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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 39)

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
A QUIL -AUR A- A SOUL -HOOP OYE

THESE CHAPTERS WITHOUT YOU ARE NOT AS CHOCOLATY AS I 

WISH THEY WERE 

NOT THAT THE CHAPTERS LACK ANYTHING BUT I MISS YOU 

LADY A QUIL Smile

AUR A IS DOING A BRILLIANT JOB [ KEEPING ME ALIVE ]Thumbs Up

HOOP OYE IS DOING WONDERS [ PROVIDING OXYGEN ]Hug

A SOUL I MISS YOU 

THE PULSE OF THE STORY IS IN RHYTHM 

THE BEAT IS IN TUNE 

THE PRESSURE IS UNDER CONTROL 

159 -160 -161 -162 -163

THE UNFORTUNATE BUDDING FRIENDSHIP  WITH THE EVIL

 CONNIVING DEVIL GENERAL  [EWWW] SHAAM

THE PRAKASH SIBLINGS N MISS KHUSHI ENJOYING  A LIGHT 

MOMENT 

LORD AAKASH PLAYING A COMMON ROMEO ROLE N ASKING

LORD ARNAV TO ASSIST HIM IN HIS HOOPLA 

HIM AGREEING TO SNEAK PEEK AT THE 'BEGGAR GIRLS' 

OWWW HOW THE LORDY IS CLEAN BOWLED 

THE GREEN MONSTER IS ON HIS HEAD 

LORD ARNAV CAN'T SEE THE 'ADORABLE BEGGAR ' TWIRL

 AROUND WITH SOME ONE ELSE 

OR IS HE TAKING 'I AM FAMILY ' TOO SERIOUSLY 

ITS A FIGHT TO DEATH SCENARIO HERE 

THE WORRY DID WONDERS IT TOOK THEM A STEP AHEAD 

WITHOUT THEIR KNOWLEDGE 

LOVE NEVER HAPPENS AT FIRST SIGHT IT TAKES ENOUGH 

SITTINGS TO GET INTO IT [ MY VIEW ]

LORD ARNAV N MISS KHUSHI ARE GOING THROUGH 

THESE ENCOUNTERS TO REACH THE UTMOST ''DESTINED

TO BE TOGETHER''

HER GENUINE WORRY TOOK HIM BY SURPRISE MORE THAN 

SHOCK , SHE WAS OUT OF HER MIND WITH WORRY

HE WAS SO SO SO AMUSED N TOOK ADVANTAGE OF HER 

VULNERABILITY N GOT KICKED FOR IT 

HE TURNED THE TABLES N GAVE IT THE NAME OF 'TEASE'

N TEASE HE DID THE ADORABLE BEGGAR HAD HER HANDS FULL

COVERED IN THE SWEET CHOCOLATE SYRUP MAKING HIM 

EAT FROM HER PALM LITERALLY 

HE IS IN TOTAL DENIAL YET PLAYING ALONG 

SHE CANNOT HIDE HER FEELINGS N IS ANNOYED WITH

 HERSELF  

THE DARE N SCARE IS THE RULE OF THIS GAME 

THEY DARE WITH DARING N THEN SCARE WITH WORRY

OWWW HOW I AM LOVING IT ESPECIALLY THE IMAGE OF A RED 

HEART IN THE CHOCOLATE SYRUP 

RED IS THE ADORABLE BEGGAR N CHOCOLATE IS THE LORDY


THANKS LADIES 



AAJ KI BEHAS KE LIYE HUM DHANYAVAAD DETE HAIN APNE 

LEKHAKON KO AASHA KARTE HAIN KI ''ASAR'' JALD DIKHEGA 

NAMASKAR Approve



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Miss u
Amazing chap dear

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[Chapter 160
Awesome update... So Jay Parakash is feeling bad coz they were not be allowed to attend the marraige as he wanted to make notes for his own... Khushi has indeed a sharp memory she has seen lightening just for once
but she even then remembered her... So shyaam has lied tht he was visiting castle as a guest... No khushi u r not silly the stalls r indeed for the permanent members of castle... Its just Gen. Who is twisting the realities... Loved the update lin thank u for taking out time even in ur busy study schedule

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OH MY GOD! How did I miss all these chapters! :O
Off to read them!

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We part, but we will meet again! until then, best of luck to you! Smile

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Originally posted by mcmelina

loved it!
i think i have missed few initial chapters so can anyone tell me under what curse first lord is??
 
Dear mcmelina,
 
His curse details were not completely revealed yet. I'll try to summarize some basic facts revealed about his curse, so far in the tale.
 
 
His curse includes physical transformation and beastly hunger. But his transformation part is not shown so far in the tale. His tongue has a scorching quality (probably due to his curse)...
 
 
His beastly hunger includes unappeasing hunger and in worst situations even craving for fresh blood/flesh... Here is an extract from ch: 28. It highlights his curse nature, its effects on him and his struggle to not succumb to the curse demands... Hope it helps you...
 
 
Extract from Chapter 28: In the night
 

He smashed his fist into his door, stumbling over the scraps and remains of the food he had consumed a few moments ago. Panting, he leaned against the door, straining to not let his mind succumb to his need.

 
I can't, I shouldn't, he kept telling himself, but he couldn't hear his own mind. It was like he was no longer there. His tongue burned with an unquenchable hunger that the diminished abundance of food from the pantry could not appease. He was breathing faster; he wanted to taste something alive. Something that had a live vein, provoked by a beating heart.Growling, he tried to hold onto a self-control he was far from reaching. He sank to the ground and buried his head between his head trying to keep his jaws clenched. His hands reached for the belt in the darkness and his trembling fingers struggled to bind it around his mouth. He was sweating terribly and he exhaled raspily. He was buckling the belt at the rear of his head when his hands, on their account, tore the belt off his face and threw it to the ground.
 
 
With a hungry growl, he was on his feet and his huge sweating hand had found the door handle. Yanking it open, he was soon thundering down the stairs, his eyes roving the dark inside of the Castle as he made his way downstairs. As soon as he had stepped off the last stair, his head turned to the right. To where he could scent the sleeping couple...something stirred within him. His consciousness. And then he was racing for the huge doors to the night outside.
 
 


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Rabba ve dear Aquiline,

 
Thank you for giving us such a "cute"... errm... "naughty" update... Embarrassed
 
 
Two pairs of love birds... one pair (Lord Akash & Payal), bathing in the warmth of their "tender, serene love"... the other pair (Lord Arnav & Khushi), swirling at dizzying momentum, caught in the tempest of their "passionate love"... One pair gracefully tasting the rich yet gentle sweetness of strawberry, while the other pair drowning in the unfathomable lustrous pool of bitter-sweet chocolaty syrup... That was so thoughtfully written... Clap Wink
 
 
A "porcelain bowl" for Lord Akash/ Payal and A "wine glass" for Lord Arnav/ Khushi... Hmmm... Interesting!!!... And, khushi broke a "glass bowl"?!!!, but her blunder was rectified immediately by Lord Arnav and he even saved her from being questioned for her folly?!!!... Brilliant!!!...Thumbs Up Symbolisms subtly forecasting the future events?!!!... Wink
 
 
And, why does Lord Arnav always act so desperate (or obsessed) to eat from Khushi's hand (or from her body)... Earlier, he forced her to feed him his breakfast, then he ate those wild grapes from her body and now he made her feed him chocolate syrup... Why???!!! Was it only for punishing/teasing her? Was it only because of the mere attaraction he feels for her? Or is there some invisible force pulling him towards her and tempting him to eat from her hands?!!!...He always force her to feed him. I wonder what will happen on the day when khushi willingly feed him with her hands?!!!... Will it have any favourable effect over his curse of beastly hunger?!!!Day DreamingEmbarrassed


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Chapter 161
loved it... so Akash wanted to meet Payal though it was forbidden for the bride and groom to meet after loutra... he asked Akash to help him out... Arnav being Arnav didnt feel the need to see the face of ur beloved even one day before ur marraige well if Akash had put his request like bhai shall we go to village festival u know there will be music and laughter and yes Laughter made me remember there will be KHUSHI JI and then Arnav would havent said anything in no well he agreed to his brother request in the end lolz but main ny thorda drama add kr diya which I m sure Lin would have never done as she is a superb writer ... 
BANG ON these two always collide into each other ... 
lOLZ no doubt Khushi u r one of ur own kind... one second u were inquiring lordy y he was there and next moment u ran to enjoy ur ass off on music lolz.. u liked her dance lordy ohoo... but u didnt like her dancing with boys why why KAIYKO? jealous hoi gawa Arnav babuwa buaji ka ? he is taking u to somewhere JAHAN KOI ATTA JATTA HI NAHI lolz
Answer her Lordy why did u bring her away from her dancing group... kahin khud to nahi dance krna chahtay? both of them are unbelievable Khushi thought it was Arnav who brought Akash here as Akash is such a nice lord and Arnav is a devil one lolz...I loved how khushi said YOU R FAMILY NOW well thats true
"You adorable beggar!"
really Lordy well I have just read Adorable and hai in his husky voice wao

You're''" Kush struggled to find words, and then she gritted her teeth, "I hate you. I always will."

"And I will keep you that way," said Lord Arnav, "I will like nothing but hatred from you."

"Oh really?" she smiled, "Are you suggesting that I should change my tactics then?"

"Do you think I am?" said Lord Arnav casually, crossing his arms before his chest.

Kush blinked, "No, I meant are you'.." She paused and then frowned, "You're snide, you are! Talking in circles and trying to trap me by my own words!"

"Trap you?" Lord Arnav gave a deliciously innocent look and Kush felt her heart skip, "Why would I try to trap a girl who voluntarily makestraps and falls into them herself?"

"I don't," said Kushi in defense, and then to not look at his face, her gaze slid back to the crowd. Lord Akash was nowhere to be found.

"Oh dear goddess mother!" Kush exclaimed, "I hope Amma has not come to know he is here!"

She looked at Lord Arnav, "And you! I am going to make sure nothing horrid has happened and in the meantime, you better find your brother and take him home."

And with that she rushed in the direction of the festival and Lord Arnav stood beside the tree, smiling at the sight of her running away. He knew she wasn't running to save her sister. She was running to escape him.

and this part I loved it sooo much I can say it ever and ever again Lin u r such a talented writer even while busy in examz u are giving such awesome updates... u r the best

THANK U SO MUCH LIN FOR WRITING EVEN DURING PREPARATION FOR EXAMZ AND AURA FOR POSTING AND HELPING US HAVE PEACEFUL LIFE IN ARHASIA

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