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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 141)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aquiline

Originally posted by A_Soul

Getting married to him this way had been wrong and she knew she was in immense trouble for falling into this maniacal trap, but she could not dream of belonging to any other man than him.
She faltered for a moment, sitting on the horse, not because she was on the back of a live horse but because she realized she was fooling herself.
He doesn't love me. I read his kiss wrong. I wanted there to be love and thought he loved me but he really doesn't.

I was so keen to hear these confused thoughts of her' thank you linny!!

Strangely, I was thinking of you my dear Heta, when I wrote this part...
 
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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 3:49am | IP Logged
I have completely over-thought the General. I actually made him more sinister and calculative in my mind. I thought he wanted the marriage between Arnav and Khushi to happen, because he does not harbor special feelings towards the girl, only the fact she is his cure leads him to think of her as someone precious. So I thought that instead of taking the risk of actually trying to take her away (which would be unlike the really cautious, intelligent General of my mind), he would let Arnav keep her close, and in turn, close to the General himself by taunting Arnav like that after the latter bought the rings.

Ah, I had it all wrong. Can't even laugh at how grossly wrong I was.

This chapter was needed. Payal's nervousness as a bride, yet she worries about her younger sister. Manorama's disgust at her son's choice, yet she is happy that he is finally a husband. Buaji's words that Khushi had a knack of surprising them when they least expect it.

And the General - does he really not know just how much Arnav loves his sister? Like, a million times more than his brother? The sister is, was and will always be the priority. He should have kept a closer look on his brother-in-law, knowing how rash and hot-headed he could be. Looks like he did miscalculate things.


Edited by maverickmartin - 25 June 2013 at 3:51am

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:10am | IP Logged
RABBA VE...

Amazing update Lin.. was curious to knw what was happening in the south temple..
u in a very simple and in a very subtle way beautifully  described the worry of a father towards his darling princess..and i loved how his fatherly instincts were warning him again and again tht smething bad is happening with his daughter..
But i am sooo glad tht despite having a fear that Lord arnav might be the reason behind his worry towards his daughter, he still end of the day believes that ONLY HE can protect her too..

A BIG CONGRATS TO LORD AKASAH AND MISS..oops LADY PAYAL SINGH RAIZADA *cheers to thm* may god bless them both..

Now m soo eager to see how General Jha reacts once he finds out where the first lord and khushi is.. and what exactly they did *wink*

PS: Lin i knw m not being tht regular in commenting these days cause i read the chaps at odd times.. as m just done with my exams and roaming a lot being free frm studies :P 
so really really really sorry.. but when ever m home and on9 would definitely share my views on the updates..GAIN BADA WALA SORYYY...

AND THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... Heart         

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
awesome
loved it
arhi less chapter bust still loved it
update soon
just cant wait to read more

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
That was a brilliant chapter... Shashi's faith in Arnav n trust in Khushi wrote well... Fortune knw what hpnd to them?nw can we get a confrontation bw Arshi n Gen?

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Ohh, wawo...
nicely displayed, n the emotions portrayed..
Somewhere, Master Gupta, knows what is happening...n the good thing is he trusts Lord Arnav...
Fortune, also had a feeling that something happened at the north temple..
waiting for the family's reaction, once they come back..
but will they confront General, first..I have a doubt...
waiting for next part, Lin...
Nicely written..

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 5:08am | IP Logged
wow..an awesome update..really very good...intriguing and a interesting update..thank you for the PM and please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..Smile

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Shashi's feelings and that flashback was so emotional

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