make it.. can't cmnt dere..dat os was awsum too..bt stil mei toh is vali os ki dewani ban gyi huEdited by Riyaluvka2s - 11 years ago

amazing os di 

awww
beautiful os di .

 wow truely wow comes out from my mouth deetha after reading i loved it to the core yaar its best os till day i have read ...nd i am left just speechless now yaar ...keep writing nd pm me for sure😊👏👏👍🏼superbb work yaar!!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3534377?pn=110join cc guys

omg deethu!!! 

love u dher saara 😛

this is freaking awesome ... 🤗

one of ur best work ... 👏

mujhe aisi innocent stories bahot cute lagti h..😃

coz rey is so lost in kriya 

very well written 😊

I can visualise it .. dude 😛

his thoughts  .. his eyes travelling through her each n every part 😉

& the kiss atlast... hayeee ☺️

meko to iska 2nd part chahiye... dono ki shaadi dekhni h yaar 😎

mindblowing OS...loved it very very much

ohhh god it ended...😔..danmmit...

i wish ye OS kabhi khatm na hua hota...

i just loved it to core...

i was sooo lost in this...

you know i really love these kind of stories...

starting me i thought k rey apni bike ko horse bula rha hai.🤣

i mean mene nhi socha tha k ye iss tarah ka OS hai...*in a good sense ofcrse*

i just loved it loved it loved it sooo much...

i m not forcing you to continue this...

in any way can u please write some more stuff like this...

Deetha.. Dis one was beautiful ! I wish it never had ended.. Seriously.. Plz continue dis OS.. Wana read d story ahead!

No body can u beat when comes to emotions+romance.. Sachi !

Reyaansh.. A prince.. Kriya.. A normal gal.. First meet.. Fights.. Friendship.. Feeling of something different.. Realisitation.. Understanding..

Me speechless 😳