Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 78)

Breath-Mark IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 18 June 2012
Posts: 10778

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged

Welcome back! I know im really late. But better late than never. LOL
I read the updates back-to-back. 
And the last update has left me wanting for more. Is it going to be like the terrace scene where Khushi slaps Shyam after the revelation? 

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


zonera1 Goldie

Joined: 14 December 2011
Posts: 1902

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Rabba vey Lin!
A nice update I must say highlighting us the importance of the task Lordy has entrusted to Khushi.This task is I believe gonna be the reason for the second climax.In fact I am sure of it.
Anjali teasing Arnav was so refreshing as was Kushi realizing that she is in Love!
I believe the real thing starts now as Kushi now knows that General is Anjali's hubby.
Meera n U are rite Lin,The time is fast approaching when U will start rectifying every thing that went haywire in the show.The re enacting of most of the scenes have been done and now the real surprize starts coz uptill now we had a fair idea how the tale is progressing.
So I will say what I said at this point in the show: Let us buckle our belts for a bumby ride.
PS:Thanx a lot for mentioning me.Its means a lot to me!

Edited by zonera1 - 10 June 2013 at 10:31am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


bea_rom Senior Member

Joined: 13 July 2012
Posts: 796

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Just Read the last 3 chapters
Loved them
Lord Arnav saved her again
Love how you rewrite the most intense parts of the story

What Will Khushi do now? Will she tell Arnav?
Can't wait for the next update and thanks for the PM

And also congrads for your exams and your new job

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


TRND86 Senior Member

Joined: 14 March 2012
Posts: 702

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 10:39am | IP Logged
OMG we are finally here Lin! I  have been waiting for this point in the story. You have been amazing with your narration throughout. I have told you before and I am going to keep telling you that you are an amazing writer. I do apologize  for not keeping in touch and commenting frequently but life happens. I am looking forward to your spin on the story now. I am so excited that it is a little hard to contain about now. Have fun writing and I am sure I'll enjoy it a 100 times more reading. Clap

P.S. I would also like to thank the members who PMed me the updates and who posted it on your behalf in your absence. This is such a wonderful community and I am glad to be a part of it. Heart

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


rini_kat IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 July 2011
Posts: 6161

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
nice update.Finally Khusi came to know about General's wife...Love the way u introduced this truth to Khusi...Its better than show...

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


namita11 Goldie

Joined: 30 September 2012
Posts: 1489

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
So khushi found out the truth
Will arnav?

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


ShrutiPandey Groupbie

Joined: 09 July 2012
Posts: 189

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Khushiii ... yeah dear! you're right! He's the same jerk.. Big smile you finally got him! Thumbs Up

LoL LOL I know..the next chapter's going to be a bit too serious but Im just sooo happy after reading the last part in this chapter! Clap 

Anjaliii diii.. you're a darling for giving the hint to our Lord!! Heart 

Wednesday right? Im so ready Aquuaaa! bring it on! and try giving the General a better thrashing from Kushi if possible! Wink (you know how much we hate him)

*dhishooom* to you General! Angry
Just one thing! the General in your update is actually in love with Lady Anjali.. poor soul! Ouch

Lord Arnav.. gear up! Time for some action! Wink *rubbing my palms* 

Edited by ShrutiPandey - 10 June 2013 at 11:11am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


aparnav Groupbie

Joined: 28 October 2012
Posts: 125

Posted: 10 June 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Hey,aquiline! My dear,u are an amazing narrator.i came across this ff just a week back!i finished the whole thing in a go jst now! Can u believe it! I have been a silent reader in IF fr almost an year now. .and this is my 1st time comenting,or rather replying. .your story nd narration forced me to come out f my exile! Thankyou so much for this wonderful ff! Looking forward to your 2nd climax!!and ofcourse,the whole story

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: Hina69   Replies: 58   Views: 63481

Hina69 58 63481 11 September 2016 at 8:28am by TANVI_SEXY
Arhi os:Khushi's chalenge to Arnav for arhi sangeet

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: Hina69   Replies: 55   Views: 55409

Hina69 55 55409 30 August 2016 at 5:27am by Jinitha55

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 156 157

Author: Aquiline   Replies: 1253   Views: 365184

Aquiline 1253 365184 18 January 2016 at 6:17pm by asgeet

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 147 148

Author: Aquiline   Replies: 1178   Views: 116695

Aquiline 1178 116695 04 March 2014 at 10:38pm by princessunara

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 140 141

Author: Aquiline   Replies: 1120   Views: 131585

Aquiline 1120 131585 29 January 2014 at 11:18pm by dpriyad

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index