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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 69)

rockprincess123 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
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Rabba Ve!! Dearest Lin, you could not have made me happier by arriving when you did and just in time for IPKKND's anniersay tooo! A heartiest and warm welcome back to you sweetheart and I am more than hoping that everything was well with you during your break. Now that you're back though, we ain't letting you leave again so easily after this! Embarrassed
Now that we have the pleasantries out of the way, I think its time to make a start on these updates, what do you say eh?
Chapter 166:
This chapter was one I could really feel the essence of. The way the events unfolded, from Khushi helping with arrangements, to her magnificent and splendid entry in her beautiful gown, the descending journey from her house to the castle was very well conducted and I could really imagine the frantic hustle that both the Guptas and the Raizadas must have been going through then.
I particularly loved the description about Khushi, her dress really was something magical and as usual, your flawless choice of words realy had rendered me speechless. Truly this goddess of mischief must have worked her magic because she certainly bewitched my eyes!!
Khushi herslf is such a versatile character and the fact that she is nearly just as grown up as Payal, yet is still a child at heart is a beauty in itself to marvel upon and I really was awed by the way you managed to portray the different depths of love that the Guptas have for each girl and their reasons beind them: Payal is loved for the maturity in which she is able to deal with things and her naturally quiet nature tends to unknowingly show people the simplicity of her personality, whereas Khushi is loved for her ever chirpy and bubbly ways and the manners in which she perceives life to make happy moments. Simply wonderful. Clap
One thing that stumps me with your writing all the time is the amount of effort you strive to put in, when it comes to really bringing creations to life and the artistic approach you have of making things so real. For instance, the wedding ceremonies and rituals in Arhasia. You have created a whole new world and environent where everything seems so apt and true that it gets to me. Every single time and a real kudos to you for developing Arhasia into such a magical place.
It is such a wonder to see how much the stoy has progressed, so much so that the Lords and Lady's of the land are going to tie the knot with some of the most respectful villages I , and I am sure they too , have come across.
I had such a smile on my face, taking in all the happiness of Payal and Akash's wedding, and damn, Lordy's description had me soaring on cloud 11!! His tuxedo was very fit for its purpose! Tongue
Then all came to a rest to know poor Khushi was yet again in danger. Go Lordy, go after her! Run like the winddd...!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shocked
Chapter 167:
I had a hunch you know Lin, before reading this that it would be an ArShi dedicated update and it sooo was!!! It never fails to amaze me how every time Lordy is always there to save Khushi from whatever threat may pose to her without any restriction, hesistation or second thoughts. Yet he denies his feelings. Hm... DENIALLL... *singsong voicee Wink*
Ever since their dance at the ball and their ever sensual growing proximity between each other occured, both of them seem to have looked upon this... this "thing", this unnamable factor between them in a different light and I seem to think it was the ball night itself that triggered these feelings in them both to occur.
The dance brought out newer feelings in Arnav's heart for Khushi whilst it opened up a posibilty of something that could be called love between them in Khushi's as she already had a heart to acknowledge something more than a hateful attraction between them.
I loved the depth of the magnitudinal love in this scene that was soo blatantly obvious through Arnav's behaviour that I wanted to slap him sooo hard to see the truth. I mean really, is he that oblivious!? The fact that you combined too very crutial and key Rabba Ve's in this update was a pleasure and it only came to my attention now how much they both seemed to fit so well with each other. Big smile
Arnav's concern for Khushi was heart warming and he seems to have an aura of posessiveness about her now that he has softened towards her considerably.
Who would have thought a ring would become the most sensual piece of metal in existence! Just the simple motion of putting a ring on someone's finger could bind them forever eternally without any of them knowing, yet in this case I am aware of Khushi's knowledge on this matter but not on Arnav's. Of course he does not believe in rituals yet he willingly partook in one. Hypocritical much? Big smile Go get her bordy boyyy!!
So this means that the Raizadas have officially bounded the sons of the castle on a double note, on the same day at pretty much the same time. Arnav and Khushi' relationship is soo much more advanced and developed tan Akash and Payal's, yet it is still such a baby if one can compare the amount of time it took for their relationships to be found and acknowledged.
Wonderful two updates honey, as usual. Star A brilliant comeback from yourself and a pleasure to read. Lots of love, Noor :)) xxx

Edited by rockprincess123 - 09 June 2013 at 10:19am

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music1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Linny  what a beautiful update...loved his concern and her naivety...his possessive way of sliding the ring was beautifully written.And a special thank u for the pics:)...u do a great job too

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rini_kat IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Nice it...

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dhrashtee Goldie

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Loved the update... warms up my insides when Lordy Lord and Khushi is present together... I am not really looking forward to what is to come but will keep my faith in you and hope things turn out better than they did in the show. Will be waiting for the next narration!! :)

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ShrutiPandey Groupbie

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
I've always enjoyed reading this fiction for the simplest reason! It has the same base as the real IPKKND but still whenever you read it, it seems different and fresh! Smile 

Aquuaa! you're a blessed writer babe! Heart
all's going so well these days that I hope the after marriage updates wont be difficult..specially for Khushi! well, all well's as long as ARSHI are together! right? Wink 

Thanks for the update dearo! Big smile

Edited by ShrutiPandey - 09 June 2013 at 1:01am

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Mouktika Groupbie

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
I loved it every phase.I was reading in a bit tense mode but ur clarification gave a hope to enjoy it thoroughly.

The way u described the whole accident scene of Kushi is so wonderful I had a feeling like Iam watching it scene by scene sooo good.

So atlast Arnav is engaged to Kushi wether he acknowledges it or not.Iam happy that it was willingly done by her.hope I can watch all these scenes on screen.

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rockingsoni Goldie

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Ohh, lin, every time u update, u take us to a fairy land...
simply superb...
seems, like they really came a step closer..though, its still a looong way to go...
waiting for the wedding to start...

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khareshelley IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 11:46am | IP Logged
superb awesome update..Smile
so they are engaged indirectly...Smile
love his concern for khushi..Smile
waiting to know more...SmileSmileSmileSmileSmile

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