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TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 (Page 45)

...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Edited :
Fabulous update GargiClap
I had this whole image in my head of how the swayamvar would  be presented ...  and Guess What?  U WENT BEYOND MY EXPECTATION Thumbs Up . The entire scene was an absolute treat to read.  Poor Raja Keshav Singh ...  got beheadedLOL!  (BTW - I visualised his torso still standing upright with his head rolling away to 1 cornerROFL). Rajkumari  was tricked into revealing the truth by Shauraya ...  well, I'm not surprised - he is a geniusWink!  I wonder what the 2 kings would decide about Chandralekha's futureErmm?  It'll have to be something in favour of Shaurya Pratab  ...  or there'll be a massacre , I TELL YOU Evil Smile!
Desperate to read more ,
please continue soon,
thanks for the scrapSmile.

Edited by ...navina... - 03 July 2013 at 8:57am

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andy.a IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Great and awsome update gargiClap
chand is so stubborn, i was surprised that she went for a second marriage just because she felt shaurya hid the truth fron herOuch
i agree with kurwaki, doing this hurt her more than than shaurya
saurya's entry was shockingShocked
it was brutal, he killed innocents
and when he beheaded that prince with his sword, i felt so shocked...i felt fear
sharya can be scary when he wants
but i feel it was chand who was responsible for bringing this crual side of shaurya
now she has to bear the brunt of her arrogence
wasn't the whole kingdom brought to shame because of her??
what decision will the her father take??
i dont think it will be anything positive...
looking forward for what happenes next
update soonBig smile

Edited by andy.a - 02 July 2013 at 11:13pm

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-Kritika- Goldie

Joined: 03 September 2012
Posts: 1325

Posted: 02 July 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
i loved it maza aa gaya ... mai describe nhi kar sakti bhoth awesome tha i have no words yr !!! 

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sweet_gargi IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 March 2012
Posts: 4210

Posted: 02 July 2013 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...anju...

lol first to comment...

NICE update GARGI...AMAZINGLY written.loved it loads.enjoyed it.

OMG manyatas swayamvar and shaurya in angry mode.

bc of manyatas foolishness to take revenge for betraying her so many lost their lives.

shaurya is sooo intelligent.loved how he made manyata spit d truth.

now d whole world knows about manveer secret marriage.

wat manyatas father want to talk to shaurya.

wana to know more wat happened in d past.plz include d present also in d next chappy.

luking forward for next chappy.continue soon dear.

Thanks anju for the grt comments...yes it was Chanda's foolishness for which she had to pay...She had to suffer the humiliation..well shaurya is always smart, but he did bad things by not being able to control his anger 
sweet_gargi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by priyash..

i loved it maza aa gaya ... mai describe nhi kar sakti bhoth awesome tha i have no words yr !!! 

Thanks kritika...glad ki tujhe acha laga...ill read ur story soon...m back nowSmile

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sanah12 Goldie

Joined: 15 February 2013
Posts: 1427

Posted: 02 July 2013 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!Clap
Loved it loads!!
Chanda is really silly she she wanted to play stupid games.
Poor chanda's father had to be embarassed because of her foolishness.
Shaurya's anger is wow
Shaurya is really a charming prince, 
I wish could meet this prince charming.
Love the way.u potray his character and all other characters.
Beautifully written.
Do continue asap.
fireroad99 Goldie

Joined: 19 June 2012
Posts: 1769

Posted: 02 July 2013 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
i love it
contuine soon
-TeriMalang- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 January 2008
Posts: 8019

Posted: 02 July 2013 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
awesome update gargi

Soo chand decides to teach a lesson to shaurya ,.nd he inreturn hurts her
shaurya is soo cruel !
Cont soon

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