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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 98)

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
awesome...loved it

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
wow what amazing update


plz continue the next soon

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Great update
Uff arnav please ask before you do anything

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Rabba Ve dear aquiLINe,

lovely as usual written brilliantly.  The pain that Lord Arnav is going through was literally felt.

I liked the below line though.
 If he wants to get to Di or Kushi, he will have to get through me first...

hugs
Bablio

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Hi dear how are you n ur dad?
Another beautifull update hmmm so lordy lord is ready to face general
Have faith  on you dear will waiting to read ur version of ipkknd Smile
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Tc

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
I know I have not commented in a long time, just caught up on the last few chapter since you went on your break. I am really enjoying this story and now that you have promised to add your own twists I am very excited.
Thanks for sharing this amazing story.

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
Rabba ve dear Aquiline,
 
 
Wow!!! What a chapter!!!... Hats off dear!... That was AWESOME!!!... Clap Clap Clap
 
 
When I read the line, "After many years, it was coming again."... you cant imagine how excited I became to know about the transformed Lordy... Embarrassed Your description about the physical and mental changes inside him during the transformation was very apt... The transformation appeared so realistic and very natural... Brilliant writing. Clap And the transformed Lordy, as expected, was all "royal" and "magnificent"... in all his four legs. Wink
 
 
P.S Im super happy about how the way things are proceeding. Its a little weird, but im feeling all excited now, not an ounce feeling depressed about the misunderstanding. Embarrassed May be the effects of Lady in the Dark hood around... Wink
 
 
P.S.S. Actually I came to the inn to write a few appreciative words about the General and some strong points in his favour, after seeing him in an entirely different light in the last update. But as a pleasant surprise, I was welcomed with a transformed Lordy... Embarrassed Now im sure, all readers must be in a daze. Let them come out of it first and then i'll try to write a comment on the General. Wink

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Nice update! So he is gonna marry her...but i seriously dont like this MU marriage...not in original story...every time i come across this scene i feel bad...let this phase just pass early as possible...but more troubled days to come for khushi 

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