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TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 (Page 44)

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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 3:41am | IP Logged
You can continue the past also in English only...we won't mind...it will save your energySmile

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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by andy.a

hi gargi
lovely update. Big smile
you seriously know magic, i suppose as each of your updates hookes up to this story more tightly
just wanted to ask you, how did you learn sanscrit.?
you know i did take pains to read that sanscrit dialoges, i understood a bit and the english translation helped me to get the full meaning.
it really took me to the past. loved maharaj shaurya's storyEmbarrassed
i could seriously feel that shaurya's brother was really evilAngry, man!! he wants the throne when we have such an able maharaj.
the way he discovered that there was a princess for him
and the way he felt when he saw her first, that was just awsomeClap
i loved it when manyta too was hooked to this story...
i can see manveer romance in the air...
so now uday does not want to listen to the witches and want mantyta to be his when she too desires itSmile
i think he wil be the villian in his own love story,
but iam sure this will make the story more interesting..
continue soon and thanks for the pm..Big smile
i did read the story the day you posted itself, but i wanted to give a good comment, so this comment got delayed, sorry for thatCry
 

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hi gargi---- Hi AndySmile

lovely update. Big smile--Thanks baby

you seriously know magic, i suppose as each of your updates hookes up to this story more tightly---i don;t know magic Andy...i wish i knew..i could have made this story more interesting..Wink

just wanted to ask you, how did you learn sanscrit.?
you know i did take pains to read that sanscrit dialoges, i understood a bit and the english translation helped me to get the full meaning.---Yes Andy actually i kept you n many others in mind while i translated...i remember when u commented once in this story that u found it hard to understand the sanskrit...so i wrote in hindi as wellSmile...glad it helped you


it really took me to the past. loved maharaj shaurya's storyEmbarrassed
i could seriously feel that shaurya's brother was really evilAngry, man!! he wants the throne when we have such an able maharaj.---Yes his bro was evil...we have such bro's in history n even today...such losersAngry


the way he discovered that there was a princess for him
and the way he felt when he saw her first, that was just awsomeClap----aww...happy that u liked itBig smile

i loved it when manyta too was hooked to this story...Yes she isSmile

i can see manveer romance in the air...Well yes love is in the airEmbarrassed

so now uday does not want to listen to the witches and want mantyta to be his when she too desires itSmile---Yes that is what he wants...for her to feel exactly the way he feels for her

i think he wil be the villian in his own love story,---Don't worry he won't...someone else willOuch

but iam sure this will make the story more interesting..Hope it willSmile

continue soon and thanks for the pm..Big smile---Your welcome Andy

i did read the story the day you posted itself, but i wanted to give a good comment, so this comment got delayed, sorry for thatCry--no worries...whether soon or late, the comment was more than enough to encourage meTongue

Thanks again for the lovely commentsHug
 

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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by panchaali

You can continue the past also in English only...we won't mind...it will save your energySmile

Yes payel..i would want to...lets see...there are many readers who have earlier commented that the old hindi is something that makes this story's language different n attractive...That is why i don't wanna change it...Smile...lets see...

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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

Originally posted by panchaali

You can continue the past also in English only...we won't mind...it will save your energySmile

Yes payel..i would want to...lets see...there are many readers who have earlier commented that the old hindi is something that makes this story's language different n attractive...That is why i don't wanna change it...Smile...lets see...

I understand but it makes your work hectic and difficult 

Now that u have got a lot of reader they will not notice this simple change and your work will be easy

And if u wanna publish this book there u cannot put so many hindi dialogues

Then again u have to edit those parts... 

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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

Originally posted by priyash..

thanq u so much meri jaan next part dene ke liye love u mneri jaan muuaaa haa nhi tho it was amazing kya shudh hindi hai teri ... maze a gaye bhoth acha tha but short tha don't worry mai bhi likhti hu tho mujhe ptha haii bhoth time lga hoga tujhe likhne ,ai isliye salute n ya tu bhoth gandi hai tune pm nhi kiya fir bhi mai comment de rhi hu !!!Tongue 


thanq u so much meri jaan next part dene ke liye---Your welcome meri jaanEmbarrassed

love u mneri jaan muuaaa haa nhi tho it was amazing kya shudh hindi hai teri ...Ha kabhi kabhi hindi achi ho jati hai meri

 maze a gaye bhoth acha tha but short tha don't worry mai bhi likhti hu tho mujhe ptha haii bhoth time lga hoga tujhe likhne ,ai isliye salute---Ha baby mujhe bohot time laga n mehnat woh sanskrit ko hindi mei translate karne mei...D'oh

 n ya tu bhoth gandi hai tune pm nhi kiya fir bhi mai comment de rhi hu !!!Tongue ---sorry kritz..mujhe laga meine tujhe bheja hai PM..maaf kar de agli baar aisi galti nahi hogiIcon Monkey Yoyo


but thank you for reading it and commenting on it...Hug

chal thik hai maaf kar diya dost hai tu apni Big smileBig smileBig smile ab agli baar pm kar diyo bhen !!Big smileBig smile



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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 10:03am | IP Logged
wowww
really good update
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 June 2013 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serat

wowww
really good update
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks SeratSmile
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Posted: 12 June 2013 at 9:52am | IP Logged
can you please pm me too
it was awesome

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