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FF: no matter what i love you (virman) Part 22 updated on page 40 (Page 35)

lujeyn9 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 November 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Superb Update!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Thanx 4 PMSmile
Continue soon

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Posted: 07 November 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged
wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dearSmileTongue
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Posted: 07 November 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Nice Update..! but Maya kabab mei haddi...but then waiting fr more of VirMan..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 07 November 2013 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Amazing update Rashi
Waiting 4 next part
Update Soon
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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
so virat and Maya are going to play
continue soon
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Superb update
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Plz cont soon
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hey, everyone sorry I always get late it's just my exams, i've just given a spanish speaking exam but find out i've got two different exams coming and i'm going crazy revising. SORRY
Part 20
Next Day Virat doesn't want to go to rehearsals but manvi makes him saying that she'll be with him in rehearsals, that's when he agreed
In Rehearsals maya is waiting for virat, when virat comes she gets excited and she has a wide smile on her face but when she sees manvi appearing behind him her smile turns into a frownand she starts to get anger boiling in herAngry
Maya - (to virat) Yeh bhi saath aayi hai
Virat - (knows she's getting angry) haan kyunki main iske bina toh kuch karta hi nahi na, kyun tumhe kuyi problem
Maya - nahi kuyi problem nahi, bas kya hai na uski bhi classes hai na isiliye main chinta kar rahi thi iss keliye
Manvi - (believes that) (smiles and says calmly) tum chinta mat karo mein kisi se le loongi notes
Maya - (gritting her teeth) ha par
Drama Teacher - DT (Female teacher)
DT - OK people come and sit here
Everyone including manvi goes and sits where DT has told them to
DT - Main chathi hoon ke iss saal ka play bohot acha hoisi liye I want every percent of energy from you all, is that clear
Everyone - Yes maam
DT - Main sab ko unke aaj ke scene ke script doongi app sab ko 30 minutes milte hai yaad karne mein
DT then goes from there and does her own work
Maya - (to virat) Chalo Virat saath mein yaad karte hai
Virat - Nahi saath mein kyun
Manvi - Virat kyun ka kya matlab, agar tum dono saath mein yaad karoge toh acha yaad hoga
Maya - (smirks and thinks) yeh pehli girlfriend hogi jo apne hi boyfreind ko kisi aur larki ke saath kaam karne de rahi hai
Virat - (Has to listen as he cannot say no to her) Fine
Manvi sits down and watches them, while maya and virat are rehearsing, but looks like maya is not interested in learning the script, she just touches him all the way through while he tries to move away from her
DT - Chalo ab 30 mins pure ho gaye hai ab shuru karte hai aaj ki rehearsel
Maya and Virat get into their positions
Note - Guys I'm just making the lines up I don't know much shakesphearean language
Maya - Oh Romeo oh Romeo I shall not be here without you
Virat - No Juliet don't speak that, You are my half heart you cannot leave me, without you there is no romeo
Then they just keep saying the lines and at the end teacher says
DT - Wonderful, mind blowing, if this is how your energy continues in the rehearsals then our play could be the best in chandighar, infact in the whole india
Everyone - Yeah
DT - (Smiles) now you can go and these are the scrpts you need to learn for tomorrow
Everyone get their script and go
Virat - Manvi main na tumhare ghar a jaata hoon parhai karne ke liye
Manvi - OK (and smiles)
Maya hears their conversations so she quickely goes to stop them
Maya stops virman
Maya - Virat main soch rahi thi ke ...
Virat - Ek minute, soch ne ke liye toh dimaag ki zarurat hoti hai na  aur tumhare paas dimaag hai, mujhe toh doubt hai
Maya gets frustrated
Manvi - (hits his arm slightly) bolne do na virat usse, maya kya bolna tha
Maya - Thanks manvi
Manvi smiles
Maya - Main soch rahi thi ke kyun na tum mere ghar main aajaon, waise bhi mere ghar main saari facilities hai, toh tumhe suffocation nahi hoga (kind of taunting manvi)
Manvi looks down feeling hurt, Virat sees this and directs back saying
Virat - Maya mujhe script learn karni hai, maze nahi toh isiliye mujhe lagta hai ke hume akele script learn karne chahiye
And without listening to maya virat holds manvi's hand and goes
Maya gets angry and breaks the vase next to her
Manvi - Virat tumhe aise nahi karna chahiye tha, woh kitne chah se tumhe invite karne ayi thi tumn uska dil dhuka diyaa
Virat - Aur jab tumhara dil dukha tab
Manvi looks down feeling embarrased
Virat - (cupping her face) tumhe embarass feel hone ki kui zarurat nahi hai, tumhara toh haq hai
Manvi smiles and then both go to manvi's house
Daadu opens the door
Daadu - Areh Virat beta tum kaise ho, kuyi kam tha
Virat - Nahi woh, maine ek play mein participate kiya hai, toh uske scrips learn karne aaya tha
Daadu - Thik hai tum jaa ke Manvi ke room main practice karlo
Virat - (Smiles genuenly) Ji daadu
Virman go to manvi's room
Manvi - Virat tum yaha bheto main abhi aayi
Virat - Haa
Manvi goes to the kitchen and ses that daadu hasn't had his tablets, she gets the tablets and water and goes to daadu to give it to him
Manvi - Daadu aap apna khyal nahi rakhte kya, dekhiye aapne dawa bhi nahi khayi
Daadu - Erm manvi beta maaf karde na
Manvi - Thik hai lekin agli baar main aapko khud dawa dungi taake mann ko shanti ho ke aapne dawa kha li hai
Virat sees this and admires the scene infront of him
After a few minutes manvi comes back to her room and virat starts practicing, while flirting and romancing with her.
At 7:50 he comes back home and sees everyone sat on the dining table He goes and sits on his seat when all of a sudden dadaji asks
Dadaji -(in a stern voice) Kaha gaye the
Virat - Ek dost ke ghar
Dadaji - Naam kya hai
Virat - (confused) Virat
Dadaji - tuhara naam nahi uss dost ka
Virat - Oh Maanvi
Virika cover thier faces with their palm
Dadai - (shocked and angry) Larki
Virat - (bites his tongue) kha gaye na dhokha aap bhi
Dadai gets confused
Dadaji - Kaisa dhoka
Virat - Asal mein uska naam maanveer hai lekin woh 'r' silent hai
Dadaji - Hmm
Virika breath in relief
Dadaji - Waise Virat
Virat gets scared - Ji dadaji
Dadaji - Pehle kabhi maanveer ke bare mein nahi suna
Virat - Woh, woh ...  aaj uska pehla din hai isiliye main uska pehla dost hoon
Dadaji - Acha, phir thik hai, khana shuru kiya jaye
Virat quietly eats his food and is lost in some thoughts
Vanshika notices this but then ignores it fast
Virat's room
Virika come and start to talk to virat
Viren - Virat tujhe nahi lagta ke hume dadaji ko tumhare aur manvi ke baari mein sab bata dena chahiye
Virat - Toh aap ek kaam ki jiye meri ek photo lor li jiye
Jeevika - (confused) kyun
Virat - Kyunki yeh jaan ne ke baad na dadaji seedha mujhe hi maar daalenge
Viren - Lekin manvi ke daadu toh yeh reationship accept karliya hai na
Virat - Haan par woh na ek angel hai par mere dadaji toh puri hitler ki copy
Swamini bua, vanshika ma, and dadaji hear this and say
Swamini bua - Kya
Virat turns around and gets shocked
Dadaji - Main hitler hoon
Virat - Nahi, maine ab kaha
Dadaji - Abhi 2 second pehle
Virat - Oh mera matlab tha ke aap ache hitler ho
Dadaji - Maanvi kon hai
Virat - Closes his eyes and says
Virat - Meri girlfreind
Dadaji, swamini and vanshika are shocked
Dadaji - Manvi koh sunday bulao
Virat and the rest are shockd to hear this
Dadaji - Agar maanvi mujhe achi lagi toh main tumhare relationship ko manzur karoonga
Virat gets shocked and excited and in excitement he hugs daadu
Dadaji gets shocked but happy
Virat realizes what he is doing and steps back, Dadaji turns back and leaves with a smile
Everyone scream in happiness
Jeevika - Areh itna khush mayt hoye, pehle toh dadaji ne maanvi ko green signal dena hai
Viren - Arreh achi hogi, aur virat tu toh maya ke saath play kar raha hai toh manvi jealous nahi hoti kya
Virat - Nahi usse pata hai ke main usse hi pyaar karta hoon aur usse pura bharosa hai mujh pe
Viren - (to jeevika) Sikho kuch, jab main apne employee ke saath baat karta hoon tum toh mere peeche hi par jati ho
Jeevika - Acha employee ke saath haath pakarte hai
Virat - Bhai (shocked)
Viren - Handshake tha
Virat - Oh
Jeevika - Aap ko toh bas bahane chahiye
Viren makes a sad face and goes to thier room to manaofy jeevika
Virat smiles at the couple
Precap - Manvi gets a small job in the drama department
               Manvi to meet virat's family
Plss comment, I've got lots of revision to do so I got some time from there to write this update

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