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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 44)

hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged

Rabba ve dear Aquiline...

Thanks for giving us an yet another cute interaction between Lordy and Khushi... where his eyes did all the talking and her heart understood it... That was one unexpected interaction, with Lordy's obvious display of emotions through his eyes and khushi's submissive acceptance for his wish...
He was staring at her, lost and bewitched, his burning gaze taking in every inch of her, from the hem of the gown to its neckline as the gown remained held before her. His gaze slid from the gown to her face and she saw how the light in his eyes swirled with rapture.

He neither smiled nor nodded. But she knew. She knew he had liked it.

And that is how she came to choose her gownfor her sister's wedding night.
He is still the haughty and proud Lord, but has become more comfortable and less restrained around her so as to show his spontaneous emotions unmasked in front of her. She is still the clever, mischievous girl who hates his arrogant attitude but has learned to look beyond that and has found a beautiful, caring, teasing, passionate heart hiding within.
"Love is when you look into someone's eyes and see their heart." ... Jill Petty

Though both are strong-headed and hold on to their ideologies very strongly, i feel, at present they have decided to keep all their differences aside... for once listen to their heart, trust one another and enjoy the pleasures of the overwhelming emotions they feel for each other... One of the enchanting quality of LOVE over the "newly smitten" lovers... when, anything and everything around them looks so beautiful and romantic... where eyes speak and heart listens... even the smallest gestures screams about loads of love, care and possesiveness... The Magic of Enchanting Love!!!... especially "new-found" love!!! Embarrassed

" There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness "  ... Friedrich Nietzsche

Well, we know what is stored for these two poor souls, the next day. Its going to be one hell of a day for them... But im glad, you are extending this day and evening as long as you can and helping them create some pleasant memories to be saved in their hearts forever, that can be cherished in their hard times to come... Broken Heart

"No relationship is all sunshine, but two people can share one umbrella and survive the storm together." ... Anonymous

P.S Thank you dear Aquiline and Aura for providing us with surprise updates. Love you both... Your exams on 23rd? Hardly ten days left!!! All the best for exam preparations... Heart

Edited by hoopoe - 13 May 2013 at 8:43am

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gayatri_y

Beautiful update...though I always wonder...why not lips????
why he always try to avoid lips...what is the reason behind that????

Ermm I dont know what has Lin's reasons behind it one might be as the recent update revealed the sanke like tongue and the other I think kiss on lips is something too precious and it means always something deep and held some promises unsaid one too so may b thats y...

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Hey guys just while typing the above reply one thought pooped up in my mind the snake and sattan thing right? so one side of this tale is as we all believe and shared our views of right but just now as Lin described his tongue to be like snake so may be that pic indicates that the snake(thts Lordy) will always be behind Gen in his every move and he will be above him means he will have above hand or victory as to put it in right way... i know its just bizarre thought but couldnt help but sharing it.. 

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hoopoe

Rabba ve dear Aquiline... congratulations for achieving "the Dazzler crown"... Clap
And, thank you for giving us once again, such a beautiful chapter... sprinkled with symbolic hints...
The Loutra... of Lord Arnav and khushi... Wink hmmm... so if we are proceeding to witness their marriage...Day Dreaming... then, logically speaking it must have preceded with an engyesis too... But I don't remember witnessing any such ceremony... or...Wait, OMG!!!... Did the engyesis took place at the ball night?!!!  
An engyesis at the ball night... without a mundane red rose or a glass of milk... but sharing some ethereal moments alone in his room... he, showing a glimpse of his heart's deepest feelings and passionate desires to her and she, silently acknowledging and approving him... a "necklace" instead of a "ring"... binding their souls and not mere hearts...
What can we do without u Hoopoe yaar I havent seen that chapter in this light wohoooClap u r so damn right... it all makes sense..
And, today, they enjoying their own little loutra...  I guess, Destiny is systematically preparing them to push them into the waiting hands of "Holy matrimony"... I love this way of these two, fulfilling the pre- marital wedding ceremonies in their own unique, "Imperfectly Perfect" style... Day Dreaming Wink
 Hai me too the imperfectly perfect couple
Lord Arnav's bipolar temperament... I suppose, that's because of the constant war going on between his "Desirous Heart" and "Rational Mind"...
War or fear I doubt on both
I guess, he is confused and perplexed by the complexity and magnitude of his feelings towards khushi... Since it is not a simple "tug of heart" or a mere "physical attraction" or a divine "connection of souls"... its a combination of all the three. And, I guess, for the first time in his life he is scared that he might lose control over him, in front his overwhelming, overpowering emotions for khushi...

 Totally agree... he is fearing of the ice he has  created inside him to melt as the emotions are warm enough... he is fearing to see dreams of life with happiness as he has lost hope of having one(in my opinion)
He is always a "Man of power and control"... and never allows anyone (not even the curse/beast in him) to take control over him... He despise being felt "weak and helpless"... and thats what exactly happening to him these days when he is around khushi... So, its natural for him to get affected by her at first, then slowly gain control over his emotions, then appear irritated and act unaffected... and, finally, as a perfect "Lordy" try to blame "khushi", rather than "his feelings" for khushi...


DO i need to say how I find ur comment naaa but still I loved it

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kushipugly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Rabbave dear aquiline.
plz pardon me as i was already not vgood in giving detailed comments & now with my absence from the forum for many weeks, i  have completely gone into a silent reader type mode plz pardon me.
just finished reading chapter 146-150.
Chap 146-shyam despices fathers be it any father? his curse is related a a little girl who sheds blood tears but is his curse related to his father too?
khushi can no way tell shyam shashi is his father , shyam is lying & he surely musat have dig into details of khushi to get her easily.
wonderful excecution of a father's concern & his fight for her daughter.
Chapter 147: respect for lady lavanya. Not once she harbored ill feelings for khushi but gracefully accepted the fact & sproved herself to be worthy of being called Lady. RESPECT.
Chapter 148: i laughed so hard that i fell from  the sofa reading this chapter. Jayprakash flirting n proposing a girlShockedConfusedROFL
i wish this would have happened in ipk too, what a treat it would have been.
thankyou dear aquiline, for writing this chapter & fulfilling one of our dreams for ipk.
Chapter 149: So Lord Akash stoodup like a true man of honor  for his love & proposed Payal Clap
Both the raizada brothers were there for shashi even before shashi's own family. Akash has openly declared his wish to be in gupta family but its Lord Arnav who unknowingly is behaving like a true soninlaw. Proud of khushi for making a tough firm mature decision in this critical time to not stay in raizada castle.
Chapter 150: I m speechless!!!
u nailed this chapter, every emotion , all details perfectlyClap loved it!!

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Swaatii Goldie

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
thanks for writing the parts

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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
again a brilliant update...sense heart break coming kushis way ...hope she stays strong...continue soon

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siamesecat IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the pm hoopoe dear otherwise I might have missed another update. Ah the the dress choosing scene relived so beautifully by aquiline. Amazing and beautiful like always.

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