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Part3

He tried her phone. 
Not reachable. 
Where did she go? 
College? 
She had her semester holidays. 
MM? Deepa? Was it possible? Where else? 
He decided it was no point standing there thinking and got ready fast; grabbed his bike keys and came out of the room hurriedly and dashed into a fully dressed Thulasi, entering the house. Both of them looked at each-other, slowly rubbing their heads.
After a moment of the eyes trying to talk and failing to convey the much needed 'Sorry' and 'I love you';
Thulasi cleared her throat, "Uhm.."
He looked at her face. She seemed nervous and wasn't looking at his face.
Thulasi, "Naan.." There was a pause and she was strangling the tip of her shawl.
When he didn't utter anything; not even a, 'Where were you'; she inhaled deeply, gulped down her fear and turned to look at him, "Naan poren." Those two words hit as swords on his neck. Did she just say that or was he dreaming? To his horror, it wasn't his dream.
He just stared at her helplessly, blinking his eyes, trying to digest the thing she had just told him. Still, he didn't utter a word. He was speechless. She was leaving for real?! He pulled his shirt sleeve up and pinched himself and cried out in pain. He noticed. In other circumstances, Thulasi would have laughed at his little act. But now she was there standing looking away, lifeless.  Why did she come back then? was the first question that came to his mind than pondering over the reason, which she had clearly explained yesterday to which he didn't even utter a word of comfort. There he was again not saying anything to her. He did a mind calculation as to what to do. Last time the xeroxed book had worked out. What now? Think something, Tamizh! Think before she leaves!
She took out a bundle from her handbag and handed it over to him, "Ithula 10 airum rupa iruku. Ithu veraikum neenga enaku selavu panatha naan epdiyavuthu masam masam kuduthiruren; with interest. Inthanga vechukonga."
Now; more than confused and sad, he was angry and frustrated at what she was doing. 
Tamizh, "Enathu ithu? Kanaka neeya potutiya? Enga naan ithuveraikum unaku evalo selva panirukenu kanaku sollu."
She stood there silent , biting her teeth, controlling her anger. Just a word "kuttima" would have melted her; but here he was, as usual not comforting her when she need it the most. 
He put the bundle on the table and turned to look at her, who was looking away. A naughty smile on his face.

(To be continued...)

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Edited by Gisel - 15 April 2013 at 7:40am

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ThAnks Gisel..:)

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Part4

He went near her. She closed her eyes wishing that he didn't do anything that would make her melt. But in her heart she knew she wanted to be with him, to hug him and cry out her heart to him; to find solace in his arms. But she hushed off those thoughts away when she remembered how he wanted her to be more bold and determined like Suchi. If that was what he wanted; she was going to show him how determined she can be. She opened her eyes, controlling her tears. She saw him lock the front door. He turned to find her staring at him and felt depressed at how immediately she turned away when he saw her. The smile back on his face, he walked towards her. 
Thalaiva! Una nambi thaan try panuren. Work out airum la? He murmured a small prayer and cleared his throat, "Ena ma? Kanaka correct a vechurukiya? Eina nan correct a vechuruken." She turned to look at his playful self which angered her more or maybe deep inside this is what she liked about him. She didn't know. But she had decided to give the boldness that he had wanted.
Tamizh, "En ma? Bathilai kanam."
Thulasi, "Uhm? Hhm..Athaan kanaku correct a vechurukeyangala; neengalai sollunga. Evalo tharanum?"
Drawing some calculation on air, "Uhm..inga 4o..anga 70..2...2 ara varusham..um..motham 2497K..approm.."
Thulasi gasped, "25 latchama?" but then calming herself down, "Seri. Time kudunga. Thirupi thanthiren."
Tamizh, "Enaku time lan illa. Innaikai thirumbi venam. Ippovai. Kanakai solli mudikala...seri parava illa. Mothala itha thirupi kudu..mithiya vati oda pero vangikiren."
Thulasi, "Ippo vei venuma? Ivalo rupa ku naan enga poven?"
Tamizh, "Rupa va? Rupa lan illa. 2947 K..apdina.."
Thulasi, "2497 K la sonaiga. Athukula 500 K increase aiducha?"
Tamizh, ithula romba theliva iru, "seri ok..2497 k na 2497 kisses ma. Ithuveraikum naan unaku kuduthathu. Atha thirupi kudu. Approm nee polam."

(To be continued)

Part5 - scroll down

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woweee!!!! Tamil at his naughty best!!!!Big smileLOLLOL  Now what will T do ... will she continue her bold act or melt down ...Embarrassed

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Tulasi is going to melt lol. 

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wow very sweet updates
loved them 
wonder if tulasi will meltEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
continue soon

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Thulasi don't melt dear.. give him some punishment..

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Part5

Tamizh takes a step closer towards Thulasi.
Thulasi finds her heart rate increasing but she tells herself to stay calm. 
Tamizh, "Ena kuttima? Aiswarya Rai ai intha matter ku vilunthutanga. Adam pidikama kiss kudu ma." showing his cheek to her, childishly. She looks at his puppy face and knows that she will give in but somehow manages otherwise,
Thulasi, "Athu ena Aiswarya Rai ai? Ein? Aiswarya Rai ena vida alaga?"
Tamizh, aha intha ponugalai ipdithaan; matuna po, "Apdi illa kuttima..naan.."
Thulasi, "Ivaruku Super Staru nu nenaipu. Pona pothu thita vendamnu porumaiya iruken.."
Tamizh, ithuka mela enga thiturathu? athaan thiti mudichitiya.
Thulasi, "Thalunga" and she walks past him towards the door, half hoping he would stop her. She feels a tug and can't help but smile. Unexpectedly, he pulls her towards him that she revolves and is about to fall when his hand saves her from any impact. She opens her eyes; still in shock, but finds him looking at her with the same playful smile. That first day in the college when she realized his love for her till now; he had always been there to support her; how can she ever hate this man? But this very lovable idiot needed a reality check now and then to understand that the world around wasn't as good as he saw it. 
Tamizh, "Ena kuttima? Naan un superstar illaya?" raising his eyebrows.
She stood up releasing herself from his grip and turned away. She knew if she saw him even a moment more, she would give in.
He hugged her from behind, increasing her heartbeat; resting his chin on her shoulders, "Enga poratha idea, kuttimavuku?"
Thulasi, "Enagayo poren. Neenga office yum Suchi yum kettitu alunga."
Tamizh's reaction changed. He straightened himself, "Poriya? Po... Po." pushing her away. She turned to look at him rubbing off a lone tear from his cheeks. 
Tamizh, "Rupa va thirupi kudukrangalamla." He took the money bundle from the table and placed it on her hands, "Ivalo neram etho chumma velayadranu patha; nejama poriya? Po. Who cares? Naan yaru una thaduka." hitting the dinning table with so much force that a glass on it broke on his fist and blood starts oozing out.
Leaving all her stubbornness behind, "Aiyoo enga ithu? Ethuku ivalo kovam?" rushing forward to attend his hand.
To her surprise, he pulled away, stressing each syllable, he said "Tho.da.tha."

(To be continued...)

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Edited by Gisel - 24 April 2013 at 1:23pm

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