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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 139)

Bentley Groupbie

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 4:50pm | IP Logged

Loved the update!  No Arnav and Khushi.  Acquiline you are an amazing writer.  


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dimishra Senior Member

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
now reading...
dear aquiline, the link is not working, it takes to the 1sdt page again

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-DobByDoDgeR- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
No arshi:(
Great chapter though
Cant wait for more

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vidya.sanjay Goldie

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
Must appreciate MasterShashi for he handled this situation in a very delicate way.For once he did not doubt his daughter.All he and Payal thought were about Khushi's safety.that was so heart warming.
Anxious for the next update.

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hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Rabba ve dear Aquiline,
That was a beautiful chapter... Clap and, Congratulations on the 175th... Hug
Master Shashi... I don't have any words to praise this wise, adorable father. Khushi is indeed very lucky to be rescued and brought up by such a great man... He is caring, protective, composed, analytical, inquisitive, perceptive... Clap He deserve to be the father-in-law of the Lords of the land. Approve
"But I don't know how to swim..." Kushi's voice was feeble.
"Nonsense!" said Shashi firmly, "It's a dream. Everyone knows how to swim in a dream!"
That was brilliant... Star Im sure these very words of wisdom is going to give khushi, the drive to fight through and survive the nightmare of life she is going to live from today.

"I believe that what we become, depends on what our fathers teach us at odd moments, when they aren't trying to teach us. We are formed by little scraps of wisdom."
                                                                        ... Umberto Eco, Foucault's Pendulum

Master Shashi nodded, Yes, that is why I consented to Lord Arnav's request. Because I know, that if Kushi is safe anywhere, it is in the Castle, with him as her husband'...'He will keep her safe from the unknown that I fear.  
So my guessing after reading the last two chapters was right. The Lady in the dark hood was so earnest to get them married, not because his time for healing has come but because she need to be protected now... its khushi's safety, that's the priority of the moment. Ofcourse Lordy will be benefitted by it later, but the reason for this hasty union is mainly to entrust khushi in the safe hands of her rightful owner... her guardian... her protector... her husband.
The day when he clasped that necklace over khushi's neck, he unconsciously signed himself to be her protector... and today, destiny has cleverly created situations to enforce him to take up his duty officially, by wedding her lawfully... Clap
(Shass... this is for you. My thoughts on him clasping the necklace on her neck on the ball night... you may find it interesting. Wink)
Its interesting to see how khushi always guides him unknowingly in the right path, unknowingly luring him to her side so that he is also benefitted by the blessings showered upon her... be it the rituals or the holy fountain water.

"Well, you are marrying her and by marrying her you are involving in the ritual yourself," pointed out the hermit imperturbably, "Whether you like it or not, you are being bound by the rituals along with her."

She heard water sloshing and looking over her shoulder, found that he had stepped into the fountain as well. There was no way out now. In her frantic attempt to run away from him she had walked right into an enclosure.
He made her his "Pawn Queen" and strengthened his side... and in turn she gained her life time guardian, which has strengthened her side... Till today, it was his physical strength and clever mind Vs her green heart and wise mind... But now, both are on the same side of their life's chess board... Inspite of their inner disputes, their duo is very powerful at the moment. But lets wait and see for the black knight aka General to make his move and lets see how far he can use the black king aka Lady Anjali to his advantage... Wink
Anyaways, the hints clearly suggest who'll rise and who'll fall in their lives... Smile
Shadow grunted and stared up at the dim, empty North Temple looming before him, and he watched the two figures climbing up the many steps to the Temple platform.
He turned on his heels and climbed down the steps of the Temple, the hair over his forehead blowing in the wind.
P.S. Im very disappointed with the General's tactics and  strategy... I mean, for God's sake... He is a "General"!!!...Shocked Why can't he make the first move? He waited for Lordy to make the first move, stalked  him and openly confronted him boasting upon the fact that he knew Lordy's moves?!!!... Shocked He even blurted out his plan?!!!... Shocked That's unbelievable... Confused Which sane man will blurt out his game plan to his rival?!!!... Was it his overconfidence or did he underestimate his rival? In either ways, very poor tactics General... Thumbs Down I had very high hopes on you...Unhappy and now, he is keeping an eye on Fortune to find out the reason and direction for the sudden change in air in his surrounding? I mean where is that alert, cunning, proactive General. Jha?!!!... Disapprove  Ermm

Edited by hoopoe - 24 June 2013 at 7:12pm

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Rabiabegum Senior Member

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
Very emotional!!! I hope the misunderstanding is cleared soon between arnav and khushi!!!! Awesome story!!!

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_Soul

Originally posted by BARUNODAYA

Did any comrades can hear the alert ring bells alarmingly in the inn these days.. Look like someone is constantly sneaking in to the inn secretly..

rabbave to all the comrades and to lin for now..soon the time comes dearies..

<font color="#ff6600">RAbba Ve.. (what should i call you?)</font>

<font color="#ff6600">If i am not wrong you are a new reader, isnt it?</font>
<font color="#ff6600">I thought, there is some one behind that door.. i felt a shadow over me... hmm so it was you!</font>Wink

<font color="#ff6600">Come in dear... you are welcomed!!</font>

yes it was me..myself mili..thnx for the warm welcome..i hve noticed you too in the inn..fascinated by the love n interest you listened to the tale which i hve also fell in love wit instantly..

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seshatree IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2013 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
i loved especially the way you described sashi's thoughts and feelings not forgetting the flashback when kushi was young...overall an awesome update...continue soon...waiting for my LORD's appearance with his Lady...

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