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Gisel

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 11:27am | IP Logged
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I really didn't want to write for a while! But this serial is driving me mad! Aargh! So I'm venting off my frustrations...let's see if I'm going to bring TT together or seperate themTongue!

Becoz I'm frustrated

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Part 1

Lavanya with her baby in hand, "Ivanga panura atuliyathuku amma thaan seri ana alu. Rendu perum vanthu nala sanda podatum."
Nitesh coming inside the room, "Juju! Ena panitu irukeinga? Appa kuda car la varengala?"
Lavanya, "Enaga. Amma va konjam nall, inga vanthu iruka sollalama? Thulasi annikum konjam relief a irukum. Ammavukum kolantha kuda konja nall irunthathu mathiri irukum."
Nitesh, "Athuku ena? Kutitu vanthuta pochu. Ippo vei poi kutitu varen." placing a quick kiss on his baby and wife.
Lavanya, "Thanks ga!"

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Tamizh, "Suchi a pathi marupadiyum pesathanu ethira thadava solliruken?"
Thulasi, "Life la vangira first veedu, first car...itha husband and wife seinthu decide pananumnu elarum aasa padurathu thena? Ana ungaluku Suchi pechu thaan veitha vaku. Charu prechana ippo thaan mudijithu. Athukula iva. Cha! Ena valuka ithu?" storming into their room.
Tamizh following her, "Ei!" holding her hand.
Thulasi, "Kaiya vidunga." releasing herself from the grip There was more firmness in the grip than love.
Tamizh, "Ena pesura nee? Life long Charu va vechu ena blackmail pana poriya?"
Thulasi turned to look at his angry eyes. Where did all the love go? Where did all the promises go? Why was he accussing her when he was at mistake?
Tamizh, "Thulasi?"
Thulasi, "Huh?" still not out of the shock. How could he think that she was emotionally blackmailing him?
She silently went and sat in the bed. 
Tamizh, "Odana ala arambichiratha. Kaneer matum kutrala arivi mathiri kotumai. Suchi a pathirukiya? Evalo bold? Evalo determined?" Thulasi looked at him and saw how he smiled when he spoke of Suchi.
Thulasi sarcastically, "Oru vela nanum en purushana vitu pona bold airuven." lying down on the bed and switching off the night lights.

(To be continued...)

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Part 2 - Page 2


Edited by Gisel - 24 April 2013 at 1:23pm

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
gisel...
same pinch me too the same feelingu...Wink

1st part sammaiya irruku continue please...





Edited by Suha95 - 10 April 2013 at 7:58pm

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
Nice Gisel!

Loved the last line of Thulz giveback to TA sarcastically.

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Gisel Nice one..
 
Venting out frustrations through this FF wont calm usErmm.. But the way u write always amaze me.. How thoughtfulThumbs Up ! Wish all your FF scenes are incorporated in the serial.  Embarrassed
 
I would say a BANG ON! for the last line... Clap But sigh... nadakura kariyama athu ?Pinch

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Nice to read, Gisel. You have poured your heart and feelings which really makes the FF nice.

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged
T speaking boldly for what is right ... great!!!! Clap Way to go Gisel!!!!Smile

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Superb Gisel Smile love it Smile
Ending statement s the highlight Wink

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awesome gisel
glad your back 
waiting for next part

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