Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Virika OS - Hadh kar di aapne

mahimarewari Newbie

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
 Hadh kar di aapne!!!
"Arre bhaiyya, yeh thik se lagaiye... Kahin koi kami nahi rehni chahiye.. Mere bade bhai Viren Vadhera first anniversary hain aaj" said a very enthusiastic Virat hovering here and there.
Everybody was busy with the preparations of viren and jeevika's first wedding anniversary. 
Jeevika was walking up and down in her room and calling Viren. With every passing moment, her anger was rising to a higher level.
She hears a knock on the door. She smiles a little thinking its Viren but acts to be very angry and upset with him. 
"Yeh koi vakt hai ghar aane ka, Virenji??" asked jeevika while opening the door.
She find Manvi and not Viren standing at the door holding the saree that jeevika was to wear  for the function. 
"Mannu, tu hain???" asked jeevika.
"Haan di, par aap itne gusse mein kyun ho?" asked Manvi.
Virat enters the room. 
"Kya hua bhabhi? Bhai abhi tak nahi aaye?"
"Nahi Virat, laparvahi ki bhi had hoti hain. Aaj ke din bhi late? Itne to kya kaam tha inhe? Unka phone kab se switched off aa raha hain"
A tiger turned pussy cat Viren enters to see his wife burning with anger. 
VirMan leave the room. Viren closes the door.
"Jeevika..." said Viren in a low scared voice.
"Aap ke kapde vahan rakhe hain. Change kar lijiye." 
Saying this she goes to change.
Viren changes in the room itself. Jeevika comes out from the washroom and Viren is mesmerized seeing her eternal beauty. 
Even jeevika cannot stop herself from looking at Viren, but she is angry, so whenever Viren looked otherways, she stole a glance. 
Jeevika tries to tie the dori of her blouse, but in vain. She stands facing the mirror. Viren walks up to her. He touches her hands which were on the dori and ties the dori. Jeevika blushes a little and then tirns to leave as she is still angry. 
Viren catches her by the wrist and pulls her towards him. She bangs on his chest. 
"Jeevika, i am sorry.." 
"Arre virenji aap sorry kyun keh rahe hain? Aap ki kahan koi galti hain? Aap zarur kisi important kaam mein fas gaye honge..."
"Jeevika, mein jaanta hun mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi hain, par kya karun, mein fas gaya tha."
"Aur aap ne ek phone bhi karna zaroori nahi samjha?"
"Mere phone ki battery dead ho gayi thi."
"Har baat ka jawaab hain na aap ke paas Viren ji? Chhodiye muhe aap se koi baat nahi karni"
And she barges out of the room.
Virika cut the cake. Everyone is busy meeting and talking. Suddenly the lights go off.
And the spotlight falls on Viren who is standing behind Jeevika.
"Shaadi ke vakt kasam khayi thi ki har janam ka har ek pal tumhare saath bitaunga, par aaj jab usi vaade ko ek saal pura hua, to meine apna vaada tod diya. Aur vaade ke saath apni biwi ka dil bhi tod diya. "
Jeevika turns to find Viren on his knees. 
"I am really sorry." And jeevika smiles. He extends his hand for a dance which she readily accepts. 
Viren gets up and pulls Jeevika towards him. And the song SAANS starts. 
With every minute passing, the dance grew passionate and loving. They were in their own dreamworld, not caring about the people around them.
The song ends with Jeevika's back towards Viren. She turns crimson red. All applaud and proceed for dinner.
After the party ends, Jeevika is in her room removing the last piece of jewellery and remembering the dance blushing hard. Viren walks up to her and slips his hand in her waist and hugs her from back. 
"Kya baat hai Mrs. Vadhera, i never knew aap itna achha dance kar leti hain..."
He turns her towards her and softly places strand of hair falling on her face behind her ears. He pulls her closer. Jeevika avoids eye contact.
"Bohot raat ho gayi hai.."
Viren placed a soft kiss on her cheeks and turns to go. 
Jeevika stops him by placing her hand on his shoulder.
She also pecks him lightly on the cheek.
"Kya baat hai Mrs. Vadhera.."
"Virenji, aap bhi na kabhi kabhi had karte hain... "
Viren lifts her up in his arms and goes towards the bed to give her all the love she missed the entire day.

Hey everyone,
This is my first attempt of writing an OS. Please ignore the mistakes.
Comments and feedbacks  are most welcome.

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..Amrita.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
yey...m the 1st 1 to comment...awesone story dear...luvd the way viren apologized & the last bit...romantiic one...awesome...do write more & more

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SJ6... Goldie

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Posts: 2250

Posted: 10 April 2013 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Loved it babe,
Y dont u coninue

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alonelove IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 October 2012
Posts: 3038

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Loved the way viren said sry to jeevika
Gud update

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urmil Goldie

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Posts: 1148

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 12:15am | IP Logged
it was nice...so sweet...

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Fari_15 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 27 April 2012
Posts: 3415

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Amazing!! Really liked it a lot'

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-Aaliya.KryAn- IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5760

Posted: 11 April 2013 at 12:26am | IP Logged
awesome os mahima!!
really loved it
doesnt seem like this one is your first..!!
do write more and pm me too!!

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-Haju- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Viren's line was amazoling
Dance Heart
And last bit was amazing

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