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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 59)

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 1:27am | IP Logged

hi!!!...

lovely chapter!!...

it was pleasant and warm to read the conversation of the sisters and the brothers...

Winter was settling in and, though there would not be snow, the cold winds would keep blowing every day for the next few weeks.

i like the visual the it creates and to imagine hw this land this would look during this period...

n the "cold winds" ...is it a reference to something that is gonna happen?>...will the consequence stretch over weeks?...will the warmth sway away from our dear arhi n their families?!!...*overthinking one little line*...


 "And together beget a family of Mischiefs?" Payal was appalled, "I am afraid I cannot let that happen! One mischief-maker is well and fine, thank you."

LOLLOL...i really liked payal's line here!!...

i loved all the descriptions payal had for khushi's man...but, i could not definitely say that lordy came into my mind with the description...

lordy will be the man, but, he has a long way to go before ful-filling these dreams of payal...he will protect her from hurt, but, what abt the hurt he gives her?

i wonder, what khushi will be thinking?...

the only man she thinks of is lordy, but, she will remember contradicting things abt lordy nah?...

"Love is magic."

 "Bother I even asked!"- LOLLOL...i really liked this comeback!!..lordy style!!

i loved all the descriptions and flashbacks lordy had!!...n let me tell u, the whole part had me feeling totally fuzzy inside!!...beautiful lines dearie!!

n yes, akash , she would be worthy indeed!!..she will "Earn" her way into her heart!!...n im worried what all she would have to face before ur brother realises that she owns his heart!!...

  "Finally! It is time." 

good and bad, happy and sad, beauties and beasts, full moons and cold winds, love and hate, truth and lies, sisters and brothers...with all this in my mind, i give up on thinking and get ready to enjoy ur beautiful writing...


i loved it as always!!HugHug

waiting for more!!...

p.s : thanks for the update aura dear...

n an official "welcome back" hug to u my dear lin!!WinkHug

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Linnie, this is not a comment for your chapter because I haven't read it yet. This is to present you a gift I have worked upon all day. Errm, all day because I just didn't do it in one go, not that I'm that slow in doing things.

Anyway, here it is.




Welcome back, Aquiline.


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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maverickmartin

Linnie, this is not a comment for your chapter because I haven't read it yet. This is to present you a gift I have worked upon all day. Errm, all day because I just didn't do it in one go, not that I'm that slow in doing things.

Anyway, here it is.




Welcome back, Aquiline.


 
I couldn't have agreed anymore with you Mav! You really do have a wonderful talent of portraying a real insight to stories with your mind-boggling pictures!
 
I know it must mean so much more to Lin that it does to me but I could not help myself here, you have me stumped. It really is beautiful!! :)) xxx

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Rabba vey... A lovely chapter...nd welcome back Lin...

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
All the updates were awesome
I must say u r amazing writer love ur writing skill waiting for next updates.
All The Best For Exams.

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Yay u r back. this feels great :)

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Posted: 03 June 2013 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Peda

HI

I have a confession to make...EmbarrassedI was "one of those forum readers" who stayed away from this particular ff because I found the title off putting.

However last night I finally succumbed and decided to give a few chapters a try. Well I read the whole of last night and today to finally catch up to the current chapter.
 I was totally hooked.

I cannot explain how captivated I was by your story that even my bathroom breaks had to be dire  emergencies.

I now see that you couldn't have given your ff a more apt title.

I really can't  wait to read more and I sincerely pray that other forum members give this a try because it really is worthy of more readers.


I am usually a silent reader but I can honestly say that there were quite a few chapters where I could see myself commenting.
I really like the way you engage the reader in your style of story telling.

looking forward to future updates

ps Welcome back
 
Rabba Vey Peda... (I hope I can call you that)
I feel so good that in spite of not liking the title, the question of 'why this title' brings you her and you came to give it a try... n see its worth it, right?
 
On behalf of COC, I soul, welcome you in WORLD of ARHASIA.. where the mystery continues..!!
Make your self comfortable in INN and feel free to interact with all of us..!!
Soon you will get your welcome msg from storyteller herself... till that time, Innkeeperbhaiya - take care of our new reader-mate!
 
P.S - @Bold: Hai na, hai ha... Hi-5 for that... I wish the same.. they don't know what they are missing..!
P.S.S. your username reminds me of one of the Guajarati sweet.. (plz don't mind)
 
Enjoy ur ride
H
Soul


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