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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 147)

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
Very emotional!!! I hope the misunderstanding is cleared soon between arnav and khushi!!!! Awesome story!!!

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_Soul

Originally posted by BARUNODAYA

Did any comrades can hear the alert ring bells alarmingly in the inn these days.. Look like someone is constantly sneaking in to the inn secretly..


rabbave to all the comrades and to lin for now..soon the time comes dearies..


<font color="#ff6600">RAbba Ve.. (what should i call you?)</font>

<font color="#ff6600">If i am not wrong you are a new reader, isnt it?</font>
<font color="#ff6600">I thought, there is some one behind that door.. i felt a shadow over me... hmm so it was you!</font>Wink

<font color="#ff6600">Come in dear... you are welcomed!!</font>


yes it was me..myself mili..thnx for the warm welcome..i hve noticed you too in the inn..fascinated by the love n interest you listened to the tale which i hve also fell in love wit instantly..

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
i loved especially the way you described sashi's thoughts and feelings not forgetting the flashback when kushi was young...overall an awesome update...continue soon...waiting for my LORD's appearance with his Lady...

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Good chapter, though I think General should stay right there and not mess further...! 
As for Khushi's dream, it was very cute...

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Missed arnab snd khushi still great

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
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Wasn't expecting this bit to be this intense and soulful!
But you did make it just that Linny!

Ah! i dread the impending moment now! well i really do not know should i dread really!!? coz i do not know what reaction to actually expect from the family members after they learn the case! 

I am lill saddened with the update ... I almost cried with Payal's and Shashi's monologues! 
It stirred up the raw emotions in me ...  especially the flashback of a 8yr old Khushi... 

I hate this law of world! 
Why do girls need to move away from their parents? why do sisters need to part? 
Why should we grow up at all!? were'nt we doing just good within the cocooned shell of maa and dad? did'nt it make us feel proud to see our lill sis grow up under your care and shower requited love in abundance? 
Amidst all these one thing i sure know and cherish till the end of me is that there is nothing close to being sisters who are the apples of parent's eyes!  

aww! i am no good to write in this mood! i gotto go! :( 


Edited by LeenaRocks - 25 June 2013 at 10:22am

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
excellent

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
res...lovely chapter...will most certainly come back to comment in detail...

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