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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 38)

DrNoureen Senior Member

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
OH MY GOD! How did I miss all these chapters! :O
Off to read them!

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DrNoureen Senior Member

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
We part, but we will meet again! until then, best of luck to you! Smile

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hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mcmelina

loved it!
i think i have missed few initial chapters so can anyone tell me under what curse first lord is??
Dear mcmelina,
His curse details were not completely revealed yet. I'll try to summarize some basic facts revealed about his curse, so far in the tale.
His curse includes physical transformation and beastly hunger. But his transformation part is not shown so far in the tale. His tongue has a scorching quality (probably due to his curse)...
His beastly hunger includes unappeasing hunger and in worst situations even craving for fresh blood/flesh... Here is an extract from ch: 28. It highlights his curse nature, its effects on him and his struggle to not succumb to the curse demands... Hope it helps you...
Extract from Chapter 28: In the night

He smashed his fist into his door, stumbling over the scraps and remains of the food he had consumed a few moments ago. Panting, he leaned against the door, straining to not let his mind succumb to his need.

I can't, I shouldn't, he kept telling himself, but he couldn't hear his own mind. It was like he was no longer there. His tongue burned with an unquenchable hunger that the diminished abundance of food from the pantry could not appease. He was breathing faster; he wanted to taste something alive. Something that had a live vein, provoked by a beating heart.Growling, he tried to hold onto a self-control he was far from reaching. He sank to the ground and buried his head between his head trying to keep his jaws clenched. His hands reached for the belt in the darkness and his trembling fingers struggled to bind it around his mouth. He was sweating terribly and he exhaled raspily. He was buckling the belt at the rear of his head when his hands, on their account, tore the belt off his face and threw it to the ground.
With a hungry growl, he was on his feet and his huge sweating hand had found the door handle. Yanking it open, he was soon thundering down the stairs, his eyes roving the dark inside of the Castle as he made his way downstairs. As soon as he had stepped off the last stair, his head turned to the right. To where he could scent the sleeping couple...something stirred within him. His consciousness. And then he was racing for the huge doors to the night outside.

Edited by hoopoe - 10 May 2013 at 4:49pm

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hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 4:50pm | IP Logged

Rabba ve dear Aquiline,

Thank you for giving us such a "cute"... errm... "naughty" update... Embarrassed
Two pairs of love birds... one pair (Lord Akash & Payal), bathing in the warmth of their "tender, serene love"... the other pair (Lord Arnav & Khushi), swirling at dizzying momentum, caught in the tempest of their "passionate love"... One pair gracefully tasting the rich yet gentle sweetness of strawberry, while the other pair drowning in the unfathomable lustrous pool of bitter-sweet chocolaty syrup... That was so thoughtfully written... Clap Wink
A "porcelain bowl" for Lord Akash/ Payal and A "wine glass" for Lord Arnav/ Khushi... Hmmm... Interesting!!!... And, khushi broke a "glass bowl"?!!!, but her blunder was rectified immediately by Lord Arnav and he even saved her from being questioned for her folly?!!!... Brilliant!!!...Thumbs Up Symbolisms subtly forecasting the future events?!!!... Wink
And, why does Lord Arnav always act so desperate (or obsessed) to eat from Khushi's hand (or from her body)... Earlier, he forced her to feed him his breakfast, then he ate those wild grapes from her body and now he made her feed him chocolate syrup... Why???!!! Was it only for punishing/teasing her? Was it only because of the mere attaraction he feels for her? Or is there some invisible force pulling him towards her and tempting him to eat from her hands?!!!...He always force her to feed him. I wonder what will happen on the day when khushi willingly feed him with her hands?!!!... Will it have any favourable effect over his curse of beastly hunger?!!!Day DreamingEmbarrassed

Edited by hoopoe - 10 May 2013 at 5:49pm

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Chapter 161
loved it... so Akash wanted to meet Payal though it was forbidden for the bride and groom to meet after loutra... he asked Akash to help him out... Arnav being Arnav didnt feel the need to see the face of ur beloved even one day before ur marraige well if Akash had put his request like bhai shall we go to village festival u know there will be music and laughter and yes Laughter made me remember there will be KHUSHI JI and then Arnav would havent said anything in no well he agreed to his brother request in the end lolz but main ny thorda drama add kr diya which I m sure Lin would have never done as she is a superb writer ... 
BANG ON these two always collide into each other ... 
lOLZ no doubt Khushi u r one of ur own kind... one second u were inquiring lordy y he was there and next moment u ran to enjoy ur ass off on music lolz.. u liked her dance lordy ohoo... but u didnt like her dancing with boys why why KAIYKO? jealous hoi gawa Arnav babuwa buaji ka ? he is taking u to somewhere JAHAN KOI ATTA JATTA HI NAHI lolz
Answer her Lordy why did u bring her away from her dancing group... kahin khud to nahi dance krna chahtay? both of them are unbelievable Khushi thought it was Arnav who brought Akash here as Akash is such a nice lord and Arnav is a devil one lolz...I loved how khushi said YOU R FAMILY NOW well thats true
"You adorable beggar!"
really Lordy well I have just read Adorable and hai in his husky voice wao

You're''" Kush struggled to find words, and then she gritted her teeth, "I hate you. I always will."

"And I will keep you that way," said Lord Arnav, "I will like nothing but hatred from you."

"Oh really?" she smiled, "Are you suggesting that I should change my tactics then?"

"Do you think I am?" said Lord Arnav casually, crossing his arms before his chest.

Kush blinked, "No, I meant are you'.." She paused and then frowned, "You're snide, you are! Talking in circles and trying to trap me by my own words!"

"Trap you?" Lord Arnav gave a deliciously innocent look and Kush felt her heart skip, "Why would I try to trap a girl who voluntarily makestraps and falls into them herself?"

"I don't," said Kushi in defense, and then to not look at his face, her gaze slid back to the crowd. Lord Akash was nowhere to be found.

"Oh dear goddess mother!" Kush exclaimed, "I hope Amma has not come to know he is here!"

She looked at Lord Arnav, "And you! I am going to make sure nothing horrid has happened and in the meantime, you better find your brother and take him home."

And with that she rushed in the direction of the festival and Lord Arnav stood beside the tree, smiling at the sight of her running away. He knew she wasn't running to save her sister. She was running to escape him.

and this part I loved it sooo much I can say it ever and ever again Lin u r such a talented writer even while busy in examz u are giving such awesome updates... u r the best


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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 7:03am | IP Logged
very good update...well written...please continue soon..Smile

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Sarikaa97 Goldie

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Smileawesome update!!

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zainza IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
wow...what a "chocolaty" update.
loved it

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