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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 94)

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
Rabba ve dear Aquiline,
 
 
Wow!!! What a chapter!!!... Hats off dear!... That was AWESOME!!!... Clap Clap Clap
 
 
When I read the line, "After many years, it was coming again."... you cant imagine how excited I became to know about the transformed Lordy... Embarrassed Your description about the physical and mental changes inside him during the transformation was very apt... The transformation appeared so realistic and very natural... Brilliant writing. Clap And the transformed Lordy, as expected, was all "royal" and "magnificent"... in all his four legs. Wink
 
 
P.S Im super happy about how the way things are proceeding. Its a little weird, but im feeling all excited now, not an ounce feeling depressed about the misunderstanding. Embarrassed May be the effects of Lady in the Dark hood around... Wink
 
 
P.S.S. Actually I came to the inn to write a few appreciative words about the General and some strong points in his favour, after seeing him in an entirely different light in the last update. But as a pleasant surprise, I was welcomed with a transformed Lordy... Embarrassed Now im sure, all readers must be in a daze. Let them come out of it first and then i'll try to write a comment on the General. Wink

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Nice update! So he is gonna marry her...but i seriously dont like this MU marriage...not in original story...every time i come across this scene i feel bad...let this phase just pass early as possible...but more troubled days to come for khushi 

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
Hello there!! I have spent the better part of the last 2 days reading this FF - all 170 chapters of it in one shot with minimal sleep. And I have to say this...
I came across this FF several times in the past few months and always skipped it cause I have never been a huge fan of medieval sagas and moreover I was having a real hard time picturing Arnav in the middle ages with no BB, Bluetooth or laptop!! I was pretty convinced that I will not really enjoy this story. Finally I decided to cave in and read a couple of chapters to see if I like it. Needless to say I was totally wrong!!! This is by far one of the best stories written on IF. Wow!! And the best part is that while reading thru the whole thing, not once I felt that the story is dragging. The quality of writing has been as consistent as in the beginning - really fantastic. You should consider converting to a book after all is said and done. Although it seems like you still have a long way to go with the story. I am guessing the forced marriage is next although I wonder what he is going to use as leverage to get her to agree.
I noticed you mentioned in your last update  that the story going forward (post marriage?) will be your take on it - I am glad that you have decided not to follow the show - I am having a hard time picturing Khushi-Arnav and the swami drama!!!
Keep up the great writing and keep us happy!!! 

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
Rabba ve,
 
 

"It is by choice and not by chances that we change our circumstances."                                                              ...  Nadia Sahari, Breakaway: How I Survived Abuse

 
 
Lord Arnav Singh Raizada... (Ch:170)
 
 
"There was only one thing he could do. Bind Kushi to him.
 
Lord Arnav stood up and clenched his fists, If he wants to get to Di or Kushi, he will have to get through me first..."
 
 
General . Jha... (Ch:169)
 
 
He watched them burn, with cold determination, "Well, Miss Kushi," he whispered to the burning letters, "if by love I cannot have you, then by cunningness will I make you obey."
 
 
Dear Lordy and General...
 

"Destiny is not a matter of chance; it is a matter of choice. It is not a thing to be waited for, it is a thing to be achieved."                                       ...William Jennings Bryan



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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MONAKARAN

Hello there!! I have spent the better part of the last 2 days reading this FF - all 170 chapters of it in one shot with minimal sleep. And I have to say this...
I came across this FF several times in the past few months and always skipped it cause I have never been a huge fan of medieval sagas and moreover I was having a real hard time picturing Arnav in the middle ages with no BB, Bluetooth or laptop!! I was pretty convinced that I will not really enjoy this story. Finally I decided to cave in and read a couple of chapters to see if I like it. Needless to say I was totally wrong!!! This is by far one of the best stories written on IF. Wow!! And the best part is that while reading thru the whole thing, not once I felt that the story is dragging. The quality of writing has been as consistent as in the beginning - really fantastic. You should consider converting to a book after all is said and done. Although it seems like you still have a long way to go with the story. I am guessing the forced marriage is next although I wonder what he is going to use as leverage to get her to agree.
I noticed you mentioned in your last update  that the story going forward (post marriage?) will be your take on it - I am glad that you have decided not to follow the show - I am having a hard time picturing Khushi-Arnav and the swami drama!!!
Keep up the great writing and keep us happy!!! 
 
Rabba ve Mona... Welcome to this fantastic land of Arhasia... Hug I guess our dear comrade Soul and our dear story teller Aquiline will be welcoming you officially tomorrow. But, since I saw your all-excited post at this late night hour, I couldn't resist welcoming you. Embarrassed Loved your genuine, super excited post... Join the club and enjoy your stay in Arhasia... Heart
 
 
P.S Lin, can you see the highlighted part of Mona's post?... Wink Tongue

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
This is the history...
I'm dead... Wow!! Don't have words to explain...
The pain, tears, feeling of betrayed were amazing...

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
awesome witeup .

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Oops I am feeling the same that I felt when in the Show we saw Arnav's breakdown.It was so heartbreaking.
So Its now Arnav weds Khushi.
I agree now Lin's version of IPK starts.
Let the ride begin!

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