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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 93)

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Brilliant!From the beginning of the chapter to the end the emotions Arnav  underwent was very amazingly portrayed.
Waiting to witness the storm blowing out;and i'm sure it will be absolutely mindblowing.

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Lin!! what was that!? Really! what was that!?

Girl ! do you realize you have put the very scene of the actual show to shame by weaving it up your way in this very tale?

I am amazed at just how remarkably this was externalized! 
The vivid images framing up in my mind was unquestionably of a greater impact than what was the case after i saw that in the show's backdrop!
There have been several works on this scene in IF from various writers ..and several ones which captures the aftermath of the scene! But i can promise there ain't a better one that had Arnav's pain captured so outstandingly as what we 'saw' today! yes i am deliberately using the word saw! as the pic and the scene that i read has got vastly etched in my mind... 

Gosh! that anguish! the torment that was oozing out was unbearable to read! 
The part where he was getting transformed was the best and was impeccably written! it rose the hair on my nape! I am just overwhelmed at the sheer intensity of the scenes! 
 
Okie! So we got what we have always been fearing of the most! 170 chaps and its here finally! an important climax(in your words) the infamous MU.. ah! how i detest the word! 

Wow! that was some vow! Whats next? I cant believe i am saying this... 170 chaps into the tale and it suddenly feels like it was all but an extended prologue! And that the actual story only begins now!  Can you imagine my excitement? No really!! i am struck with a sudden gush of excitement in anticipation of whats coming next! 
And i am all prepared to receive whats in store in the tale Lin! So!!! BRING IT ON!! Lets see what you got for us!! :)

Sorry i deliberately did not bring my lill fellas ... as i was not able to get myself to lighten up the mood! and more so because the cheeky ones were not able to help me this time given the emotions running so high! 

Lin! A brilliant update to the history of this tale! Marking it as the best scene ever!
Lass!! you really are something i tell ya! amazing! :) 





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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Hope he doesnt hurt khushi...

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
wow what amazing update


plz continue the next soon

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Great update
Uff arnav please ask before you do anything

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Rabba Ve dear aquiLINe,

lovely as usual written brilliantly.  The pain that Lord Arnav is going through was literally felt.

I liked the below line though.
 If he wants to get to Di or Kushi, he will have to get through me first...

hugs
Bablio

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Hi dear how are you n ur dad?
Another beautifull update hmmm so lordy lord is ready to face general
Have faith  on you dear will waiting to read ur version of ipkknd Smile
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Tc

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
I know I have not commented in a long time, just caught up on the last few chapter since you went on your break. I am really enjoying this story and now that you have promised to add your own twists I am very excited.
Thanks for sharing this amazing story.

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