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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 45)

riti4u IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged

Hey lovely dear comrades and lin..Smile

Its been really long that I have commented here...was caught up with other places here...but it is always a peaceful and relaxing feeling to hear lin's story...
Thanks so much Aura for updating..and thnks a ton hoopoe fr letting me know ...
I have caught up with 3 chapters...still 2 are pending...will be giving a combined comment on all chapters...
Lots of love...

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cheval IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Awww awesome thank u so much

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zainza IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
ohhh...this ended too soon...i was completely engrossed.
and now i'm waiting for whats gonna happen with that gown that she would hate it so.

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rockingsoni Goldie

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Wawo, I loved each n every gown in the picture...
Just awsome..
n the update, as usual, too nicely n precisely written to be commented upon..
waiting for  next...

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kaur94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Great update
Can't wait for the next one

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hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neevankrish

is tat gown too revealing or WAT????y doesnt KUSHI like d gown???
LOL!... It has got nothing to do with the dress, dear friend. Just connect the last line of the chapter with Lord Arnav and Khushi's earlier dreams (from Ch-92, Late night thoughts), you'll get the answer.
"And that is how she came to choose her gown for her sister's wedding night. Little did she know that she would hate that gown for the very reason why she had loved it."
Lord Arnav's dream:

He closed his eyes and leaned back in his chair and saw her, in front of him, standing with her back to him, between Lavanya and her village sister. She was dressed in white like a bride and a long veil concealed her black tresses. Lavanya and the other girl were straightening the white gown on Kushi and the three girls were laughing and jesting as they readied her. And then Kushi turned as though to face him. Her eager eyes on him, she smiled innocently.

"Is it time?"

He frowned.

She had a bouquet of red roses in her hands and she held them close to her waist. She was still smiling at him but he was not looking at her, as she waited for him to answer her.

His eyes were on the roses. They were dripping. With red blood. And the blood was spilling onto her gown, staining the perfect white with dark red drops.

Khushi's dream:
She curled next to her sister and shut her eyes.

She saw him looking down from his window to the sunlit ground where she stood.

As she stood watching, he climbed out of the window and, using a vine creeper that grew alongside the Castle wall, he slid down to the ground, his boots landing with a hard thump. He turned around and walked towards where she stood alone, dressed in white, her head covered in a white veil, the end of which trailed on the grass behind her.

With each step he took to approach her, his eyes pinning her rooted to where she stood, her heart raced and to calm herself, she pressed her hands on the bouquet of roses she was holding.

And then he was standing before her, towering in all his height and glory, his eyes drinking in the charm of her face.

He lifted his hands and she closed her eyes. His hands cradled her face but did not linger. His palms were wet and he swiped then upon her cheeks and then he moved his hands away.

She opened her eyes and found him smirking down at her. She looked down at her gown, the blood from his hands which he had wiped on her face was now dripping dark red drops onto her spotless white gown……

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hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged

Rabba ve dear Aquiline...

Thanks for giving us an yet another cute interaction between Lordy and Khushi... where his eyes did all the talking and her heart understood it... That was one unexpected interaction, with Lordy's obvious display of emotions through his eyes and khushi's submissive acceptance for his wish...
He was staring at her, lost and bewitched, his burning gaze taking in every inch of her, from the hem of the gown to its neckline as the gown remained held before her. His gaze slid from the gown to her face and she saw how the light in his eyes swirled with rapture.

He neither smiled nor nodded. But she knew. She knew he had liked it.

And that is how she came to choose her gownfor her sister's wedding night.
He is still the haughty and proud Lord, but has become more comfortable and less restrained around her so as to show his spontaneous emotions unmasked in front of her. She is still the clever, mischievous girl who hates his arrogant attitude but has learned to look beyond that and has found a beautiful, caring, teasing, passionate heart hiding within.
"Love is when you look into someone's eyes and see their heart." ... Jill Petty

Though both are strong-headed and hold on to their ideologies very strongly, i feel, at present they have decided to keep all their differences aside... for once listen to their heart, trust one another and enjoy the pleasures of the overwhelming emotions they feel for each other... One of the enchanting quality of LOVE over the "newly smitten" lovers... when, anything and everything around them looks so beautiful and romantic... where eyes speak and heart listens... even the smallest gestures screams about loads of love, care and possesiveness... The Magic of Enchanting Love!!!... especially "new-found" love!!! Embarrassed

" There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness "  ... Friedrich Nietzsche

Well, we know what is stored for these two poor souls, the next day. Its going to be one hell of a day for them... But im glad, you are extending this day and evening as long as you can and helping them create some pleasant memories to be saved in their hearts forever, that can be cherished in their hard times to come... Broken Heart

"No relationship is all sunshine, but two people can share one umbrella and survive the storm together." ... Anonymous

P.S Thank you dear Aquiline and Aura for providing us with surprise updates. Love you both... Your exams on 23rd? Hardly ten days left!!! All the best for exam preparations... Heart

Edited by hoopoe - 13 May 2013 at 8:43am

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gayatri_y

Beautiful update...though I always wonder...why not lips????
why he always try to avoid lips...what is the reason behind that????

Ermm I dont know what has Lin's reasons behind it one might be as the recent update revealed the sanke like tongue and the other I think kiss on lips is something too precious and it means always something deep and held some promises unsaid one too so may b thats y...

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