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FF: no matter what i love you (virman) Part 22 updated on page 40 (Page 37)

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Posted: 07 November 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Nice Update..! but Maya kabab mei haddi...but then waiting fr more of VirMan..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 07 November 2013 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Amazing update Rashi
Waiting 4 next part
Update Soon
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awesome update
loved it
so virat and Maya are going to play
continue soon
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Superb update
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Plz cont soon
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Posted: 06 December 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
hey, everyone sorry I always get late it's just my exams, i've just given a spanish speaking exam but find out i've got two different exams coming and i'm going crazy revising. SORRY
 
Part 20
 
Next Day Virat doesn't want to go to rehearsals but manvi makes him saying that she'll be with him in rehearsals, that's when he agreed
 
In Rehearsals maya is waiting for virat, when virat comes she gets excited and she has a wide smile on her face but when she sees manvi appearing behind him her smile turns into a frownand she starts to get anger boiling in herAngry
 
Maya - (to virat) Yeh bhi saath aayi hai
 
Virat - (knows she's getting angry) haan kyunki main iske bina toh kuch karta hi nahi na, kyun tumhe kuyi problem
 
Maya - nahi kuyi problem nahi, bas kya hai na uski bhi classes hai na isiliye main chinta kar rahi thi iss keliye
 
Manvi - (believes that) (smiles and says calmly) tum chinta mat karo mein kisi se le loongi notes
 
Maya - (gritting her teeth) ha par
 
Drama Teacher - DT (Female teacher)
 
DT - OK people come and sit here
 
Everyone including manvi goes and sits where DT has told them to
 
DT - Main chathi hoon ke iss saal ka play bohot acha hoisi liye I want every percent of energy from you all, is that clear
 
Everyone - Yes maam
 
DT - Main sab ko unke aaj ke scene ke script doongi app sab ko 30 minutes milte hai yaad karne mein
 
DT then goes from there and does her own work
 
Maya - (to virat) Chalo Virat saath mein yaad karte hai
 
Virat - Nahi saath mein kyun
 
Manvi - Virat kyun ka kya matlab, agar tum dono saath mein yaad karoge toh acha yaad hoga
 
Maya - (smirks and thinks) yeh pehli girlfriend hogi jo apne hi boyfreind ko kisi aur larki ke saath kaam karne de rahi hai
 
Virat - (Has to listen as he cannot say no to her) Fine
 
Manvi sits down and watches them, while maya and virat are rehearsing, but looks like maya is not interested in learning the script, she just touches him all the way through while he tries to move away from her
 
DT - Chalo ab 30 mins pure ho gaye hai ab shuru karte hai aaj ki rehearsel
 
Maya and Virat get into their positions
 
Note - Guys I'm just making the lines up I don't know much shakesphearean language
 
Maya - Oh Romeo oh Romeo I shall not be here without you
 
Virat - No Juliet don't speak that, You are my half heart you cannot leave me, without you there is no romeo
 
Then they just keep saying the lines and at the end teacher says
 
DT - Wonderful, mind blowing, if this is how your energy continues in the rehearsals then our play could be the best in chandighar, infact in the whole india
 
Everyone - Yeah
 
DT - (Smiles) now you can go and these are the scrpts you need to learn for tomorrow
 
Everyone get their script and go
 
Virat - Manvi main na tumhare ghar a jaata hoon parhai karne ke liye
 
Manvi - OK (and smiles)
 
Maya hears their conversations so she quickely goes to stop them
 
Maya stops virman
 
Maya - Virat main soch rahi thi ke ...
 
Virat - Ek minute, soch ne ke liye toh dimaag ki zarurat hoti hai na  aur tumhare paas dimaag hai, mujhe toh doubt hai
 
Maya gets frustrated
 
Manvi - (hits his arm slightly) bolne do na virat usse, maya kya bolna tha
 
Maya - Thanks manvi
 
Manvi smiles
 
Maya - Main soch rahi thi ke kyun na tum mere ghar main aajaon, waise bhi mere ghar main saari facilities hai, toh tumhe suffocation nahi hoga (kind of taunting manvi)
 
Manvi looks down feeling hurt, Virat sees this and directs back saying
 
Virat - Maya mujhe script learn karni hai, maze nahi toh isiliye mujhe lagta hai ke hume akele script learn karne chahiye
 
And without listening to maya virat holds manvi's hand and goes
 
Maya gets angry and breaks the vase next to her
 
Virman
 
Manvi - Virat tumhe aise nahi karna chahiye tha, woh kitne chah se tumhe invite karne ayi thi tumn uska dil dhuka diyaa
 
Virat - Aur jab tumhara dil dukha tab
 
Manvi looks down feeling embarrased
 
Virat - (cupping her face) tumhe embarass feel hone ki kui zarurat nahi hai, tumhara toh haq hai
 
Manvi smiles and then both go to manvi's house
 
Daadu opens the door
 
Daadu - Areh Virat beta tum kaise ho, kuyi kam tha
 
Virat - Nahi woh, maine ek play mein participate kiya hai, toh uske scrips learn karne aaya tha
 
Daadu - Thik hai tum jaa ke Manvi ke room main practice karlo
 
Virat - (Smiles genuenly) Ji daadu
 
Virman go to manvi's room
 
Manvi - Virat tum yaha bheto main abhi aayi
 
Virat - Haa
 
Manvi goes to the kitchen and ses that daadu hasn't had his tablets, she gets the tablets and water and goes to daadu to give it to him
 
Manvi - Daadu aap apna khyal nahi rakhte kya, dekhiye aapne dawa bhi nahi khayi
 
Daadu - Erm manvi beta maaf karde na
 
Manvi - Thik hai lekin agli baar main aapko khud dawa dungi taake mann ko shanti ho ke aapne dawa kha li hai
 
Virat sees this and admires the scene infront of him
 
After a few minutes manvi comes back to her room and virat starts practicing, while flirting and romancing with her.
 
At 7:50 he comes back home and sees everyone sat on the dining table He goes and sits on his seat when all of a sudden dadaji asks
 
Dadaji -(in a stern voice) Kaha gaye the
 
Virat - Ek dost ke ghar
 
Dadaji - Naam kya hai
 
Virat - (confused) Virat
 
Dadaji - tuhara naam nahi uss dost ka
 
Virat - Oh Maanvi
 
Virika cover thier faces with their palm
 
Dadai - (shocked and angry) Larki
 
Virat - (bites his tongue) kha gaye na dhokha aap bhi
 
Dadai gets confused
 
Dadaji - Kaisa dhoka
 
Virat - Asal mein uska naam maanveer hai lekin woh 'r' silent hai
 
Dadaji - Hmm
 
Virika breath in relief
 
Dadaji - Waise Virat
 
Virat gets scared - Ji dadaji
 
Dadaji - Pehle kabhi maanveer ke bare mein nahi suna
 
Virat - Woh, woh ...  aaj uska pehla din hai isiliye main uska pehla dost hoon
 
Dadaji - Acha, phir thik hai, khana shuru kiya jaye
 
Virat quietly eats his food and is lost in some thoughts
 
Vanshika notices this but then ignores it fast
 
Virat's room
 
Virika come and start to talk to virat
 
Viren - Virat tujhe nahi lagta ke hume dadaji ko tumhare aur manvi ke baari mein sab bata dena chahiye
 
Virat - Toh aap ek kaam ki jiye meri ek photo lor li jiye
 
Jeevika - (confused) kyun
 
Virat - Kyunki yeh jaan ne ke baad na dadaji seedha mujhe hi maar daalenge
 
Viren - Lekin manvi ke daadu toh yeh reationship accept karliya hai na
 
Virat - Haan par woh na ek angel hai par mere dadaji toh puri hitler ki copy
 
Swamini bua, vanshika ma, and dadaji hear this and say
 
Swamini bua - Kya
 
Virat turns around and gets shocked
 
Dadaji - Main hitler hoon
 
Virat - Nahi, maine ab kaha
 
Dadaji - Abhi 2 second pehle
 
Virat - Oh mera matlab tha ke aap ache hitler ho
 
Dadaji - Maanvi kon hai
 
Virat - Closes his eyes and says
 
Virat - Meri girlfreind
 
Dadaji, swamini and vanshika are shocked
 
Dadaji - Manvi koh sunday bulao
 
Virat and the rest are shockd to hear this
 
Dadaji - Agar maanvi mujhe achi lagi toh main tumhare relationship ko manzur karoonga
 
Virat gets shocked and excited and in excitement he hugs daadu
 
Dadaji gets shocked but happy
 
Virat realizes what he is doing and steps back, Dadaji turns back and leaves with a smile
 
Everyone scream in happiness
 
Jeevika - Areh itna khush mayt hoye, pehle toh dadaji ne maanvi ko green signal dena hai
 
Viren - Arreh achi hogi, aur virat tu toh maya ke saath play kar raha hai toh manvi jealous nahi hoti kya
 
Virat - Nahi usse pata hai ke main usse hi pyaar karta hoon aur usse pura bharosa hai mujh pe
 
Viren - (to jeevika) Sikho kuch, jab main apne employee ke saath baat karta hoon tum toh mere peeche hi par jati ho
 
Jeevika - Acha employee ke saath haath pakarte hai
 
Virat - Bhai (shocked)
 
Viren - Handshake tha
 
Virat - Oh
 
Jeevika - Aap ko toh bas bahane chahiye
 
Viren makes a sad face and goes to thier room to manaofy jeevika
 
Virat smiles at the couple
 
Precap - Manvi gets a small job in the drama department
               Manvi to meet virat's family
 
Plss comment, I've got lots of revision to do so I got some time from there to write this update

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Posted: 06 December 2013 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Awesome
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too good
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thanks for pm...
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Posted: 06 December 2013 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
nice update his family also get to know
about her and she trust him a lot
precap look interesting update soon 
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awsm dear
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