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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 97)

rockingsoni Goldie

Joined: 20 February 2011
Posts: 2014

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Now, dat was thrilling experience...
reading about lord's turmoil, gave me goose bumps...
continue soon...

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SilverBell IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 05 September 2009
Posts: 40771

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
I Hate So Much Shyam So Much. Glad Arnav Understands Khushi.

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rini_kat IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 July 2011
Posts: 6161

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Oh no I hate the things as they will proceed... BTW nice update.

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zainza IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 November 2010
Posts: 3306

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
what a description of pain.each word pierced my heart although i did not want arnav to think the worst of khushi but this is how ARNAV would react.arnav who lost his mother, who has been hurt and bereaved before, who didnt believe in emotions, who loves his sister this was an absolutely apt description of what he would feel and how he would react and i'm thrilled at the idea of him BINDING khushi to himself.

now lets see how it moves on from here.i'm sure you'll do a great job :)

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NiksAngel Senior Member

Joined: 18 January 2009
Posts: 652

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Oh Damn...its starting...gosh after so many chapter...its still happenin...although m highly anxious abt the upcomin update m equally lookin forward to it...!!!

Although its unrequired but maybe 2 or 3 updates together will do wonders to my delicate heart Cry

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vrinda-95 Groupbie

Joined: 10 November 2009
Posts: 95

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Brilliant!From the beginning of the chapter to the end the emotions Arnav  underwent was very amazingly portrayed.
Waiting to witness the storm blowing out;and i'm sure it will be absolutely mindblowing.

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LeenaRocks IF-Dazzler

Joined: 25 December 2011
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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Lin!! what was that!? Really! what was that!?

Girl ! do you realize you have put the very scene of the actual show to shame by weaving it up your way in this very tale?

I am amazed at just how remarkably this was externalized! 
The vivid images framing up in my mind was unquestionably of a greater impact than what was the case after i saw that in the show's backdrop!
There have been several works on this scene in IF from various writers ..and several ones which captures the aftermath of the scene! But i can promise there ain't a better one that had Arnav's pain captured so outstandingly as what we 'saw' today! yes i am deliberately using the word saw! as the pic and the scene that i read has got vastly etched in my mind... 

Gosh! that anguish! the torment that was oozing out was unbearable to read! 
The part where he was getting transformed was the best and was impeccably written! it rose the hair on my nape! I am just overwhelmed at the sheer intensity of the scenes! 
Okie! So we got what we have always been fearing of the most! 170 chaps and its here finally! an important climax(in your words) the infamous MU.. ah! how i detest the word! 

Wow! that was some vow! Whats next? I cant believe i am saying this... 170 chaps into the tale and it suddenly feels like it was all but an extended prologue! And that the actual story only begins now!  Can you imagine my excitement? No really!! i am struck with a sudden gush of excitement in anticipation of whats coming next! 
And i am all prepared to receive whats in store in the tale Lin! So!!! BRING IT ON!! Lets see what you got for us!! :)

Sorry i deliberately did not bring my lill fellas ... as i was not able to get myself to lighten up the mood! and more so because the cheeky ones were not able to help me this time given the emotions running so high! 

Lin! A brilliant update to the history of this tale! Marking it as the best scene ever!
Lass!! you really are something i tell ya! amazing! :) 

Edited by LeenaRocks - 14 June 2013 at 2:10pm

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-DobByDoDgeR- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Hope he doesnt hurt khushi...

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