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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
StarWow...I'm speechless...

I did not expect such a fine writing ShockedClap

I will tell more... Let me have dinner


Edited by Rolzz - 12 April 2013 at 1:51pm

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rolzz

StarWow...I'm speechless...

I did not expect such a fine writing ShockedClap

I will tell more... Let me have dinner
me tooo..dint expect!!Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 12:55pm | IP Logged

part 3 Embarrassed



"If I die, I will wait for you, do you understand? No matter how long. I will watch from beyond to make sure you live every year you have to its fullest, and then we'll have so much to talk about when I see you again…"

"It's hard being left behind…. It's hard to be the one who stays." 

Someone tapped on my shoulder and I woke up in a jerk from my sleep.  I saw a nurse is standing in front of me. She got scared I guess,she moved back a little and called out my name.

 " Mr. JK?"  I nodded my head. " Doc. Sailaja is calling you ,she is in her cabin."  I mumbled "Thanks" under my breath and headed towards doc cabin.

I knocked on door for a couple of times and then went inside. She was standing near window and her back is facing me. " Hmm.." I made sound so that she will turn .

 Doc .Sailaja , she is the only one in my life who supports me and gives me courage inspite of my Mistake.  She is like my mom to me.

She turned and standing there like a statue. "I suppose you called me for something important" . It sounds rude,but I cant help when she is not giving any clue about happenings. She was dreading to tell me something, worried about the incident or  is it more dreadful ? many thoughts are buzzing in my mind.

" if you are giving a demo about "how to be silent?" then please, its not working.  Will you tell me why you asked me to come here?"

She sighed and faced me. Seriousness and worry can be seen in her eyes. " she responded finally."

I just looked at her. Yes she woke up from Coma after so many years.

"But ….i don't think so now there is any use. She went to back to her state again".

I just slammed my hand on her desk and glared at her.  How could she even think of giving up? All these years I have waited for her,yearned for her,craved for her love,touch and smile.  And here she says there is NO USE!

"You know very well that I can afford Hospital charges and im not bankrupt. Till she comes back to consciousness she stays here. That's Final!".

I was enraged. Why everyone are after my ammulu? I turned and took long strides but her next line stopped me in my tracks.

"She stopped breathing ,very few chances. If you act like stubborn kid then im afraid".

I turned to face her..she is crying. What is she saying? Am I that cruel? Am I asking too much?

I don't know what happened for next few seconds. I was on floor and crying bitterly. She cradled my face and whispered few words. Those words are not registered.

What will I do now? What will happen to me? Oh god, please don't take her.

My whole world is collapsed. i stood up  and rushed towards my soul, didn't care about  the people who are staring at me. Just barged into her room with force and i…………….was halted. Horrified with the scene before  me.

The hospital staff were removing her Oxygen mask , various tubes from her body. What the heck ??!!! I grabbed a ward boy by collar and pushed him, grasped nurse elbow and pushed her to the wall. I put back her oxygen mask and was checking metres. Doc  Sailaja followed after me, she was clearly didn't expect her staff will do something like this. she immediately went to look after her. I was unable to gauge my anger towards these two creatures.  My irritation reached peaks.

" how dare you touch her? Who the hell are you ?" I punched the ward boy on his cheek. He flunged and holding his cheek with his left hand.  Was moving towards the nurse who removed the mask and she immediately backed away seeing me … doc Sailaja came in between and she dragged me towards the bed. She checked every instrument and assured me that my jaan is breathing. Doc put her hand on my shoulder and patted my back.

She questioned her staff now.

"why did you people do this? Who told you ? now don't stand like a statue and answer me Dammit!"

"sorry mam Doc Niharika told us that she is no more and she all these equipment shall move to other room.".

I was shocked.  Doc Niharika? Nothing is making sense. Why on earth she wants to kill ammulu? Twisted my neck and looked at perplexed Doc. She was about to question further, but dropped it and suspended them from their jobs for few days. She faced me with equal shocking face. We neither had any idea why Doc Niharika said this so. Doc Niharika is one of the most reputed doc's and very good at her work. Niharika handles ammulu's case when doc Sailaja is not available.

Nothing is making sense. I have to resolve everything . Sailaja left without uttering any word.

I sat on the bed and looking at the most beautiful gal on earth makes me forget all around. Im  smiling again. Caressed her face gently and bend down a gave a peck on her fore head. " you are hearing me, I know very well. Common now, get up. Enough of your sleep. Don't you want to come out of your dreamland? Here it is much more beautiful.

 You used to make fun of people who sleep for long time. Now, I don't want anyone to tease you same way. You are good gal right? Ammulu get up. "

As usual no answer. Waiting is one more most painful task to do.

I've learned that waiting is the most difficult bit, and I want to get used to the feeling, knowing that you're with me, even when you're not by my side.

Just sat there ,looking at her and remembering all the good old memories. 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Awww...are u gonna kill ammalu???CryDead
 
 
what happend?? when can i read about the accident? where is the kid???
why she went back to coma?
 
CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rolzz

Awww...are u gonna kill ammalu???CryDead
 
 
what happend?? when can i read about the accident? where is the kid???
why she went back to coma?
 
Cry
 

do u want story to end in 10 parts? Confused

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KittuPratzz

[QUOTE=Rolzz]Awww...are u gonna kill ammalu???CryDead
 
 
what happend?? when can i read about the accident? where is the kid???
why she went back to coma?
 
Cry
 

do u want story to end in 10 parts? Confused
Keep writing... am enjoying... dont listen to stupid customers... the wait is worth

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 1:15am | IP Logged
a rant post on the way!!! WinkLOL

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
aahan..only two people?

i am jumping in 

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