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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 96)

rini_kat IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Oh no a storm is really approaching when everything is going normal

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sanamsky IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 6:36am | IP Logged
love it 

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storytellerm IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
loved it
will lordy lord misunderstand khushi what will happen
will shyam turn evil
update soon

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A_Soul IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 11:45am | IP Logged

Jumping Jumping Jumping... I am...!
Not because i m happy with the happenings but, THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I HAVE THOUGHT AND WROTE in my notes.. am so happy...yeee yes...!!!


"There is something beyond and between of The Truth The Lie…What all matter is, what you believe in…!!!"– Soul's Heartbeats

This is the thought that came in my mind after reading the update….
I don't know by this how much I am able to convey what I felt, but I hope it makes some sense…!


Chapter 169: Exposed

Superb… no words I have to tell how I feel in 1st portion of chapter..khushi's emotions, thoughts scripted clystar clear… BARVO..!! 

He paused. Was his sister really talking about Kushi? Or did he think that she was talking about Kushi because HE was thinking about Kushi? 


With an annoyed frown, Lord Arnav returned to the table and placed the glass on the table. He had to do something about this. He could NOT see Kushi in the arms of another man!

Ooo… I so loved to see you tadpta hua in pyaar ki aag..!

Linny… you are superb..its so flawless writing of yours that makes things so easy to imagine.. i always like to see the overlapping scenes, and I think it difficult when it comes to writing but you excel here as well..!
But I feel chap should start with 2ndporttion first and 1st portion later...!

"Outrageous!" exclaimed Kushi, "Tell me the truth: is Lady Anjali your wife?"

Ohh.. I can hear her so clearly..!!

"Did I?" the General pointed out, "Did I tell you or write in any of my letters that I was unmarried? You never once asked me, Miss Kushi, for me to give you any such answer as to my matrimonial state."

"My wife?" the General looked surprised, "How can I ask you to be my wife when I already have one?"

"Miss Kushi," the General began calmly, "You mistake me, again. You clearly did not listen to what I had asked you that night, it seems. Do you not remember? The exact words? I had asked if you would be the companion of my heart."

Damn… man..exactly what I thought of… use of unclear words in past… Wow..he is so damn good and so damn RIGHT!!

Kushi shook her head, frowning, "You are messing words with my senses, General!" 

That is the FACT too..!

"Had he now?" the General was amazed, "Foremost, I repeat, I did not propose to you. And secondly, for this I clearly remember, he NEVER once mentioned any intention of wedding you to me. In fact, he came there as though on a casual visit in escort of having fulfilled the order of the extra swords made by his sister, your aunt."

HE is so CLEVER MAN…!! One should learn from him how to play with words… Lovely!

.."Last day, when I met you at the Castle stable, you said you were a guest here! You had the vile audacity to lie then, didn't you?!"   

And she caught you…

Kushi was shocked, "Do you even HEAR what you're saying?"

Ohh its natural to misunderstood him,… listen to him Khushi..

"Stop fooling around, General," said Kushi, "Undeniably, there is something wrong with this entire game you are playing!"

Super line… n khushi in super rage..

"I play no games," said the General sternly, "It is you who are making it a game with your over-thinking."

Well hard to believe but its true… it is like 'Kshitij' – the line where we think sky is touching the land.. BUT it is not..!!

…, "At the ball! You danced with me and you spoke to me as though you had never known me! You even asked me my name when all long you knew it!!!"

She again caught you… now explain Gen.

The General paused, a shadow crossing over his face as the clouds covered the moon, "I couldn't reveal myself to you at that moment for you would have made a scene just like the one you are making one now. I needed to reveal myself to you at the right time by assuring you that what you had assumed about my intentions were wrong."

Oh.. Girl… this is something… so soso.. *silence*

"I cannot lose you again, Miss Kushi," said the General, hurt, "You do not is essential that you understand me." 


The clouds moved away from the moon and the light shone on his shadowed face, "What wrong has she done? She married me."

There was an evil glint in his eyes when he said those words and Kushi felt unsettled. Without a moment's pause, she stepped away. 

Oh O..the beast is awaking…. I think, He has taken khushi's question on him (personally), as he knows all truth.. she (Anjali) has not anything wrong by marring me, so what I am cursed..!

OHHH…. 3rd Portion..the BEST CONVO TILL DATE…!!
I have no words linny… U ROCK!

Let c what's in 4th Portion for us


He would have continued on with his to and fro ambling, if he hadn't noticed that his sister had left the place and there was another woman with the General.

Without another moment's thought, he moved away from the balcony and out of his room and then headed for the stairs.

Ok… so this is now nail biting..


Shutting the door, he leaned his back against it, indignation rising inside him, as tears of hopelessness stung in his eyes.

This is such a rare moment to see Gen like this..! 

Though you have scripted Gen's thoughts earlier too..but this time they were something else… and very much clean, like exact the way person in his situation reacts..

Under the clothes, wedged between his badged soldier hat and the painting of his wife's face was a stack of letters tied together with a thin string.
He took the stack out, shut his suitcase, slid it back under the bed and made for the door with the stack in hold.

Ouch… so what will he going to do with that?

He watched them burn, with cold determination, "Well, Miss Kushi," he whispered to the burning letters, "if by love I cannot have you, then by cunningness will I make you obey." here comes the other part of him, who is so desperate to get cure that now will not thought of good or bad..!

And Kushi? He smirked. Kushi was too pure at heart. She would not do anything that would hurt her Lady Anjali. The secret was safe.

I can see his eyes full of pain, anger n desparation… I cannot FAIL and I will GET CURED by hook or by crook.


Ohh there is 5th portion too…

"What the-!" he stared at the fire, burning with no pot over it and that was when he noticed the parchments burning at its heart.

As expected…. He saw them, n now he will get a one too to read, which will all mislead him… lets c

The heat from the furnace was doing him no aid, but he soon fetched a poker from under the furnace and knocked the burning parchment out of the furnace and onto the floor.


With regards and wishes that you fare well in battle, KushiKumari Gupta.


I love the path you choose… My Filmy (story) mind has totally not thought of this move of yours…  I JUST LOVE IT!

Lordy How much misunderstood Khushi or not I don't know, & I don't want to think over it currently… but one thing is for surethis love story is incomplete without HATE in it….



P.S Lin, You are like a 'KASTURI MRUG' (musk deer) who don't know her own worth… you are not aware what kind, what level of talent you are having in you!!


@READERS: 'Aaj Khush to bahot honge tum..haain' (Amitabh style)
Itna Looong update jo aaya hain..!!

And here comes the BG

Sach Bahut Hi Ajeeb Aur Garib Hota Hai Yeh Sach Aksar
Asaamaanya Adbhud Kalpana Se Bhi Zyaada Vichitra Hota Hai Yeh Sach Aksar
Woh Sach Jo Hume Naya Lagta Hai Anjana Sa Ek Jhalak Dikhake Chaunka Deta Hai Jo Hume
Use Ajooba Maan Ne Lagte Hai Hum Aksar

Below two line specially for reader..
Sach Woh Bhi Jo Alaukik Hai Hamari Samaj Ke Baahar Aur Usi Ka Darr Lagta Hai Hume Aksar
Aur Sach Ka Nakab Pehne Hue Kuch Na-Mumkin Kisse

Ahistha Ahishta Wakiye Sach Ban Jaate Hai Aksar
Aisa Hi Ek Na-Mumkin Kissa Asamaan Adbudh Akalp Andekha Anjaana Aparichit Kissa
Sach Hone Ja Raha Hai Ek Khatarnak Sach

A Dangerous Game Is About To Begin.


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momoahmd IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
its not happening it???
i hate u general Jha...hate u...
such a thrilling update ...
misunderstandng between arhi...sigh...
but waiting 4 their good times...
many many prayers n wishes 4 ur father's health dear...
InshaALLAH he vl get well very soon...
m the first one...
woww...the above comment was 4 da previous update...
4 this one m excited n little bit least he ix making khushi his irrespective ov whatever da situation ix...
lovd both the updates dear...
thnxxx 4 pm...

Edited by smartgirl9009 - 14 June 2013 at 12:57pm

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
linny i have been waiting for this turn since the women in the black hoodWink...Patience pays...and I am sure mine would be double bonus.BTW Arnav's frustration,helplessness,anger and all other unnamed emotions were awesomely portrayed by u little one...Brilliant!!

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awesomeee yaarrr...keep rockinggg

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