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FF: no matter what i love you (virman) Part 22 updated on page 40 (Page 3)

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
nice concept
intresting precap
continue soon

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Hi guys thank you for your comments I'm going to continue it now

Next day

Manvi comes in wearing a blue churidar, hear tied up in a high pony coming down her right shoulder

manvi sits on a bench and starts reading a book 'cause she has an hour till her class, she is reading her book but then feels some people around her, she looks up and is abit surprised. Virat, sameer, Karan, Viraj and Rohan, so she stands up aswell.

Manvi - Yes, in a sweet voice

Virat - So your new here

Manvi nodded

Virat - You know we have some rules for new people in this college, first rule, tell us something about you

Manvi - My name is Manvi, I am 18 years old, I am studying Doctery and thqt's it

Rohan - Wow I'm studying Doctery

Manvi smiles

Sameer - Any personal information

Manvi - I'm not comfortable sharing it with anyone ( she said lookibg down )

Karan OK, now time for ragging

Manvi gulped and gets a bit scared

Sameer - Sing a song

Manvi - What

Sameer - Why scared

Manvi - No I'll do it ( in her mind she laughing really hard )

Manvi sings sanson ko sanson mein ( my favourite song )

Manvi - Sanson ko sanson mein dhalne do zara
dheemi si dharkan ko dhalne di zara
Lamhin ki guzaarish hain yeh paas aa jaa re hum, hum tum

Virat - Impressive

Karan - Say some dialogues from a movie

Manvi - OK

Manvi - Pyaar dosti hai ( and she says some other dialogues )

Viraj - Good now tell me what is 1089 x 8901

Manvi is wide eyed

Manvi - i don't know

Viraj - duh, 135782

Rohan - (sweetly) Tell me what you can do when someone has cancer and they are on the last stage

Manvi ( looking down with teary eyes ) bone marrow transplant

Rohan - Good

Manvi pushes those tears in

Virat - Now I will give you a task

Manvi is abit confused

Virat - Kiss me

Everyone is shocked

Virat - I'm joking relax, anyway she's not upto my standards

Manvi is relifed but is abit uncomfortable

Rohan - Virat you shouldn't say that

Virat - Back to ragging, Say a few lines on something you believe in

Manvi - Love is a beautiful feeling that just happens( she said smiling)

Virat - Have you ever been in Love

Manvi - No but I want to be

Manvi looks at the clock

Manvi - I'll have to go now it's time for my class

She goes

After college she comes home

Manvi - Daadu I have to go to the cafe, I promise as soon as I come home i'll give you your dinner

Daadu - You don't worry I'll be fine

Note - Manvi works in a cafe because she wants to earn some money as it's only her and her daadu and her daadu's pension isn't enough, they can were anything in the cafe

Manvi is now working in the cafe

Virat and a load of other freinds come in the cafe, just then virat sees manvi working there

Virat - Waitress

Manvi comes there first she is shocked but then turns proffesional

Manvi - What would like to have sir

Virat - Water please

Manvi - Sure

Manvi is bringing water when one of Virat's freind puts his leg out on purpose and all the water spills on Virat

Virat - ( stands up ) What The Hell

Manager comes

Manager - I'm soo sorry

Virat also did this on purpose

Virat - Noo problem but tell your staff to be a little more responsible

Manager - Sure sir ( to manvi ) Come with me

Manager holds manvi's upper arm tightly which is hurting her

In a silent room

Manvi - Sorry Sir

Manager - If you do this again then i swear you'll be fired

Manvi - (teary eyes) Sorry sir i will never do it again

Manager - hmm

Manvi comes out with teary eyes but wipes them off quickly

Precap - Virat makes her in trouble along with insulting her abit
              New teacher in science

Please comment guys they really mean qlot

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Sorry I couldn't update everyone only some
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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 9:06am | IP Logged
lvd d concept ... lukin forward hw d story unfolds n hw dey fall fo each odr... plz continue soon! n plz pm me

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Awsum storyline n quite interesting...
N the precap...hope he doesnt hurt her way too much...
Cont soon...n plz do pm me wen ya update!!! Smile

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 10:11am | IP Logged
sent u buddy request ...ply accept and pm me weneva u update

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:31am | IP Logged
awesome i loved it so much. if u don't mind will u pm me ur updates Smile

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:53am | IP Logged
awesome update
cont soon

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